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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Superb update
Kriya 😡
Omg loved swaron kiss
Aww taarey teasing swaron part was really nice
Plz update d next part soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
PART 11(B)
its the day of the diwali event

the boys are waiting near the enterance of taani's office:

nil: yaar ye gals kitna time lagati hain??
vicky: right dude... inhe koi time pe aana nahi sikha sakta
rey: chill guys, wo log aate hi honge...
nil: waise rey, tujhe tani ko dekhne ki jaldi nahi hai kya??
rey: ofcourse hain...
bharat: bhailog... rey ko taani ka hai intzar
amar: rey ho raha hai bekraar
vicky: tu inlog ko chod... tu ye bata ki tune taani ko propose kaise kia... humme se kisi ne bhi nahi dekha...!!

flashback:
it was the day when they decided to parda faash kriya in diwali event... evry enjoying rey and sharon left for their respective homes...


after going half way rey took u- turn and reached taayam;s house...
and climbed up to taani's room

taani ws smiling and talking to rey's pic in her hand
rey sees this and smiles widely

rey: photo se baat kyu kar rahi ho, jab main yahi hun

taani gets shocked...

taani: rey aap yahan
aap toh ghar chale gaye the na
rey: haan, but tumse kuch puchna tha, wo puche bina nahi ja sakta tha
taani: puchiye kya puchne hai

rey moves towards her, and taani gets tensed...
rey: taani daro mat main aise kuch nahi karunga
taani: nahi rey, i trust you, bt aapko kya puchna hai???

rey bendsdown on his knees in front of her...

rey: taani, tumhare aane se pehele main pyar ka matlab nahi janta tha... tumne mujhe sikhaya ki pyar kya hota hai.. tum meri dead life mein ek angel ki tarah aayi and mere life ki soul ban gayi... tum mera ek aisa hissa ho jo main chah ke kabhi apne aap se dur nahikar paunga...
kya tum mujhe apni soul k sath life spend ka chance dogi...??
kya tum lifetime k liye meri aur sirf meri banogi?? kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi taani??
will you maary me...???

taani has tears in her eyes ... she just bends down and higs rey tightly..

taani; haan rey, main apse shaadi karungi... i will marry you rey.. i wil marry you...

and then rey takes the opportunity and kisses taani on her lips...
rey: gudniyt taani.. love yoou...
taani: i love u too rey... gudnyt...

rey leaves...

flashback ends...

vicky: yaar is tarah se main apni kagu ko bhi propose nahi kia tha...
nil: rey tu toh bada romantic nikla
bharat: sab taani ka asar hai bhailog.
rey: blushes...

vicky: ab sharmana band kar
ye dekh gals aa gayi...


taani is wearing a red saree...
sharon silver...
aashi blue...
simmi yellowish orange
and rinni green...

gals comes near boys...
sharon: hey guys...
chalein andar???
bharat: haan, tu log ka hi wait kar rahe the...
taani: haan par bhai kahan hai...

RDX, swayam, and nicole comes there... before anyone cud say anything...
swayam: wo main sir n mam k sath plan discuss kar raha tha
thoda change hai... humlog kriya ko disclose nahi karnge... sirf uske saamne rey and taani ka love kitna strong hai ye dikhayenge...

rey: matlab??
RDX: humlog aaj ye announce karenge ki next week tum dono ki wedding fix hui hai, isse kriya ko ye samajh aa jayega , ki tum sach mei taani se pyaar karte ho, na kriya ko jealous karne k liye act kar rahe ho...

rinni: aur haan isse usko bura bhi nahi lagega.. afterall she is our frnd guys...
nil: kya baat hai, rinni.. aaj fir se sahi baat boli...

swayam: chalo, ab andar chalte hain...

they all go inside...
taani meets all her staffs and delegates and introduce them to the gang...

host: okay, now we would invite our CEO to lite the diyas and start the party
taani goes and lit the diyas.. and then
taani: hello guys, thanks to all of you, for gracing our celebration with your presence.. and the party begins...

host: i would like to request all of you, to join the dance floor...
rey goes towards taani and asks her a dance which taani readily agrees...

taarey are dancing on a rmantic no... nd dancing very closely..
rey's hand is on taani's bare waist... and taani's hands are around rey neck...

meanwhile kriya comes there... and burns in jealousy seeing taarey dancing soo close...
kriya; kar lo jitna dance karna hai taani mere rey k sath.. aaj k baad tum rey k aas paas bhi nahi dikhogi...

after the dance, swayam goes to the stage and takes the mike...

swyam: may i have ur kind attention please.. i have some important announcment to make (while taarey were dancing swayam's eyes were fixed on the door, he was waiting for kriya... the moment kriya entered he knew the time has come, so before kriya cud do anything, as soon as the dance finished he went to the stage)

so the news is two most important people of my life are going to bind themselves in the sacred relation of this world...
my sis taani and my best friend rey have decided to get married and their wedding id fixed for after exactly 5 days from today..
so guys hearty congratulations to the new couply... rey and taani ... taarey...

everyone in the hall claps...

kriya is shocked listening this news...
she thinks how can her rey get ready some one else... that too tani... does it really mean that rey loves taani... no this cant be true, rey is onli mine.. he onli loves me... i will talk to him...

evryone congratulates taarey... not for a single secong eother rey or taani were left alone.. some or the other was alwaz there, as the gang knew that kriya might hurt taani after hearing this news or she will definitely try to talk to rey alone...

it was almost after 1 hour. that rey was busy on some call. and was standing alone in a corner...

kriya goes to him...
after rey finishes his call and turns he finds kriya...
anger is very much visible on kriya's face...

kriya: rey ye kya hai,, aap taani se kaise shaadi kar sakte hain, aap toh mujhse pyaar karte hain na???
rey: nahi kriya, maine tumse kabhi pyar kia hi nahi.. main e hamesha sirf aur sirf taani se pyaar kia hai.. aur isiliye main usse shaadi bhi kar raha hun...
kriya: nahi rey, aap ye sab sirf punish karne ko bol rahe hain na.. mujhe pata hai ki aap sirf mujhse pyar kate hain.. us bitch taani se nahi...

nw as soon as kriya abuses taani, rey gets angry and shouts...
rey; KRIYYA... tumhe ek baat samajh nahi aati ki main tumse pyar nahi karta, sirf taani se pyar karta hun...
kriya holds reys hand.. but rey shrugs her hand starts moving from there..
now kriya gets more mad.. she forcibly tries to hug and kiss rey...
but rey slaps her and says:
main tumse pyar nahi karta main sirf taani se pyaar karta hun.. agli baar mere yaa taani k paas aane ki koshish bhi mat karna...
rey leaves...
kriya holds her cheek and starts crying...

swayam sees all this and feels sorry for kriya.. but he also know rey onli loves taani and no one else...

they all leave the office, and go their respective homes...
taarey: meri and rey/taani ki shaadi, finally ab hum ek ho jayenge.. hamesha hamesha ke liye...



next day:
its reys and taani's engagement...
engagement goes well... without any drama from kriya and shivam's side...
after engagement...

rey: swayam main apni hone waali biwi ko thodi der k liye bahar le ja raha hun..
swayam: ab toh main mana bhi nahi kar sakta.. theek hai par jaldi aa jana JEEJAJI...
rey: thank u SAALE...
reyam laughs...
rey takes taani and goes to his place where he has planned a surprise for taani..

when they reach to rey's room...
taani: rey yahan kyu laye hi mujhe??
rey gives taani a packet..
and says: taani isme ek dress hai jo maine tumhare liye banwayi hai so aaj tum mere liye wo pehnogi without giving any excuses...

taani goes to the washroom n changes into that dress but feels shy to come infront of rey...

taani is wearing this...


she steps out of the washroom... and rey watches her move upto him...
taani is feeling completely nakes under his intense gaze...
rey is completely lost in taani's beauty...
rey moves towards taani...

rey: puts the hair lock behind her ear and whispers into her ears..
taani u r luking too sexy...
taani blushes and tries moving from there...
but rey holds her waist. and comes close. and taani closes her eyes..
rey makes taani face him...
rey first kisses her closed eyes... then her cheeks, nose,,ears... and finally comes to her lips... and gives her a slow yet passionate kiss...

while kissing her he takes her to the bed... and they consumate their relation...

its almost midnight, when rey wakes up and sees taani sleeping on his chest...
rey: kitni cute lagti hai, site hue bhi bilkul meri angel...
taani wakes up with the movement...
taani: rey...
rey uts his finger on taani;s lips...
rey: shhh... taani kuch mat bolo.. mujhe tumhe dekhne do, and then he kisses on her forehead...
rey: taani, hamare bich jo hua..
taani: wo hamara pyaar tha.. mujhe ye galat nahi lagta...
rey hugs taani...
rey: i love you taani
taani: i love you too rey

taani: ab ghar chalein, bhai wait kar rahe hinge,
rey: haan chalo, warna aaj hi mera saala muje maar dalega...
they laugh, and dress themselves and leaves for taayam's place...

taani rings the bell. and swayam opens the door..
swayam: kahan gayi thi.. jo itni der laga di aane mein...
rey: arey yaar, mai city k bahar mera farm hose dikhane le gaya tha taani ki long drive pe isiliye late ho gaya, and winks at taani
taani: haan bhai, sorry abse aisa nahi hoga...
swayam: theek hai, chalo jao so jao..
rey: gudnite taani.. gudnite saale.. main chalta hun...
swayam: gud nite hone wale jeejaji...
they laugh and moves towards their house and romm and sleeps as the day ends...

hah!! finish ho gaya...
sorry for the late update guys, thoda busy thi...
i hope u all like the story...
but lemme tell u, a big twist is on the way...
till then take care...





















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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
awesome update
boys part was nice
taarey dance on romantic number kriya jealous😆
Swayum announce taarey marriage

kiya and rey part kriya is so cheap
rey slap kriya she deserve the slap
Taarey become one 😳

What will be new big twist waiting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesome story
kriya and shivam hate them
taarey parts r superb
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Lovely update
Taarey are finally engaged
Love how Rey set that lady straight and told her he only love Taani and only Taani
Taarey romantic dance was amazing
Now Taarey are one in every way
Possessive bhai Swayam is always fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
How did I miss this story yaar?! So sorry!
Chalo chodo, idea toh brilliant hein!
Part 1:
Wow, team D3 is so successful!
Part 2:
Taani aur Kriya ki enrty ek saath?! 😲
Part 3:
Taarey are back!!! Finally!
Part 4:
Aw... Rey loves Taani so much!
Part 5:
Taani aur Kriya ek hi office mein?! 😲
Love the Taaron bonding!
Part 6:
Loved Taani's dress! Very pretty! 👍🏼
Loved how Sharon unleashed her inner diva on Kriya!
Part 7:
😡 Oh god! Yeh Shivam aur Kriya mere bechare Taarey ke piche kyun pade hein?! In dono ko na, ek dusre ko date karna chahiye!
😈 Yes! Taani knows everything about their stupid evil plan!
Part 8:
Taani telling Reyam everything... At first I thought that this might create some sort of MU between them, but then Sharon comes to support her nanand!. So sweet! Glad that Reyam are with her and there's no MU!
Loved TaaShaReyam plan! 😈
Part 9:
Loved Taani's attitude and how she made Kriya call her mam! I could just imagine Kriya's expression! 😆
🤣 Kriya ka plan flop! Jealous Rey ko banana tha, par jealous toh Swayam hi ban gaya!
Part 10:
🤣 Kriya ka plan phirse flop ho gaya! RDX sir ko layi thi apni faide ke liye, par voh aur Nicole mam toh dono Taani ke hi side pe hein!
😆 Bechara Nilesh!
Part 11A:
😡 Uff! Kriya and her nautanki!
Finally Swaron are together!
Part 11B:
Taarey proposal was really cute! So happy that my Taarey are getting married!
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I feel sorry for Kriya.
Hayee... Loved the Taarey romance!
Sorry for chotu-lambu wala comment!
Please update soon!
Edited by diyadawda13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
😳hello taareyans...
first of all sorry for late update.. but as the show is going on. it killed my interest on writing this ff... but then i thot i will give it a new turn... taarey will alwaz remain in our heart, even if they r nt togethr in reality...

so my part:

it is the next morning...
day of mehendi...
it was decided to be at rey's place...

taani's room:
taani is selecting a dress for herself.. by then swayam comes there...
swayam: taani!! kya kar rahi ho??
taani: kuch nahi bhai, bas soch rahi hun ki kya pehenu...
swayam: bas itni si baat!! ye lo!!

he gives her a packet...

taani: bhai!! ye kya hai??
swayam: ye tumhare liye mehendi k function k liye dress hai... papa ne send ki hai...!!
taani: tauji ne??
wo kab aa rahe hain??
swayam: unhone kaha hai ki unki important meeting hai.. toh wo aaj shaam tak aa jayenge!!
taani: okay bhai!!
swayam: ab jaldi ho jao.. mere jijaji wait kar rahe honge!!
taani blushes...
taani: bhai... and then hugs swayam
swayam breaks the hug...
swayam: ab main jata hun bht kaam hai, jaldi ready ho ke aa jao..
taani: ok bhai...
swayam leaves...

taani opens the packet...

and this is the lehenga that tauji has sent...
taani is awe...

taani: wow!! tauji ne kitna sundar lehenga bheja hai... iska colour and work kitna achcha hai...

taani takes the dress and gets ready...

in hall:
swayam is tensed.. and seeing towards taani's room every now and then..
sharon: swayam chill!! taani aa jayegi..
swayam: sharon.. its almost one hr... abhi tak ready kyu nahi hoi wo??
main ja ke dekhta hun..

he started moving towards the staircase, that taani was coming down...
swayam: he is just staring taani!! he cant believe that his baby sister is goin to get married, and is luking soo beautiful...

taani comes down, and stands besides swayam...
sharon: taani.. OMG!! luk at u... u r luking so gorgeous...
taani: thanks bhabhi!!
sharon: rey toh aur fida ho jayega tum pee!! hmmm mmm!! (teases)
taani blushes...
swayam: taani, mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha, ki meri choti behen ki shaadi ho rahi hai...
u r luking like a princess... and hugs her..
taani hugs him too...
taani: haan bhai!! but main apke liye hamesha wo choti wali taani hi rahungi!!
sharon: aur rey k liye??
taayam turns towards sharon. while taani blushes..
swayam: anywaz chalo bht late ho raha hai.. rey and baki sab wait kar rahe honge!!

sharon: hanhan chalo!!
they moves out, sits in their car...

after 15min they reaches rey's place...
when they enter.. they get the shock of their lives...

rey is getting married to kriya!!!
taani, swayam, and sharon are shocked... and also notices that there is no gang member...

swayam: REYYY
swayam goes towards rey. and helds his collar... and says: kyu kiya tune aisa... tu toh taani se pyaar karta tha naaa... teri shaddi usse hone wali thi... tu kriya se shadi kaise kar sakta hai...
rey doesnt say anything and just bend his head down..
kriya: swayam!! tum mere husband se aise baat nahi kar sakte...
swayam: shut up kriya!! main tumhare husband se nahi, us insaan se baat kar raha hun, jiski shaddi meri behen se hone waali thi...

kriya: but ab wo insaan mera husband hai...
unhe realize ho gaya tha ki wo taani se nahi mujhse pyaar karte hain, isiliye unhone mujhse shaddi kar li!!
swayam: i said SHUTTT UPPP!!!!😡

and leaves rey;s collor and helds kriya's neck...
kriya: swayam tum pagal ho gaye ho!! ye kya kar rahe ho?? chodo mujhe!!
swayam: main tumhe nahi chodunga, tumhari wajah se aaj meri behen ki uske life ki sabse badi khushi cheen gayi!!
rey holds swayam" hands...
rey: swayam chod meri wife ka galaa... tujhe koi haq nahi ki tu usey aise baat karey!!
swayam is more shocked that rey is adressing kriya as his wife.. and thinks what happend to that love which he was showing for taani!!
swayam: sach kaha tune, mujhe koi haq nahi hai...
mai yahan kar kya raha hun... rey, just mind one thing... tune ye harkat kar ke na hi meri meri behen ka dil toda hai... balki hamari friendsship bhi tod di hai...

swayam goes towards taani... and helds her hand...
swayam: chalo taani, aaj hi hum wapas jayenge!!
ab hum yahan nahi rahenge!!
and sharon, agar tum chaho toh apne BEST FRIEND k paas reh sakti ho
sharon goes towards rey and gives him a tight slap..
sharon: i hate u rey!! i hate you!! aajse tum mere bhi kuch nahi ho!!
samjhe!!
sharon leaves from there and joins taayam... and holds taani...
taani is just shocked not being able to do anything... they leave...

rey falls on the floor crying...
rey: kyu kriya??
kyu kiya tumne aisa... kyu tumne mujhe mere life se dur kar dia???

kriya: nahi rey!! maine toh apko pake pyaar se mujhse milwaya hai...
saying this she leaves...

rey gets up, and wipes his tears...
rey: kriya tumne bht badi galti kar di mujhse shaddi kar ke.. tumhe main chaiye naah, theek tumhe sirf main hi milunga.. meri koi property tumhe nahi milegi... dekhna kriya tum khud is shaadi ko tod ke jaogi!!

rey: ohh god!! pehele mujhe jaa ke swayam and sharon ko sab sach sach batana hoga!!
waise taani ne bhi kya acting ki shocked hone ki... meri cute taani.. shocked hone par bhi kitni cute lagti hai!! haaye!!😳


taayam's place:
on entering the hall taani starts laughing!!
swayam and sharon are shocked seeing like that...
swayam: taani, taani... i knw tumhe bht bada shock laga hai.. but please calm down...
taani: bhai, rey ne kriya se shaddi kar li!!! hahahahahahaha
sharon: taani babes, chill... sab theek ho jayega...

taani: haan bhabhi, jab tak main and rey sath main hai tab tak kuch galat nahi ho sakta!!
swayam: taani.. ab tum n rey sath nahi ho!! usne kriya se shaadi kar li!!
taani: bhai ye sab sirf natak hai...

swaron are confused!!
swaron: natak??

by this time rey comes there...
rey: haan natak!!
taani goes and hugs rey,... and rey hugs her tooo!!
rey: tumne shock hone ki kya acting ki.. for a second i thought ki tum sach mein shocked ho!! u r a superb actress!!
taani: raising her invisible collar.. haan woh toh main hun hi!!
sharon: ye chal kya raha hai??
and rey tumhari yahan aane ki himmat kaise hui??
taani: bhabhi chill.. main apko batati hun ki kya hua...
swayam is listening everything silently...
taani: kal jab hum rey ke farmhouse gaye the naah!!
there we became one (she says this closing her eyes, fearing swayam's reaction)
sharon: kyaaa????

swayam: haan toh??
rey: swayam tu naraz nahi hai!! that shaddi se pehele hi humne.. and tujhe kaise pata ki humne...
swayam: wo kya hai na, kal jab taani apne room mei jaa rahi thi, maine uske body pe kai jagah love bites dekhe, then i guessed j=ki tum logo ne.. anywaz.. taani tum bolo toh kya hua??
taani: bhai, wahan se jab hum wapas aa rahe the, mujhe bht thand lag rahi thi.. rey ne ek dhaabe k paas chai peene k liye car roki!!
wahan jab hum dhaabe k andar jaa rahe the, humne kriya and shivam ko dekha.. pehele toh humne ignore kar dia.. but jab unki baatein suni...
sharon: kaun si batein??
taani: yahi that unhone mere and rey ka farm house ka video banaya hai, and now they will blackmail me... to leak the video in the press.. as i hv a name in the corporate world.. and will force rey to marry kriya!!
pehele toh hum shocked the, and then rey gusse se unke taraf jaane lage../

but then maine socha ki aisa karne ka koi fayda nahi hai... qki agar unhone wo video press mei de dia, toh saket and uncle ki reputation bhi degrade ho jayegi...

isilye humne ye plan kia, ki rey kriya k plan k hisaab se usse shaadi kar lenge.. but rey ne apni saari property mere name kar di hai.. jisse wo kriya ko khud is shaadi todne mei majbur kar de!!

swayam: tum logo ne hame kuch kyu nahi bataya!!
rey: hume nahi pata tha, ki kriya sab kuch aaj hi karne wali hai!

rey then tells what happend today morning:
flashback:

rey was sleeping.. when the caretakr came to his room...
CT: rey baba!! neeche koi ladki aapse milne aayi hai!!
rey: taani hogi!1, usey upar bhej do!!
CT: nahi baba!! taani bitiya nahi hai,, koi kriya bol ke ladki hai
rey is shocked..
rey: kya kriya??
CT; haan,
rey: achcha theek hai, aap chaliye main aata hun...

rey changes and goes downstairs..
rey: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho??
kriya: relax rey!! mai yahan apse baat karne aayi hun...
rey: just get lost from here.. mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni...
kriya: common rey, jab apko ye pata chalega ki kal raat ki apke and taani ki shaddi se pehele suhagraat ka video media mei jayega, toh i m sure aap mujhse baat toh kya shaddi bhi karenge!!
rey: kya??? (he pretends to be shocked)
while he was thnking that he dint knw ki ye log ye sab aaj hi karne wale the...
kriya: yes rey... comig staright to the point, agar aap nahi chahte hain ki aapki pyaari taani ka name media mei badnaam ho, then u have to marry me.. within one hour!! and haan sabke aisa dikhana hoga ki jaise aapne mujhse out of love shaadi ki hai...

flashback ends:

sharon: oh my gawd.. i m soo sorry rey.. maine tumhe slap kia... main ye soch bhi kaise sakti thi ki tum taani ko ditch karoge!!
swayam: but tune taani ko kaise bataya, ye sab itni jaldi hua!!
taani: bhai!! jab hum car mei the, toh rey ka msg aaya tha...
isiliye wahan jaa ke maine sirf shocked rehene ka act kia... and kuch nahi kaha!!

sharon: okay ab aage ka kya plan hai??
rey: is baar, main kriya and uss shivam ki wo haalat karunga ki wo next time koi plan banane layak nahi rahenge!!
swayam; but ab hum karenge kya??? legally ab kriya tumhari wife hai...
re: ab hum nahi, jo karna hai meri sweetheart karegi!!
taani: main????
rey: haan tum... tumhe pata hai na meri propertes ki legal hier tum ho... tum jab chaho tab meri properties pe apna haq jama sakti... and even mujhe mere hi ghr se nikaal ke bahar phek sakti ho... and tum aisa hi karogi...
taani: kya?? nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti...
sharon: taani, tumhe real mein rey ko ghar se bahar nahi nikalna hai.. sirf kuch din k liye taaki kriya ko sabak mil jaaye...
rey: haan... so the plan is... ki taani abhi ek week, tum kuch nahi karogi!! u will b in shock.. and then next monday will b our blow for kriya!!
swayam: but wo video...
rey: dnt worry, wo video maine destroy kar dia...
sharon: agar uske paas koi copy hui toh??
rey: kriya ne mujhe teeno copies de di thi!!
taani: toh aap ek week tak kriya k sath rahoge???😭
rey: no sweetheart!! main tumse, swayam n sharon se maafi mangne k bahane se yahan aata rahunga...
so dont worry!!
mere liye sirf tum meri wife ho... wo kriya mere paas bhi nahi aa sakti..
rey huga taani.. and kisses her forehead...

then swaron also joins the hug...
after sometimes rey leaves...


rey's place:
kriya: ye rey kahan chale gaye??
rey enters...
kriya runs towards him...
kriya: rey, aap kahan chale gaye the...
dekhiye maine aapke liye khana banaya hai!!
rey: kriya, main kahin bhi jaun usse tumhe koi matlab nahi hai... tumne pehele hi meri life barbaadkar di hai.. ab kya main thodi der kahi akele jaa bhi nahi sakta??
kriya: rey dekhiye aap khana kha lijiye... maine khud aapke favrt dishes banaye hain..
rey:for god's sake.. please leave me alone...

rey goes to his room... changes.. and lies down on his bed...
kriya comes and lies down next to rey...
rey: tum yahan mere room mein kya kar rahi ho??
kriya: ab aap mere pati hai.. apka room hi mera room hai...
rey: theek hai then tum raho is room mein.. main jaa raha huan yahan se!!
rey takes his mobile and goes in other romm and locks the door and calls taani...

the whole night they talk... and sleep while talking to each other...



ho gaya!!
i hope you guys like it...
i knw, in this it is onli obt kriya and not that wicked shivam.. but shivam ne taani ko paane k liye sirf kriya ki help ki rey ko taani se dur karne k liye... since he doesnt have a single penny.. as he was bankrupt.. so he is living on kriya's money.. but now even kriya's money were ending... so shivam kuch nahi kar paa raha...
please do comment






















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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome story jst 2day read every part loved it so much pls pm r scrap me wen updating next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Thank u for continuing ur story
awesome update
kriya n shivam r so creep
Rey amd taanis plan was mindblowing
loved it
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice update
kriya's evil plan
hope my taarey jaldi 1 saath ho jaye

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