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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey...this is just awesome...loved it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome starting ...
i love taarey starting in relationship
update soon ...pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
hello friends,
i hope you had a great day..
and i also hope that you all enjoyed reading my ff...
as i have heard, palki stated that amar and shakti that D3 was written fo rthem onli... really it will be very disheartening for mr if taani will be treated as side character, and kriyaansh will be made to patch up...
guya as such its something personal, but i would like to share with you, i know how it feels when u love someone, and he doesnt reciprocate the same feelings. and earlier too taani's love for rey ws the best for me in D3... and now if taarey wont be given that desired space then i m surely gonna stop watching D3...

Anyways... here is the fourth part...

Rey and swayam goes into swayam's room, and closes the door.
swayam: haan rey, bol kya baat hai
rey: yaar, taani ko dekh ke main bhul hi gaya tha ki maine aaj kriya ko bhi wahi usi industries mei dekha tha
swayam gets tensed...
rey sensed it...

rey: but yaar, tu chinta mat kar, ab mere and taani k bich koi nahi aa sakta. is baar main taani ko main khud se dur nahi jane dunga.
swayam smiles: rey, tu sach mein mera best friend hai... mere bina kuch bole mere mann ki baat samajh gaya...
i really thought, ki meri behen se uski saari khushiyan fir se kahin dur na ho jayen..
rey: swayam, ye tu kaisi baatein kar raha hai??
,main sirf taani se pyar karta hun,... manta hun kriya kabhi meri life mein thi, but wo pyar nahi sirf ek attraction tha, kyunki jo cheez main taani k liye feel karta hoon, wo kabhi bhi maine kriya k liye feel hi nahi kia tha...
taani se 2 years dur rehene k baad bhi wo har pal mere sath thi, uske bina main incomplete feel kart atha... bt kriya ke jaane ke baad haan main sad tha qki mujhe aisa lagta tha ki usne mujhe dhoka dia, and all... but the thing is jab taani meri life mein aayi tab maine realise kia ki jo main taani ke feel karta hoon wo bahot special hai...

jo jealousy maine taani ko shivam k sath dekh ke feel ki thi, wo kabhi kriya ke liye feel hi nahi ki thi...

swyam has teras in his eyes...
he suddenly hugs rey and says: meri behen bahot lucky hai ki usey tere jitna oyar karne wala koi mila hai...
rey: nahi yaar!! lucky toh main hoon, ki taani is pure world mein sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai...
swayam breaks the hug and says:
chal ab sote hain, warna kal late ho jayenge... kal A.P. Industries k sath hamare life ka sabse bada contract sign karna hai...
(the scene is, after watching D3's dance, saket was highly impressed, and after knowing that it is none other than taani's bro's group, he decided to make a contract with them on permanent basis... so the next day is the deal signing...)


Next morning...
taani wakes up due to the sunlight falling on her face...
taani: hey krishnaji, thank you thankyou so much, mujhe wapas apne bhai and apne rey ke paas bhejne ke liye...
rememnering rey she remembers last nights her talk and hug with rey and she blushes😳
taani: kya taani, aaj office ke first day hi late hona hai kya??
chal uth and jaldi se ready ho ja...
after getting ready, taani goes to the kitchen and started making breakfast...
on the same time rey wakes up and feels thirsty so he moves toward kitchen...
after reaching kitchen, he first notices taani and is mesmerised beyond any limits...

taani is wearing a office gown, with hair open, and is looking stunning...
unknowingly he starts moving towards taani...
taani sensed someone's presence in kitching and sees up, and finds rey moving towards her...
unknwon to taani she starts moving backwards, and then rey holds her hand, and pulls her towards himself, and hugs her...
rey: taani you are looking stunning...
taani blushes: thank you...
rey breaking the hug places a kiss on her forehead... and moves from there...

after some time, reyam comes towards dining table, and
taani: gudmorning bhai
maine breakfast bana dia, aplog kha lijiyega, and office k liye late ho raha hai, isliye maine apna breakfast kar lia.. ab main chalti hoon, and aplog se 11am pe office mein milungi.. bye... tc...
reyam shocked:
rey: yaar swayam ye taani ko kya ho gaya hai??
tujhe reply kat=rne ka mauka bhi nahi dia,...
swayam; i m happy yaar... mujhe meri behen wapas mil gayi... meri cutely wierd taani...


after sometime, reyam gets ready and leaves for the A.P. Industries... when they reach there, they see that the gang has already reached there... after greeting each other, they all move towards the reception area...
the receptionist tells them to wait in the conference hall, as the CEO and the Md will be there in few minutes...
till now nobody knows that kriya is also working in the same organization as taani...

taani and saket enters conference hall, and greets the gang... and finally they sign the contract...

the gang is happy as this is the life time opportunity for them... and moves from there to celebrate their successs...

after office... saket and taani also joins the gang...


Precap: Kriya and Taani meeting... and Heart to Heart talk between sharon and taani...
(GUYS HERE IN THIS FF SHARON IS ON TAANI"S SIDE, AND SHE WANTS TAAREY TO BE TOGETHER... AS SHE THINKS KRIYA DOESNOT DESERVE REY AND ALSO TAAREY HAVE FACED A LOT OF PROBLEMS TO BE WITH EACH OTHER)


so here, is the 4th part... i hope u all enjoy reading...
i know ff is moving slowly, but considering the intensiity of the situation i.e. entry of taani and kriya back in rey's life as well as in D3.. its very important to take evrything very clearly and smoothly...
please lemme know what do yopu all thinkk about this parrt!!








































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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
wonderful update dear😊
& lines u write before
the update about ur
feelings 4 d3
i appreciated it
& u know when taani exit
i dont watch this
show😡
now cmng to the
update so our cutely
weired taani is back finally 😆
reyam conversation was
awesome 😊 😊
&rey defines how he feels 4
taani that part
was awesome &taarey
morning scene was also
good 😳 😳
now plzzz update soon 😊
nai to next time i will give
short comment
hehehehehe
am just joking okkk😆 😃
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
hey dear i read all the parts of ur ff and really loved them to the core...i hope ke show mein bhi esa hi ho 😉
Update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much guys... its ur replies and comments that motivates me alot to pen down my imagination about D3...
i really appreciate the way you guys make me feel... thanks alot...
so heres the next update...

PART 5:
Celebration for the bi g day of D3 was over and evryone returned to thier homes...
It is next morning...
As the day before taani afta making breakfast for swayam leaves for her office...
at office:

taani: so mr. sharma (her assistant) yesterday you helped me with the details and background of the company... and also showed me the way round...
from today i want to start my actual work for which i have been appointed...
Mr. sharma: sure mam, as you say...

taani: okay!! so starting with i want the financial reports of last 10 years and also ask the financial officer to come and meet me in the conference room with her team in 1 hour...
mr. sharma: sure mam...
taani: okay!! you can leave now...
mr. sharma leaves...


after 1 hour, conference room:
taani enters the conference hal
mr sharma is already there preparing for the meeting

taani: mr. sharma, where is the financial officer and her team??
mr. sharma: mam, i informed her and may be here any moment...

just then there was a knock on the door
taani: come in
taani was facing back to the door, so when kriya entered she dint see her..

kriya also dint know that taani is the new CEO, as she dint attend the function yesterday in order to avoid the gang.
kriya: gudmorning mam, i m kriya ghai, the CFO of this company...
on hearing this name, taani becomes shocked... and suddenly turns and faces kriya...
even kriya is shocked to see taani there...
Kriya: tani??
now taani becomes more shocked thinking how does kriya know her!!
taani: kriya aap??
kriya: yes taani, i mean mam... i think we need to talk...
taani: mr. sharma this meeting is cancelled... i have simething very important to discuss with ms. ghai...

mr. sharma leaves along with financial team...

kriya: taani i know u must be thinking how do i knw you...
taani: haaan...
then kriya tells her how does she knows her...
on hearing this taani is surprised as well as shocked..
now she is sure that no one on the gang knows about kriya being in mumbai...

kriya: trust me taani... main tumhare and rey ke bich kabhi nahi aana chahti
taani: i know kriya bt i think i want some time to think over this matter... but 1 thing i m sure n that is u must meet the gang once, afterall they were all ur friends... if not rey..
kriya: no taani, i cant meet rey... i mean i know he doesnt love me and he loves you, but if he will come to know the real reason behind my leaving him and mumbai then he will not be able to take the stress..
taani: (sadly) u still love him.!! dont you??
kriya bends her head down...
taani: i can understand... i think i should leave...
taani leaves and kriya keeps standing there...

taani is in her own world of thinking and analysing things, when she bumped into sharon... who came there to meet her and have lunch with her...
seeing taani lost...
sharon: taani... taani... (no answer)
now sharon shakes taani
taani: haa.. haaannn...
sharon: taani r u alright...??
taani: yeah!! wo kriya,...
sharon: kriya???
taani: haan wo...
sharon: i knew it... wo zarur kuch na kuch karegi!!
taani: apko pata tha wo yahan hai??
sharon: no!! yesterday... now sharon teels taani what happend with rey and how he bumped into kriya and she ran from there...
taani feels happy... that even after meeting kriya and knowing that kriya is in the same city rey was with her...
sharon: babes!! where r ulost??
taani: bhabi.. i want to talk to you, please humlog kahin chal sakte hain...??
sharon: sure, mere ghar chalte hain... wahin baat karenge...
taani: okay!!
taani n sharon leaves office andf reaches sharon's home...

sharon: come... sit taani...
i wil get some coffee for both of us
taani: main bhi aati hoon,
sharon: no taani... main ramu kaka ko bol deti hoon coffee k liye, wo le aayenge...
then sharon asks ramu kaka to bring coffee...
and goes and sits besides taani on the same sofa..

sharon: ab bolo kya bolna hai
taani: bhabi... kriya mere office ki chief financial officer hai
sharon: what??
taani: haan... and she knows that me and rey were in relationship. and that even after our breakup rey still loves me, and even after being in mumbai from last 2.5 years, she dint meet any one of you, not even bhai who was her best friend...
sharon: r u sure taani...??
i mean when she ws nt here how come she know about you and rey...??/
then taani tells her what kriya told her...
suddenly tears starts brimming in taani's eyes...
and she says: bhabi, if rey's true love is kriya then main unke bich kabhi nahi aaungi
sharon: r u mad?? cant u see...
even after seeing kriya there he was with you.. and i know that rey onli loves you, as i have seen him missing you every day ib these 2.5 years..
taani.. just listen sweetie.. i understand tumhare dimaag mei kya chal raha hai... but just think logically rather than emotionally...\
rey agar kriya se pyar karta toh wo kriya se milne ke baad uska picha karta usey dhundne ki koshish karta.. but no... wo tumhare aane se jaise ekdum khush and wapas se purana wala rey ban gaya hai...
trust me taani...
he onli loves you..
taani: i trust rey's love for me... but kriya afterall thi toh unki first love... mujhe darr lag raha hai..
sharon: i yhink is barey mein tumhe rey se baat karni chahiye...
taani: hmmm...main koshish karungi...
sharon: thats like my good girl... chalo now have ur coffee... and tell about ur office experience... and also about ur friendship with saket.. tumne zada kuch bataya hi kaha
taani starts telling about her friendship with saket and her office experience... they chatted for hours... later at night taani went back home... and slept thinking how she will deal with kriya's situatiion.. and also that she needs to talk to rey as soon as possible...

huh!! here is the 5th part...
and i guess longest part too...
i hope u like the meeting of TRIYA and also nand bhabi ki talking...
please share ur views...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome chapter dear...!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
read all the chaps now
they are awsm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome update
taani n sharon convo loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Amazing chapter
Taani-kriya meet
Bhabhi nd nanad talk was the best part
LOve the duo
Update soon

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