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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
varallika dear please jaldi se next part post karna.. me waiting for it eagerly..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Iske bad dono apne apne classes ki taraf chale jate hai. After college kashish and sujal moves twards their car suddenly they hear someone calling them from behind
Nandini: hey kashish sujal ruko
They both stop together and turn around
Nandini: kya yar kab se tum dono ko bula rahi hu sunte hi nahi ho
Sujal: acha ab shikayat band karo aur batao ki kyou gala par phar ke chila rahi thi
Nandini: tumhe to mai ek din zaher de kar mar hi dalungi
Sujal: aisa mat karma nahi to karan ka……
Nandini: sujal stop it
Kashish: both of you stop it. tum dono bhi na bacho ki tarah larte ho.
Sujal: tum mujhe kya bol rahi ho ise samjhao na
Nandini: waise bhi mujhe tumse bat hi nahi karni
Kashish: acha ab ye to batao kit um hume bula kyou rahi thi
Nandini: are ha wo to mai bilkul hi bhul gai asal me ma ne tumhe aj rat ghar pe bulaya hai dinner ke liye
Kashish: aj raat par mumma nahi manegi
Nandini: maine already aunty se permission le li hai ab tum chup chap mere sath ghar chalo
Kashish: ok
Sujal: dost dost na raha …
Nandini: kashish is devdas se kehdo ki ma ne ise bhi bulaya hai
Sujal: kashish is bandariya se bol do ki mai sirf manna ke kehne pe a raha hu iske bulane pe nahi
Kashish: stop it u both and lets go
Phir wo teeno agarwal house ki taraf chal dete hai. Waha karan aur simran pehle se hi the. They spend a great time together nd then all depart for their home. Sujal decides to drop kashish home as he thinks that its not safe for her to go alone
It was about 12 am sujal and kashish were going twards khanna house.in the car thora sa pyar hua hai song was playing. Kashish was lost in sujal and his thoughts. Sujal unaware of this was thinking about the time spent with kashish and was smiling to himself. The whole situation was very pleasant and romantic ki suddenly the sujal stops the car with a jerk.
Kashish: kya hua gari kyou rok di
Sujal: lagta hai tyre puncture ho gaya hai. Mai dekhta hu
[both get out of car and finds that both of the front tyres were punctured.]
Kashish: oh no yaha to do tyres puncture hai ab kya hoga
Sujal was abt to say something ki he sees some one setting target on kashish. He pushes kashish away and the bullet hits him on his arm
Sujal saw that 3 men were coming toward them he held kashish's hand and started running.kashish ki samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha ki why sujal was behaving like this. Actually it was dark outside and she could c nothing. but she kept running with sujal. They entered in the jungle like area. Suddenly she heard sound of firing. She looked back this time she saw that 3 men were chasing them and one of them had a gun. Seeing the view she gets terrified. Bhagte bhagte wo kafi andar a jate hai gunde bhi kafi peeche reh jate hai. Sujal stops and rests himself on a tree. Kashish was too terrified and she rested herself on sujal holding him tightly.dono ek dusre me kho jate hai Both of them are lost in each other's arms……and remain in that position till sujal cry out "aah..."…
Kashish: kya hua
Sujal: kuch nahi. Lagta hai wo log chale gaye.
Kashish: ha par ab kya hoga hume to ye bhi nahi pata ki humlog hai kaha
Sujal: samne kuch ghar jaisa dikh raha hai chalo waha chalte hai phir sochenge kya karna hai
Both moves towards the house kashish is walking slowly with support of sujal as her leg was injured in the house they meet the care taker.
Sujal: actually humara raste me accident ho gaya hai kya aj rat hum yaha reh sakte hai
Caretaker:thik hai waise bhi mai yaha akela hi hu. Tumlog yaha aram se raho The care taker tells him the way to go out of the place and he himself goes to his quarter
Sujal: kashish chalo aj rat hum yahi rahenge aur subah hote hi nikal jayenge
Kashish: ok [she was to scared to say anything]
She tries to get up but falls sujal holds her and carries her to the room. He keeps her on the bed. Phir wo uske pas jata hai and starts inspecting her leg
Sujal: bahut dard ho raha hai
Kasish nods her head in agreement. He gets the first aid box and applies medicine on her wound with great care so that it doesn't hurt her. As he ties bandage to the wound kashish cries in pain and gets into the arms of sujal
Kashish: mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai
Sujal: main hoon na mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga
Kasish: tum mere sath humesha rahoge na
Sujal: ha kashish
Just then kashish notices tht there is blood all over his coat
Kashish: sujal …khoon… kaise…
Sujal: kuch nahi kashish
Kashish: sujal open ur coat
Sujal: kuch nahi hai choti is chot hai bas
Kashish: maine kaha coat utaro mujhe dekhna hai
She forcibly make him open his coat
Kashish: sujal tumhe to goli lagi hai
Sujal: kuch hai hua hai tum bekar me ghabra rahi hi choti si chot hai thik ho jayegi
Kashish: just shut up itna khoon beh raha hai aur tum keh rahe ho ki ki choti chot hai. Kitna dard ho raha hoga.[crying] ye sab meri wajah se ho raha hai
Sujal: plz kashish ro mat jitni takleef mujhe is chot se ho rahi hai usse kahi jyada dard muje tumhari akhon me ason dekh ke hota hai
Kashish: agar tumhe kuch ho jata to.
Sujal: mujhe kuch nahi hoga
Kashish: tum mujhe chor ke to nahi chale jaoge na
Sujal: nahi mai tumhe kabhi chor ke nahi jaunga
Kashish: sujal I love u
Sujal: I love u too
Kashish: really sujal
Sujal: ha kashish jisdin maine tumhe pehli bar dekha tha usi din mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya tha
Kashish: to phir tumne mujhe bataya kyou nahi?
Sujal: mujhe laga ki pata nahi tum kaise react karogi aur mai ek dost nahi khona chahta tha. Waise mujhe un gundo ko thx bolna chahiye
Kashish: wo kyou
Sujal: unki wajah se mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse pyari cheez jo mil gai
Kashish: tum bhi na kabhi nahi sudhroge
Sujal: ha wo to hai. Chalo ab thora rest karlo thori hi der me subah ho jayegi
Kashish: ok
Leaving her on bed he rest himself on sofa and sits on floor.
Kashish; are tum waha kyou baithe ho waha tum so nahi paoge
Sujal: no I am fine here
After some times he felt someone besides him. He turns and finds kashish sittig there
Sujal: are kashish tum yaha
Kashish: ab tumhe bulaya to aye nahi to mai hi a gai
Sujal: tum bahut ziddi ho
Kashish: ha bachpan se
Sujal: to tum nahi manogi
Kashish: bilkul nahi
Sujal: ok to mai cushion le ke ata hu
Kashish: uski kya jaroorat hai tum ho na
Sujal: kya
Kashish uska hath upar sofe pe rakhti hai aur uspe sir rakhke so jati hai[ rem the hotel scene of kth ]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
such a nice part varallika dear... 👏
the last scene was very very cute & sweet.... i loved it totally.... 😳
please post the next part soon..me will be waiting for it eagerly.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hmmm no comments cool i think its time to stop
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
no plz cont soon I love this story lot plz hurry up with ur next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
omg.. soooo sweeett 😳 ........


continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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At khanna house all were having their dinner
Mihir:are ye kashish aur charu kaha hai
Tulsi: kya mihir tum bhi na tumhe kuch yad bhi rehta maine tumhe bataya to tha ki charu ek haft eke liye camp pe ja rahi hai
Mihir: oh ha mai bhul gaya thai and wht abt kashish
Tulsi: wo nandini ke ghar gai hai. maine hi use kaha tha ki rat ko akeli ghar na aye. Wo wahi se court chali jayegi
Mihir:are ha kal to uski gawahi hai. Hum bhi chalenge.
Tulsi: thik hai
It was abt 5 in the morning sujal wakes up kashish and they both move towards the rain road it. After abt 2 hours they reach there and gets lift in police jeep
At veena niwas
Time: 7 am
Some one knocks at the door. Kaka opens the door and gets very surprised as well as pleased to see akshat rishi and prem standing at the door. He goes and calls karan who also gets very happy to see them.
prem: kaka sujal kaha hai
Kaka: sujal wo to nahi hai
Rishi : kya matlab?
Kaka: are kal rat to wo ghar hi nahi aya mujhe laga ki tumhe bata ke gaya hoga
Karan : kya wo ghar nahi aya. Rat ko hum sath me hi nikle the phir….
Akshat:Shayad parwati aunty ke yaha hoga me hoga tu phone to kar
He calls agarwal mansion
Parwati: hello
Karan: hello aunty. Mai karan bol raha hu
Parwati: ha bol karan
Karan: aunty wo sujal hai waha
Parwati: sujal. Yaha? Nahi to wo to tumlogo ke sath hi nikla tha
Karan: ha par wo ghar nahi lauta hai
Parwati: kya
[om and nandini comes hearing parwati screaming]
Om: kya hua parwati?
Parwati: wo karan bol raha tha ki sujal
Om: kya hua sujal ko?
Parwati: wo sujal ghar nahi lauta hai rat se
Nandini:are to office me hoga
Parwati: nahi wo waha bhi nahi hai.
Om: wht? Hume waha chalna chahiye.
Nandini: ha papa
All three pf them reaches veena niwas. There karan tell them every thing. Just then nandini's cell starts ringing
Nandini: hello
Tulsi:hello nandini. Beta jara kashish se bat karwana pata nahi kyou uska phone lag nahi raha hai
Nandini: ji aunty wo aunty sujal aur kashish ka kal rat se kuch pata nahi chal raha hai
Tulsi: kya
Nandini: humlog bhi yaha bahut pareshan hai ap log plz jaldi veena niwas me a jaiye
Tulsi: ha hum sab abhi ate hai
She hangs on the phone and with mihir reaches veena mansion. There karan explains the whole situation to her
Tulsi: kahi un gundo ne to……. Maine kaha tha ki mat uljho unse par nahi ……. Koi meri bat hi nahi manta……ab dekho dono bacho ki jan khatre me par gai…. Kahi kuch ho gaya to….
Parwati: kuch nahi hoga dono ko tum hausla rakho
Mihir:ha tulsi tum fikar mat karo mai dhoond ke launga unhe
Om: 10 baj gaye hai 11 baje hearing hai ek kam karte hai tumlog court jao mai akshat aur mihir unhe dhoondne ki koshish kare hai
Nandini: papa mai aur rishi bhi apke sath chalenge
Om: thik hai chalo. Aur agar kisi ko bhi kuch pata chalta hai to plz infoms us
Karan :thik hai
Karan tulsi prem akshat and parwati were in the court room where trial of the guys was going on. It was tie for kashish's witness. Her name was being called but still there was no trace of her. Some how the lawyer took 15 mins break from the judge. All were very worried
On the other hand mihir om rishi and nandini were in the police station to register fir. On their way they found sujal's car standing on the road and blood scattered all over the place.
At the court.
The time given by court is over.
Judge: 15 mins khatam ho chuke hai. Plz present ur woitness mr. public prosecutor
Public prosecutor: your honour mera gawah abhi tak court nahi pahucha hai. Plz sir I request the court to plz give some more time to the prosecution
Defence lawyer: your honour this is nothing but waste of time. Nujhe nahi lagta ki inke pas koi gawah hai waise bhi ye adalat ka kafi waqt barbad kar chuke hai. So I rquest the court to plz cast its decision
Judge: court ne pehle hi apko jaroorat se jyada waqt de chuki hai par ab ye adalat aur intezar nahi kar sakti. Sare gawaho aur sabuto ko dekhte huye ye saf hota hai ki prosecution kuch bhi prove nahi kar paya hai isi liye ye adalat…………..
Tabhi koi court ke gate par se chilata hai " rukiye judge sahib" all turn around and find kashish and sujal standing at the door.
They entered the court room karan rash towards them. Kashish went to the witness box in the mean time sujal fells unconscious seeing this tulsi and parwati rushes towards him. Karan prem and parwati takes him to the hospital. Immediately he is taken to the O.T. on the other hand in the court kashish give her statement and the culprits are sentenced life imprisonment. After the hearing they all rush to the hospital. Sujal is still in the O.T. karan informs mihir about sujal and kashish. They also come to the hospital.after abt an hour doctor comes out of O.T.
Mihir: doctor sahab ab sujal kaisa hai?
Doctor: dekhiye abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai. Khoon jyada beh jane ki wajah se patient ki halat bahut critical ho gai hai.
Om: par koi jyada serious bat to nahi hai
Doctor: filhal to hum kuch bhi nahi keh sakte agar agle 12 ghanto me unhe hosh nahi aya to khatre ki bat ho sakti hai.
Rishi: wht do u mean by kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Agar mere big b ko kuch bhi hua na to mai tumhe chorunga nahi
Prem : rishi sambhalo apnea p ko
Rishi: dekho na prem wo doctor kya keh raha tha ki kuch bhi…….. aise kaise kuch bhi ho sakta hai [he starts crying]
Prem: [hugging him]nahi rishi kuch nahi hoga sujal ko hum use kuch nahi hone denge
Kashish starts crying
Kashish: ye sab meri wajah se hua hai. Meri hi wajah se sujal yaha hospital me hai
Parwati: nahi beta Tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua hai
Kashish: aunty sujal ko kuch hoga to nahi na
Parwati: nahi beta wo thik ho jayega. Kuch nahi hoga use ab tum rona band karo
Just then nurse shouts from sujal's room
Nurse: doctor doctor
Prem: kya bat hai nurse
Nurse: ap plz doctor ko bulayiye.
Mihir: par bat kya hai
Nurse plz call the doc immediately
Prem calls the doctor
Nurse: doctor the patient is sinking
Doctor: wht. Jaldi chalo
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
really nice ff varallika.... 👏 gr8 gng... 👏 continue soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
wow gr8 part
hope sujal gets wel soon 😳 😕
n do cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
nothing can happen to sujal!!!

save himm!!

continue sooonn

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