SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Hey Deepika 😊

awesome OS

very emotional

really loved it ❤️

it is penned down very beautifully 👏

u r a brilliant writer

u emotes the emotiones exceptionally

really like sharon's point of view ❤️

the ending was superb

swaron patch up

really waiting that to happen soon in show

keep the great work going on 👍🏼

do write more and more...

and thanks for the PM

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Reserved.

You are cheater cocks! You must know why am i saying this..

Woh second last pargraph FF se lia tunai, larki!

U say i dun love ur stories .. now ab bata ke kis ko ek dafa parh kar hi pata chal gaya..

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Vadhana

@Vaddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Di :DIs it really necessary for me to tell you that...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER? :D <32 updates aur wo bhi lamba lamba updates :D thank you so much di :) bohit acha tha dono updates :D like really really good. The way both their emotions were expressed...their confessions...their love...it was swaronish...intense passionate yet pure and innocent :)From the starting where Swayam breaks the glass's window to the part where he adores her again...simply amazIng di <3 I could see it happening as I read...something that happens rarely with a few stories.and Sharon's part was excellence beyond par...it was simple yet passionate...i could feel it...relate to her emotions...pure innocence and guilt... It was amazing to read :D <3I lived both the updates, lived not loved...it was that amazing :) now I shall leave to get over the effect of your stunning Os :)Love,Vadhana :D <3

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

U crazy person , driving me crazy with those words , mother of gawd , where on earth do u find those killer words , ur figure of speech drives me mad , ur dictionarytical words gosh i need to take one beside me

i was reading it less as entertainment n more as a university chapter , jisme aadhe word bouncer jaate hai but i take a good look at that line over n over n over to understand it perrrfectly yes i read some lines like million tyms to get the understanding n connection of those super impressive unknown unheard words of my life . kahae laate ho itna dimaag ! KAHA SE !!! bato mai bhi khareed lu ! 😎 baapre wonderous writing , excelent execution will take me years to learn something like that , i was alone at home n i was having my food when i was actually not only reading it but shouting it out loud , as nobody to hear me , every single line i have actually said it as swayam n sharon way (wid acting😆 ) 1 chapati khaneko 1 ghanta lag gaya mereko 😲 , usske uppar sharon ki acting how dare u ! nahi aur zorse on the top of ur voice HOW DARE YOU ! N next series of acts were so fast chapati atak gayi gale mein , fir samjhaya ek toh beta padle yaa kahan khale 🤣 my best line jisko maine 4 baar padha was

Shhh ..I am not perfect Sharon...You are not perfect.. life won't be perfect every day ...we have to make it perfect with our imperfections...You and I in a moment will make it perfect ...

I need you...to make this moment perfect...

now how perfect was dat tum bhi imperfect mai bhi imperfect , rhs n lhs se im nikaaldo bangaya perfect hence proved . 😎

wat i say when i actually get swayed away by some write up is "baap ho aap _/\_ " charan badhao maate bohot kuch sikhna hai aapse .

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Varada

@damonTVDrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Awesome is the word!
So wish it happened in the show!!😭
Keep writing such amazing stuff. Thanks for the pm.😛

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

khubsurat os

u now each and every word that u wrote was defining swaron love to the fullest .

it was so pure.

I can imagine each and every line each and very expression of swaron while reading this os.

it was really very magical.

I loved it to the core.

some dialogs were awesomely written.

thanks for the pm

thanks for updating

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Deep!! Two updates!!! Beautiful!!

Your writing is always such a joy to read!!

The font you use adds to the pleasure! Also the BG music was perfectly apt!!

Speechless as t how you have mentioned their love-hate relationship and this time Sharon putting in efforts to clear out the misunderstandings. You gave your magical touch to this beautiful os!!

Outstanding writing!! This work is an emotional roller-coaster and you have delved "deep" into the characterization keeping the originality in them as well!!

Amazing work!!

Thanks for the pm.

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Oh my god that is dreamy
You have written it really well di.
The way you described the distance between them by that one window glass,that was commendable.

I loved the way sharon blabbered so much and let her feelings out to majnu boy.😊😊😊😊
Pure bliss to read your work.
Apt title of the story .beautiful ending .
Just like a fairytale 😳😳😳

Love,Anny😃

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

wow awesome parts n perfect end as well..
how i wish something like this happen in d3 as well but our bad nothing happened..
beautifully written..
well described emotion..
the all swayam dialogues remind me of past n i totally loved it..
this sharon who loves swayam n make him feel same is the sharon i always love..
hope to get back this swayam's sharon soon in the show as well..
as always totally loved this os also..
keep writing more n more..
n thanks for the pm :)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Wowww fabulous mindblowing splendid os 👏
Totally loveddd ttt 👏 ⭐️
D way the feelings described wer jus amazing 😊
especially d part wer Sharon blabbers abt her feelings to swayam awesome t was!!
And sowwie my lyk button s not workin
But I jusss loveddd this os 👍🏼

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago