SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Deepy, i have already read whole OS.. so please wait till sunday. I will urneserved that time, OK?

Dun kill me pleash. 🤗

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VruShan_MaNan

@VruShan_MaNan

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Deepu Di main kya bolun iske baare mein. Seriously I feel I am not even that capable that I can comment on your works as your write ups are flawless.👏

You don't know how much I admire your work.

and this is before you even know me, we never had conversations earlier but I could understand you from your write ups, that your understanding towards life and relationships is so deep and mature. You know all that maturity and purity of yours reflects in your work.

About this OS, I wish CVs ko main yeh link bhej sakti and make them understand this what Swayam and Sharon are individually about and this is what makes them our SwaRon.

The window scene, the way they were looking at each there-defines their intensity in love and want for each other.

Swayam fear of Sharon going away from his life made him break the glass- This is our loverboy.

Loved the way Sharon spoke her feelings. I want Sharon to talk, I really want her to express her mad love for Swayam. It can never be one sided. Both people have to show the madness in love. Thank you for this outburst of Sharon. I hope we get something like this in the show as well.

Loved the ending. They were dying to be together and missing each other and with all their hugs and kisses- those actions spoke louder than words.

I am seriously in love with your works.

Thank you so much for writing such beautiful stories and defining our SwaRon so beautifully.⭐️

A big huggg for youuu.🤗

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

it was beyond magical for me. The pain, the guilt, the emotion, the love, the passion everything was out of the world. very very nicely written. Thanks for pm :)

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vrushiiii

@vrushiiii

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awesome awesome awesome work dear..

loved it..

pain,emotion,love...perfect

and swaron kiss hayee

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

that was mind blowing u left me speech less...
that was a magical and awesome loved it...
no words to express feel like give a 🤗

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cscs

@cscs

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

loved it loved it n more loved it..😃

awesome deep..

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

This was BEAUTIFUL. What a perfect ending for such a messed up beginning (I mean Swaron misunderstanding, not your writing). Beautiful portrayal of both Swayam and Sharon's thought process. Loved how you made them realize their mistakes and sort them instantly. Rest assured, whatever the situation may be, Swayam and Sharon will always be together. Deepika, one more written gem from you. Keep it up!!!