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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
hey nice update 😃
i love shaani's talk
so finally taani
met kria ,
& talks r also nice
hope so taani talks
with rey on this topic 😊
update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Thank you soo much guys..
so here is the next part..
enjoy!!

PART 6

it is the next morning...
taarey woke up with a smile on their face, while thinking about each other...
taanii gets ready, makes breakfast, and then swayam comes:
taani: gudmorning bhai!!
swayam: gudmorning taani!! kal raat thodi disturb lag rahi thi, main puchna chahta tha but then mujhe laga ki shayad tumhe thoda time chahiye...
kya hua taani?? are you alright... kuch hai toh tum mujhse share kar sakti ho...
taani: i know bhai!! and dnt worry now i m absolutely fine.. sharo bhabi se baat kar ke achcha feel kar rahi hoon..
achcha bhai i m getting late for the office... chalti hoon...
with that she hugs swayam and leaves...

after having breakfast swayam also leaves to meet the gang...

taani reaches office and is greeted by her assistant
mr. sharma: gud morniung mam...
taani: gud morning mr. sharma
mr. sharma: mam, aaj apki finance deptt k sath meeting hai @ 10.30
taani: thank you mr. sharma, and i want profit statement of last 5 years in my cabin now...
with that mr. sharma leaves and taani moves towards her cabin...
she starts doing her work...

@conference hall..
taani: okay!! first of all i m sorry for delaying the meeting.. and also thank you all for cooperating with me...
staff: its okay mam!! we are here to work, and we understand that there must be some emergency...
taani: hmmm... so the meeting is held to discuss the innovative ideas that can be used a new product in the market... as our company is entering in food industry, we are thinking of the ways by which we can introduce our introduce our product in the market, followed by the budget...
kriya: mam, we can go through the old strategies if we find anything good, we can use it as a part of the process...
taani: hmm.. miss ghai, i appreciate ur efforts. but we are here to find new techniques and not considering the old techniques...
this way the goes on ...

on the other hand,
swayam reached college's RH...
rey: swayam yaar!! kahan reh gaya tha tu??
swayam: kuch nahi yaar, wo taani k sath breakfast pe kuch baat kar raha tha, time ka dhyan hi nahi raha
rey: achcha... waise taani office chali gayi kya??
swayam: haan... kyun??
rey: naah!! wo kriya bhi usi office mei hain toh...
swayam: rey mujhe lagta hai, tu kuch zada soch raha hai... ho sakta hai wo wahan kisi kaam se aayi ho..
rey: haan... anywaz.. hamare next event ko sirf 20 days reh gaye hai... we need to set our routine...
swayam: chalo then...

rey, swayam and gang are busy for the next 20 days for their new event, on the other hand taani is busy with the preparations to introduce the new product in the market... there is peace between taani and kriya as they are onli on professional talking terms and rey swayam and sharon also dint talk about her to anyone... in between taarey talked to each other normally but not all lovey- dovey...


Its been 20 days..
today is the event..
gang has reached the auditorium, and taani and saket are also there as they were invited on professional grounds...
as usual the gang's performance was awesome and it touched many hearts...
after the function:
taani: chalo saket.. i wl leave now, bhai k sath hi chali jaati hoon...
saket: okay taani!!! take care... c u tomorow in office... gud nyt..
taani: gud nyt...

taani moves towards swayam and they all leave for their homes...

next day:
it ws a saturday, and it was planned that the gang will go to a pub tonite...
taani's day was just another usual working day except one thing which made her a little distrbed...
(the thing will be revealed later...)

in evening:
swayam: taani, jaldi aao... sab hamara wait kar rahe honge wahan pe...
traani: haaan bhai aayi..
just then swayam ws about to shout again...
taani comes down...
swayam is amazed seeing his little sis luking so beautiful just like a princess...
taani: chaliye bhai!!
and taani moves towards the door...
swayam: taani ruko...
taani turns..
taani: kya hua bhai...
swayam: aaj tum bachpan ki tarah ek dum princess jaisi dikhg rahi ho...

(guys taani was wearing this dress)
taani (smiles): hugs swayam, thank yu bhai!!
ab chalein, nahi toh sab gussa ho jayenge...
swayam: haan chalo...

they go to the disc... and meet the gang outside...
everyone is amazed seeing taani in this dress...
sharon: taani... oh my gosh!! yu are luking too pretty...
taani: thanks bha... sharon...
sharon smiles...
rey sees taani and is lost in his dream land...
vicky nudges him to go inside..
they all move inside...
it was crowed being saturday nite...
on the way inside sharon bumps into...
KRIYA,...

sharon: kriya??
kriya: sharon?
sharon: tum yahan bhi aa gayi.. rey ka picha karte hue.. dont yu understand that he loves sumone else...
(guys pls dont be confused, i already said sharon wants onli taaarey to be together, so when she saw kriya in the same disc as in they were... she became possessive for taarey and started speaking without thinking anything)
kriya: sharon, ye tum kya bol rahi ho,...
main rey ka picha kyu karungi, infact jaise hi maine unhe dekha main toh bas yahan se jaa hi rahi thi..
sharon: ohh really!!
i dont wana listen ur fake stories, tum taani ko apni baaton mei phasa sakti ho, mujhe nahi...
aur haan taani and rey se dur rehena, uske office main kaam karti ho, so sorf apne kaam se kaam rakhna warna tumhe u will face the consequences.. now just leave...

kriya leaves...
and even sharon moves towards to the gang.. bt this conversation was heard by an unknown person...
after listening to the convo he was thinking something and suddenly he left the disc and started following kriya...

husshhh!! here is the 6th part...
i hope u enjoy...
i m leaving two things for yu all to guess...
1) what is the something that taani heard ion her office and is idisturbed...??
2) and who can be this unknown person??

signing off... ur sweet little friend.. akki saying gudnite to all...
love yaa :):)

Edited by akki_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
All the parts were amazing.. loved them!! update soon..
and p.m. me..
Thank you <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
I read all the chapters and they all are super duper awesome
I love them all
Shani bonding is amazing
Taayam are always the cutest siblings ever
And Taarey I just love them
I think saket is the unknown person that is following Kria
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
PART 7:
taarey:
rey takes taani to dance with him, meanwhile sharon was trying hard to get swayam talk to her... but no luck...
taarey were dancing getting lost in each other eyes... someone was watching them and was very happy seeing them together... that ws none other than saket...
the gang even invited him...
the moment he entered the disc he saw taarey dancing and was happy for taani...

On the other hand, kriya was lost in her thoughts and dint notice that she moved towards left rather right...
the person was following her.. and when he saw kriya taking a wrong turn, he decided to meet kriya... and suddenly he ran and stopped just infront of kriya...
kriya got shocked seeing him...

kriya: SSSHHHIIIVVVAAAMMM😲
shivam: hey babes...😈

(guys... yes shivam was also there at the disc, and then he suddenly noticed the gang and was lost seeing taani, and he stil likes her alot.. and want her to be with him at any cost... so when he heard sharon and kriya talk he decided to do something...)
kriya: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??
shivam: arey!! na hi na hello!! to the point baat hann...
kriya: just shut up shivam... tumhari hi wajah se mujhe mumbai chod ke jana pada tha, apna colllege, apne friends and apna rey...
shivam: ohh... ohh... kriya... abhi bhi apna rey... ab wo tumhara nahi kisi aur ka ho gaya hai...
haan i know... tum abhi bhi usse pyaar karti ho!!
kriya: PYAAARRR?????😈
tumhe actually lagta hai ki main abhi bhi ussi se pyaar karti hoon...
shivam: haaannn... naaahhh...

kriya and shivam laughs evilly...
(ok guys i know, its out of the box... but this is my imagination and anything is possible...)

flashback:
after seeing rey and taani together kriya was very angry, and also she dint know whethr rey still loves her or not...
she went back home and was planning her entry to st.louis agin...
after a week she was in some store with her mother, when she bumped into shivam who was shocked as well as surprised seeing her back in mumbai... after general greetings he came to know she is again planning to take admission in st. louis... and he ws tensed for taani... coz he knew rey and kriya used to love each other, and he also knew that taarey havnt confessed their love yet... bt taani loves rey alot... (guys... when shivam left st. louis he understud one thing that tanni neva liked him, she onli loved rey and no one else can take his place.. so he thought to let it go... and just be friends with taani bt when he came to know about kriya his evil mind started working)

shivam and kriya discussed about each others life and taarey's role in it...
and they became partners to break taarey and win them back in their lif...

when taani left rey kriya wanted to go to rey, and give him a shoulder to cry... bt shivam had some other plans.. he said...
shivam: kriya, tum aisa nahi kar sakti... agar tumhe rey lifetime k liye chahiye then listen to me...
hum taarey ko tab todenge jab wo dono sath honge, qki tab ek baar alag hone ke baad wo kabhi sath nahi aayenge... aur agar tum abhi rey k paas chali gayi toh wo hamesha taanik lautne ka wait karega and tumhe kabhi accept nahi karega...
kriya: i guess u r rite shivam
shivam: maine apne kuch aadmi taani k piche laga diye hain wo jab bhi wapas aaygi mujhe pata chal jayega...
and then apna plan action mei layenge...

when taani decided to come ack to mumbai shivam knew all about it... and he informed kriya, about cming infront of rey... meanwhile she got a job and was working and she planned to get the team the dance event... and rest we all know that even the bumping with rey was planned... bt the most unexpected for kriya and shivam was Taani being the friend of saket and CEO of the company kriya is working!!

flashback ends...
kriya: gawd shivam, i cant believe, hum ne ye sab itne years se pan kia tha.. but a sab fail hota dikh raha hai...
shivam: dont worry babes, is baar main taani ko khud se dur nahi jane dungi
kriya: aur mein rey ko
they both laugh and leaves towards kriya's place...

scene shifts to taarey:
taani: rey main thak gayi hooon
rey: chalo taanihum chal ke baithte hain
taani leaves and rey follows her..
taani thinks is it the right time to talk to rey about rey.. wo mere sath kitne khush lagte hain, but ye baat bhi important hai..
taani: rey myjhe apse kuch baat karni hai..
rey: haaan taani bolo
taani: rey mujhe apse kriya ke baarey mei baat karni hai..
rey gets shocked...
rey (thinking):: isey kriya ke barey mei kaise pata
kahin kriya nei isse kuch kuch kaha toh nahi hai
agar ais ahai toh main kriya ko chodunga nahi, wo meri taani ko mujhse dur nahi kar sakti
taani: rey main janti ki aap jante hai ki kriya isi city mein hai, and meri company mei work karti hai...
rey: haan. taani yumhge kaise pata, listen taani maine tumhe isiliye nahi bataya qki main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha
taani: rey main janti hoon, but main bas ye janna chahti hoon kya ab bhi apke mann mei kriya k liye koi feelings hai coz if yes, toh main aap dono k bich nahi aana chahti.,
rey: taani tum pagal ho gayi ho... mai sirf tumse pyar karta hoon.. sirf tumse... u enderstand... rey k liye sirf taani haiaur koi nahi...
taani: i love u too rey... and then she hugs rey and starts crying...
rey: shhh... taani... please dont cry...
main tumhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta...

taanii stops crying, and rey asks her..
rey: toh kya iska matlab hai hum fir se ek sath hain??
taani (blushes): haan😳
rey: thank yu, thank yu, thank yu so much taani... tum nahi janti tumne mujhe kya dia hai...

seeing taarey hug and rey soo happy, gang comes there
sharon: kya hua rey, tum itne happy q ho??
rey: wo sharon taani ne haan kar di...
sharon: kyaaa???
rey: haan... taani ne hamari relationship k liye haan kar di
swayam: wow!! finally meri behen and mera best friend sath sath... and then he hugs taarey and says: i m really very happy for u...
taarey: thanks bhai/ dude...

and nil comes...
nil: guys CHEMISTRY!!!!!
and with the gang starts laughing...
happily they all leave for their home...
reaching taayem's place... rey gives taani the last hug of the day and bids gudbye,

swayam: taani tum khush toh ho na??
taani: haan bhai, main bahot khush hoon... mujhe mere rey mil gaye mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye..
swayam: apna bhai bhi nahi 😭
taani: ap ro q rahe hain, main apse kabhi dur nahi jane wali... mujhe mere bhai aur rey hi chahiye,,, aur haan koi aur bhi chahiye...
swayam: koi aur??
taani: haan sharon...
swayam: haan bhai, aap pls unhe maaf kar dijiye... main janti hun aap unse kitna pyar karte ho, bt thode naraz ho...
pls mere liye unhe maaf kar do..
swayam: theekhai taani, main dekhuna.. ab tum jao aur so jao.. mere home wale jijaji ka call aaat hoga but zada der baat mat karna
taani blushes: theek hai bhai,,,,, gud nite
swayam: gud nite

taani goes to her bed and thinks about the whole day's event, she is happy thinking whatever good is happening in her life as she is finally wid her bhai and rey..
but suddenly she frowns as she remembers what she heard today in office:

same moring:
taani was in office, she ws going towards cafeteria to get some coffee...
she ws paasing by kriya's cabin when she stopped suddenly as she herad kriya taking shivam's name.
kriya: haa shivam
haan, maine kia hai, mai uska bharosa jitne ki puri koshish karr rhi hun bt wo professional hi reheti hain, kuch bhi personal baat nahi karti,
dnt worry, i m trying my best to be good in front of her... and yeah, till now she doesnt know our plan... wo sirf mere hain main unhe kisi aur ka nahi hone dungi...

presentt:
taani: kya wo sach mei shivam se baat kar rahi thi
but wo shivam ko kaise jainti hai
q nahi, shivam mere aane se pehele se bhai and rey ki life mein aa chuka tha, tab toh kriya yahan thi...
aur wo kiske barey mein baat kar rhi thi, ki sirf unka hai... kahi rey toh nahi...
and then she started joining the dots and understood that it is all shivams and kriyas plan... to get rey back in kriya's life...
kya rey mujhse dur chale jaynge..
then she remembered how rey confessed his feelings evrytime till date..
and then she decided that she needs to do something to deal with kru=iya, she cant let anyone snatch away her love...

with this determination, she slept thinking about her and rey...


hello guys, happy dhanteras to all of you.. may this diwali brings a lot of happiness and joy in your life...

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Awesome update
shivam n kriya planning to seprate taarey😡
Taarey part loved it
taarey r together again
thank god taani ko kriya ke plan ke baare mein pta chal gaya
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update dear
so finaly rey & taani
again in relationship
good
kria & shivam
ehhh
hates them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL MY DEAR FRIENDs
I Wish all success and happiness to all of you...

and yes, next part will be updated very soon...
keep reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends,
next part i think will be fun... as for taareyans...
so enjoy...

PART 8:
its is the next morning,
taani wakes up with a smile on her face, thinkinf about her and rey...
as it is sunday, she is also a bit lazy...
she freshens up and goes to the kitchen for breakfast...
ramu kaka has already prepared the breakfast... she sits down on the dining table, just then swayam comes down...

taani: gud morning bhai!!
swayam: gud morning taani!! kya baat hai aaj bht khush lag rahi ho??
taani: haan bhai!!
atlast mujhe mere rey mil gaye, i m soo happy...
and she hugs swayam...
swayam hugs her too, and they says
swayam: i m happy for u my little sister...
taani: haan, chalo breakfast karte hain, uske baad aap mujhe shopping karwaoge...
swayam: haan theek hai

then taani serves swayam as well as herself...
they were about to start their breakfast... just then door bell rings...

taani: sunday morning itni jaldi kaun hoga??
swayam: agar main apne best friend ko janta hun, toh is waqt wo apni girl friend k ghar ke bahar door khulne ka wait kar raha hoga, sunday ka breakfast apni girlfriend and apne best friend k sath karne k liye...
taani: aap ye kya bol rahe ho?
swayam: taani, ye aur koi nahi rey hai
taani: bhai wo abhi so rahe honge, wo itni jaldi yahan nahi aayenge...
saying this taani goes and opens the door...

taani becomes surprised to see rey there!!
taani: rey??
rey: haan taani, main... kyuun nahi aa sakta kya??
taani: maine aisa kab kaha... bt aap toh is waqt so rahe hote ho...
rey: main apni sweetheart k sath breakfast karne aaya hun...
taani: aur mere bhai k sath bhi...
rey: haaan???
taani: haan bbhai... apke best friend...

till then swayam comes there..
swayam: taani maine kaha tha na mera best friend and boy friend hoga...
taani: haan bhai rey hi hai
rey: kya yaar swayam ab mujhe yahi darwaze par khada rakhega kya

they all move towards dining table, and have their breakfast...
after breakfast taani says
taani: mujhe aap dono se kuch important baat karni hai
reyam: haan taani, bolo
taani: kriya k barey mei.
rey: kriya ke barey mein??
swayam: kriya ke barey mein kya?? kahin usne tumse kuch kaha toh nahi...
taani: nahi bhai!! unhone mujhse kuch nahi kaha par...
rey: par kya taani... bolo... usne tumhe hurt toh nahi kia na??
taani: nahi rey, hurt nahi kia... bt aap dono please meri baat suniye... kuch hai jo mujhe pareshan kar rahi hai...
reyam: achcha theek hai bolo

taani tells them what she heard, and also about her doubts, and fear of losing rey...
rey: i know taani, tumhara doubt karna obvious ha... bt hum bhi kriya ko jante hain wo aisa kuch nahi karegi..
taani: aur shivam?? wo toh kuch bhi kar sakta hai naa??
swayam: haan taani, shivam kuch bhi kar sakta hai... but kriya ye sab karegi ye believe karna mushkil hai
taani: matlab, aplog fir se mujhpe trust na kar ke kisi aur pe trust kar rahe ho...
agar aissi hi baat hai, toh theek hai mujhe alogo se kuch nahi kehena...
bt agar ab meren rey k bich kuch problems hui u=ya fir main fir se yahan se chali gayi, iske liye maiin aplogo ko aur koi chance nahi de paungi...
aplog mujhpe trust na karke mujhe already ek baar hurt kia th, is baar fir se aplog wahi kar rahe ho... bt its fine for me,, mujhe aadat ho gayi hai... and i knw ek insaaan hai jo mera vishwas karega...
reyam: ek insaan??? kaun??
sharon: main...
taareyam turns towards sharon...

taanni invited sharon to spend sunday with her... when sharon came to taayam's home, she heard taareym's conversation, and she knew reyam wont believe taani, so she decided to interupt...
reyam: sharon tum...??
sharon: haan main...
main dungi taani ka sath...
rey: sharon, main ye nahikeh raha ki main taani ka sath nahi dunga, main bas ye keh raha hun, ki kriya shivamk sath mil ke mujhe n taani ko alag karna chahegi ye believe karna mushkil hai... she was nt that type of girl...

swayam: haan i agree with rey
sharon: log badalte hain rey... and main janti hoon ki taani jo bol rahi hai wo sahi hai
maine kal disc mein bhi dekha tha kriya ko, humlogo ka picha karte hue, and by luch i bumped into her... and gave her piece of my mind...

taani: kya kal wo waha disc mei thi??
sharon: haan taani...
rey: ye ek coincidence bhi toh ho sakta hai
sharon: rey!! ye chahe jo ho, tum decide karlo, i tumhe taani ka sath dena hai ya nah?/
swayam: main apni behen ka sath dunga, main sirf uski happiness chahta hun... agar kriya aisa kar rahi hai toh main kabhi usey successful nahi hone dunga...
taani hugs swayam and says: thanks bhai... i love you...
rey too goes and hugs taani.,... and says

rey: main apni taani ko ek baar fir nahi khona chahta, main abhi taani ka hi sath dunga, qki main taani se bht pyar karta hun... i love you taani...
taani: thanks rey.. n i love you too...

sharon: okay guys, we need a plan kriya ki asliyat sabke samne lane k liye
rey: rite... agar wo shivam k sath mil ke ye sab conspiracy kar rahi hai... then hum apna game plan karenge... diwali event par...

taani, swaron: diwali event??
rey: diwali is round the corner, we will organize a diwali event at taani's office, and wahan hum kriya ka asli chehera sab k samne layenge...

taarey, swaron: DONE

rest of the day they enjoy themselves, and in betwee talk to saket for organizing diwali event...

at night, after dinner sharon, and rey leave for their respective homes...
swayam: taani, tumhe yakeen hai na, ki shivam k aane se u will not be uncomfortable...
taani: haan bhai... iss baar main apne, apke, rey and sharon k liye shivam ko face karna chahti hoon,
is bar main shivam ko jeetne nahi dungi,...

swayam; i m proud of you my sister...
taani: thanks bhai, chalo ab so jaate hain...
gudnite bhai!!
swayam: gud nite taani!!

they go to their rooms and sleep, and wait for the next day, to begin their plan...


meanwhile, with rey:
rey: i m really lucky ki mere life mein taani aayi... and ab main usey kabhi dur nahi jane dunga, and agar wo kriya aisa kuch kar rahi hai, toh main usey chodunga nahi...
with this thought rey sleeps...

huh!! this part is over... enjoy reading


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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome part..loved it
taayum convo super cute
sharon n taani bonding loving it
update next part soon

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