SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14

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payal

@.vruShan_rocks.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

res res res...
after such a long time

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice OS waiting for part 2
Guyz i m new in this forum nd a big Swaron fan plz add me in ur buddy list 😛

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

superb OS di

wow !!!

amazing

it was really well written 😳

accha laga padh ke specially in this situation

thanks for the PM

and please please update soon

i cant wait

and do PM me 😳

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

It seems you have started writing again after how much a decade or so i guess...

well this was really a nice one..

but i don't know what now should i comment

i mean i have already used all the words of praise from the dictionary for your previous works..

and i don't think anything was left...

so yet another from a millions wonderful works of yours..

and you did it wonderfully even this time...

but that's usual rite??

i mean you just have to think about what to write...

and then when i read whatever you have written

it always spell bounding and awestrucking...

so i m short of words...

Rohan :)

Edited by rohan_smile - 12 years ago

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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful is the word for it,
Very well written, I like the flashbacks in between, and as u said u wrote in a flow, we read in a flow, completely engrossed in the os,
And it isn't long on the other hand it was just enough for the suspense to build up,
Waiting for the next part.

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awesome,amazing ,superb os!!!

the way u described swaron's pain that is really heart touching...just beautiful!!

loved the os...

pls update soon...waiting eagerly for the next part..

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vaishali

@vaishali_mhaske

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wonderful OS dear.It is too emotional,i knw ur pour swaron emotion so deeply in this OS.Once again after long back its like bliss to read ur work.The way u pen down swaron feeling is Amazing.😊😊😊

Loved it superb work done as usual😊😊

Waiting for next part eagerly...👏👏👏

Edited by vaishali_mhaske - 12 years ago

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Deepu
Kya ho aap
Seriously i just love reading ur words
They just straight hitt ur heart

Wen joind Forum i use hear from everyone deepu dii s the best writer, deepu is magical and wot not
And u truely are magical, ur writing is like as if a dying person has been given a new life, speacially the command u hve over the emotional descrpition is something which makes cry my heart out and if the os is so good like this thn i this nt even long enough coz i can carry on reading a night and not even blink ma eyes...well its actually poinless praising u coz as thy se ' kisi ki tareef ki.muhtaj nahi' so u dnt even need ma praise as thy dnt make any difference coz u are the best writer and will be...

Thnx alot for the os and pm
Eagerly waiting for next update
And dnt say its long infact make it asing as u possibly cn coz i can read on and on

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

deepu---

i actually dont know what i'm writing in reply, because io'm busy crying.

i am suer busy at the moment---college, tuitions and office---september month ka extra workload as last dates of return of company tax----

right now, i'm madness personified. barely on the forum.

but thank you for giving me something this beautiful to feast myself on.

it was just---well i cant think of good enough words.

just----i was frustrated with the track---and the baseless fights---and the way these two who professed love to each other ---have fallen apart in one stupid fight----and lord knows wht possessed swayam to say those. and sharon does not understand swayam.

but thanks for this---and update soon.

all my love---medha

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swasi

@swasi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wow superb , beautiful,amazing os😊 the way u show the feelings of swaron was just so heartouching,very emotional , really loved it. eagerly waiting for the next part