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Posted: 18 years ago
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In khanna house kashish was also thinking of the sweet moments spent with sujal their first encounter with each other, the accident and finally their love confession. She was on top of the world. She was feeling like all her dreams were fulfilled. She was among those few lucky ppl who were loved by those whom they loved. She was sure that none of their families would have any objection on their marriage. Full of thoughts and excitement she dialed sujal's number. Sujal picked up the phone even without looking at the no
Sujal: hello that's that
Kashish: acha to ab humri awaz bhi yad nahi apko
Sujal: kashish tum
Kashish: kya bat hai sujal tum pareshan lag rahe ho
Sujal: koi bat nahi hai
Kashish: tum achi tarah se jante ho u cant lie to me
Sujal: nahi actually mere sir me thora Dard hai
Kashish: tumhari tabiyat to thik hai Na. Aise kaise sir me Dard ho Gaya. Sujal tell me truth
Sujal: I am fine bas exertion ki wajah se shayad
Kashish: are you sure
Sujal: absolutely
Kashish: ok then tum Aram karo kal mai tumse Milne ati hu
Sujal: ok
Kashish: goodnight
Sujal; goodnight
Sujal [to himself]: I am sorry kashish Maine tumse jhooth bola. Par kaise batata tumhe ye sab kaise batata ke humare sapne jo humne sath dekhe the wo ab kabhi pure nahi honge kaise batata ke humare sapne pure hone se pehle hi toot gaye.kismat mujhe ek aise do rahe pe le ai hai jaha ek taraf prem hai uski khushiya hai. Wo khushiya jo mai usse ek bar chin chukka hu. Dusri taraf tum ho jise mai apne se bhi jyada pyar karta hu. Jise mai zindagi ki sari khushiya dena chahta hu. Par prem mai use bhi khush dekhna chahta hu aur uski zindagi me khushiya sirf tum la sakti ho. Maine uske chehre pe wo khushi wo pyar dekha hai jo kabhi nisha ke liye hua karta tha. Agar is bar uski umeed tooti to shayad wo zindagi me kabhi sambhal nahi payega. Nahi mai aisa nahi hone dunga. Nahi tootne dunga prem ko. Chahe iske liye mujhe kashish ki nafrat hi kyou na banni pare. Ha mai apne liye uske pyar ko nafrat me badal dunga nafrat me badal dunga. Ye mera wada hai kashish sirf prem ki hogi .

Next day at khanna house
Charu: good morning di
Kashish: good morning charu
Charu; kya bat hai bahut khoi khoi lag rahi ho
Kashish: aisi to koi bat nahi hai
Charu: tumhe kya lagta hai tum nahi bataogi hto hume pata nahi chalega
Kashish: kya pata nahi chalega
Charu: yahi ke u r in love. Tum humse kuch chupa nahi sakti. Mom dad ne to garewals se bat bhi kar li hai
Kashish: kya? Tu sach bol rahi hai
Charu: mai bilkul sach bol rahi hu aur agar yakin nahi ata to neeche chal ke mom dad se hi pooch lo. Infact 15 days bad karan and nandini ke sath sath tumhari shadi ki bhi date fix hui hai
Kashish: par mom dad ne to mujhe kuch nahi bataya
Charu: kaise batate rat ko humlog late ghar aye the
Kashish: to tujhe kaise pata chala?
Charu: mujhe akshat ne bataya. But di this is no fair tumne mujhe bataya kyou nahi
Kashish: kya nahi bataya?
Charu: yahe ke u r in love
Kashish: to tune mujhe bataya ke u love akshat
Charu: wo mai apko batane hi wali thi
Just then tulsi calls both of them for break fast
On the breakfast table
Tulsi: kashis mujhe infact hume tujhse kuch bat karni hai
Kashish:ji mumma
Charu: don't worry mumma maine di ko sab bata diya hai
Mihir: beta humne tumse bina pooche hi unhe ha kardi but ye mat samajhna ke hum tumpe apna decision thop rahae hai. Zindagi tumhari hai decide bhi tumhe hi karna hai u can always say no.
Kashish: aisi bat nahi hai papa. I have no objection
Mihir: thx beta
Tulsi: waise to mujhe sujal jyada pasand tha but prem bhi acha larka hai. Kyou kashish
Kashish: ji mumma[wondering why was her mom talking abt prem]
Mihir: maine to socha bhi nahi tha ke vasu ji samne se kashish aur prem ka rishta le ke ayenge
Kashish[shocked]: what mera aur prem ka rishta
Tulsi: ha vasu ji ne tera hat prem ke liye hi to manga hai
Kashish: but mumma mai………[wo uth ke darwaze ki taraf jati hai]
Tulsi; are kaha ja rahi ho?
Kashish: plz mumma abhi mujh se kuch mat poochiye
Saying this she leaves
In garewal house every one has left early as they wanted to complete all their pending works as soon as possible, so that they can get involved in arrangements of wedding as soon as possible, except sujal he was still sleeping but there was no rest or peace on his face. It seemed like something was disturbing him very deeply.it was 8 in the morning and still there was no sign of sujal anywhere.he was woken up by a knock on his door.his head was very heavy and was aching severely. Was wondering what made him sleep so late hrs. he heared the door knock again
Sujal: come in[parwati enters]are manna ap? Apko knock karne ki kya jaroorat par gai
Parwati: maine socha ke ab tu bara ho gaya hai to shayad mera bina knock kiye ana tujhe pasand aye ya nahi.
Sujal:[having tears in his eyes] pls manna ap to aisa mat kahiye. Ap meri himmat hai agar apne hi sath chor diya to mai ji nahi paunga
Parwati: chup phir aisi bat kabhi mat karna
Sujal: manna ap mujhse naraz to nahi hai na
Parwati: agar mere naraz hone se tu apna faisla badal leta to jaroor hoti. Par mujhe pata hai ke ab chahe koi kuch bhi kahe tu apna faisla nahi badlega
Sujal: sare log chalegaye
Parwati: ha bat thori der pehle hi nikle hai
Sujal: main bhi chalta hu
Parwati: magar nashta to kar le
Sujal: man nahi hai
Parwati: thora sa kha le aise bhukhe pet ghar se nahi nikalte. Tu ruk mai abhi le kar ati hu
Parwati enters the room with plate of breakfast. Sujal was sitting on sofa holding his head in his hands and leaning on the side of sofa his eyes was closed. On his face there was a shadow of unhappiness and unrest yet was looking so innocent so pure. Parwati smiled to herself. She kept her hand on his face but quickly removed it. Her expression changed to worry. His face was extreamly hot. In a sense it was nearly burning. Feeling the touch sujal also opened his eyes
Parwati: sujal tujhe to bahut tez bukhar hai
Sujal: I am fine
Parwati: kaha ja raha hai
Sujal: office. Zaroori kam hai
Parwati: aur kitna jhoot bolega sujal? Ye kyou nah kehta ke kashish se bhagna chahta hai. Yahi soch raha hai na ke thori der me jab wo ghar ayegi to kya kahega usse. Kaise nazre milayega
Sujal:aisa nahi hai.
Parwati: dekh kal jo faisla tune kiya hai wo tera apna hai aur us ki wajah se jo bhi situation creat hogi use face bhi sirf tujhe hi karna hai. Mai na to tere us faisle me tere sath hu nahi uske ane wale parinam me. That's solely ur personal matter. Par mai itna janti hu ke mai tujhe is halat me ghar se bahar nahi jane dungi. Ek beti kho chuki hu dosra beta nahi khona chahti. Ha itna jaroor kahungi ki jab faisla le hi liya hai to usse bhago mat uska samna karo
[saying this she leaves the room. Sujal drops the idea of going office and goes to parwati's room there he finds her crying]
Sujal: - I am sorry manna. [Parwati says nothing] plz manna agar ap mujhse naraz hai to plz mujhe dantiye chahe to mariye par is tarah se khamosh mat rahiye. Mai sab she sakta hu par apkI ye khamoshi nahi
Parwati: mere ye asu teri wajah se nahi hai sujal mai to sirf apni kismat pe afsoos kar rahi hu. Bhagwan neb hi na jane kaisi kismat di hai mujhe jo mujhe har bar apne bacho ko unki khushi se dur hote huye dekhna parta hai aur mai kuch kar bhi nahi patihu.
Sujal: kyou kosti hai ap apni kismat ko sab kuch to diya hai isne apko. Om uncle jaisa jeewan sathi nandini jaisi beti aura b karan jaisa damad.apko to naz hona chahiye apni kismat pe
Parwati: sahi kaha tune mujhe apni kismat pe naz hona chahiye jo usne mujhe tujh jaisa beta diya
Sujal: mujh jaisa beta jisne siwaye dukh aur asu ke apko kuch nahi diya jisne apki beti tak apse chin liya
Parwati: sujal tu aj bhi us bat ke liye khud ko responsiblemanta hai?
Sujal: I am sorry mera matlab wo nahi tha
Parwati: shayad humare pyar me hi koi kami reh gai hogi jo aj tak tu us bat ko bhul nahi paya
Just then nandini enters in the room and parwati goes out instructing sujal to take the medicine and drink the juice kept on the table .
Nandini: kya hua sujal tum thik to ho
Sujal: ya am fine
Nandini: to ye dawai?
Sujal: bas thora sa bukhar hai thik ho jayega
Nandini: sujal mujge tumse kuch bat karni hai.
Sujal: ha bolo
Nandini: tumhe pata hai prem and kashish ki shadi tay ho gai hai
Sujal: ofcourse I no kal om uncle ne sab ke samne hi to ye announcemen kit hi
Nandini: sab kuch jante huye bhi tum kuch nahi kar rahe ho
Sujal: what are you talking about mai kya nahi kar raha hu
Nandini: why are u behaving like this ? we all no that u and kashish love each other

sujal juice lene ke bahane peeche murta hai actually wo nahi chahta ke nandini uske chehre se ye parh le ke wo jhoot bol raha hai. Tabhi wo kashish ko ate huye dekhta hai. He turns around and starts laughing.
Sujal: oh nandini don't tell me ki tumne ye sab seriously le liya. Par sach to ye hai ke I don't love kashish it was just a bet between me and moh
Nandini: bet?
Sujal: ha bet. U rem college ke first day hi kashish ne hum dono ko thappar mari thi. To us din kashish se badla lene ke liye moh ne mujhse bet lagai thi ke agar mai kashish se I luv u bolwa deta hu to wo mujhe apni nai car de dega. Aur kal mai ye shart jeet gaya. Moh bhi kal wahi garden me tha when kashish was proposing to me. You no nandini tumhe us time uski shakal dekhni chahiye thi. Now ab tum muhese ye poochogi ki agar mai bet jit gaya tha to where is the car right. To suno gari ki chabhi dete waqt bechare ki jan nikal rahi thi mujhe uspe bahut daya ai maine use uski car wapas kar di
Kashish enters the room clapping hands
kashish: wah Mr.Sujal Garewa;l wah kya missal hai dosti ki. Dost ka dukh dekha nahi gaya to use car lauta di. Wah. Bahut daya a rahi thin a us pe?
Sujal tumhe mujh par daya nahi hai. Meri zindagi ke sath khelte huye aisa ghatiya mazak karte huye ek bar bhi tumhe mujh pe daya nahi ai. Aur mai pagal yaha ye soch ke ai thi ke chahe koi mera sath de ya na de koi mujhe samjhe ya na samjhe mera sujal mera sath jaroor dega, wo mujhe jaroor samjhe ga par mujhe nahi pata tha ki jis sujal ko mai khud se jyada pyar karti hu uske liye mera pyar shirt jitney ka sirf ek zariya hai. Bolo sujal aisa karte huye tumhe mujhpar bilkul daya nahi ai? Bolo
Sujal: ha nahi ai tumpe daya mujhe. Daya un pe ki jati hai jo uske layak ho.[turning in opp. To nandini and kashish] Par mujhe to tumhare gurur ko torna tha. Thappar mara tha na tumne mujhe? Maine to usi din faisla kar liya tha k eek din mai tumhare ghamand ko hamesha ke liye tor kar hi rahumga. Barbad kar dunga tumhari zindagi. Tumse tumhare jine ka. To lo aj maine tumse tumhari zindagi chin li. Janta hu ke tum mujhse bahut pyar karti ho mere siwa kisi se shadi nahi karogi kabhi khush nahi rahogi. Aur yahi to mai chahta tha. Us ek thappar ke wajah se aj tumne apna sab kuch kho diya.[breaks the glass of juice that he was holding] so Miss.Kashish Khanna u can leave now. Par jate jate ek advice leti jao age se kabhi bhi kisi ko thappar marne se pehle dus ba nahi nahi sau bar jaroor sochna. Now just leave.

Kashish leaves crying bitterly
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
v sad part... 😭 whts this yaar..both r gng 2 be seprated..n kash marryng prem...don do this... 😭 ....plz kuch karoo..sujal n kash 4 each other only...kuch aur na kardena... 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nandini: wah sujal mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni achi acting bhi kar lete ho. Nahi to mai apne college drama ke lead role me tumhe hi leti.
Sujal: it was just a bet nothing else
Nandini: bet ke bare m eto pata nahi par jo drama tumne abhi jo drama kashish ke samne kiya wo jaroor kabile tariff tha
Sujal: maine kashish ko sirf sach bataya hai
Nandini: sach hi to nahi bataya hai tumne use aur sach ye hai kit um usse pyar karte ho
Sujal: comeon yar nandini tum mujhe bachpan se janti ho tumhe lagta hai ki mai kashish jaisi larki se pyar kar sakta hu
Nandini: bachpan se janti hu tumhe isiliye se dawe se keh sakti hu ke u love her[she holds her wounded hand] aur uska sabut hai ye khun jiske behne ki tumhe koi parwa nahi hai kyouki isse jyada parwa tumhe hai kashish ke akhon se behte huye asuo ki. Tum kashish se pyar karte ho iska asabut hai ye asu jo tumhari akho me is chot ki wajah se nahi aye hai balki us dard ki wahjah se aye hai jo tumne kashish ko diya hai.sujal ek bar meri akho me dekh kar kaho ke tumne jo kuch bhi kashish se kaha wo sab sach tha mai wada karti hu ke uske bad mai koi sawal nahi poochungi
[Sujal turns around] nahi bol sakte na. sujal tum puri duniya se jhoot bol sakte ho yaha tak ke apne ap se bhi jhut bol sakte ho par mujhse nahi. Are tumhare chehre pe saf likha hai ke tum kashish se pyar karte ho.
Sujal: ha karta hu karta hu mai pyar kashish se. itna pyar ke ji nahi sakta uske bina. Meri har sans har dharkan pe sirf uska haq hai uski ek muskurahat ke liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu. Par dekho meri kismat aj maine use zindagi ka sabse bara gam diya hai. Uski akho se behta hare k asu mujhe sau zakham deta hai par aj uske has asu ki wajah mai hi hu. Ek bar to man kiya ke use sab kuch bata du par tabhi prem ka hasta hua chehra mere samne a gaya uski wo muskurahat jo kashish ke name se duguni ho jati hai. Mujhe me himmat nahi thi ki main us muskurahat ko dobara usse chin saku. Kashish ke asu to thore dino me tham jayenge par agar maine use sab kuch bata diya to prem ki muskurahat zindagi bhar ke liye chin jayegi aur mai itna swarthy nahi hu ke apni khushi ke liye prem ko zindagi bhar ka gam de du. Ye mujhse nahi hoga nahi hoga
Nandini: lekin sujal tumhara ye faisla tum tino ki zindagi barbad kar dega
Sujal: Prem apne pyar se dheere dheere kashish ko apna bana lega
Nandini; aur tum? Dekh paoge apni akho ke samne kashish ko jate huye. Bula paoge use bhabhi
Sujal: shayad nahi. Isiliye mai ja raha hu.
Nandini: matlab?
Sujal: mai agle hafte humesha ke liye London ja raha hu
Nandini; par sujal 15 din bad humari shadi hai tum aise nahi ja sakte
Sujal: mujhe jana hi hoga nandini. Prem ki khushi ke liye kashish ki khushi ke liye I will have to go waise bhi prem abse India ka business sambhalega dad bhi yahi shift ho rahe hai to London ka business sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye.
Nandini: par sujal
Sujal: plz nandini mujhse koi aur sawal mat poocho. Bas ye sat din mera sath de do.

On the other hand she was not able to believe that for sujal her love was only a bet a way to take revenge. All this was a night mare for her and she wanted it to end so that when she wakes up she finds every thing as it was a day before.
Only few hours before everything was so beautifull. Only few hours before he was with sujal she was with her love. Both had confessed their love. Only few hours before she had dreams in her eyes. Dreams of their beautiful future. Dreams of spending her life with her love. World seemed so beautiful But in these few hours every thing was ruined her dreams her hopes her expectations everything was gone. the man she loved was only playing game with her. The man she loved most was happy coz he had ruined her life. He was happy coz he knew that she wont gte happy anymore he was happy that she wont marry anyone
Kashish: nahi mai sujal ko jitney nahi dungi. Mai use bata dungi ki mai uske bina bhi khush reh sakti hu. Reh sakti hu mai khush uske bina. Nahi barbad karne dungi mai use apni zindagi. mai khush rahungi. Aur meri khushi sujal ki har hogi sabse bari hai. [She reached home]
Tulsi: kaha chali gai thi pata hai humlog kitne pareshan ho gaye the.
Mihir: kaha gait hi beta
Kashish: agarwal house
Tulsi: augural house
Kashish: ha kuch bate saf karni thi.
Tulsi: matlab
Kashish: matlab ye ke mai prem se shadi karne ke liye taiyar hu

All were very happy in khanna house coz kashih has agreed to marry prem. Tulsi called agarwal house to give them the good news.in agarwal house Sujal vasu parwati rishi and nandini were sitting in the hall. Just then the phone rang. Sujal picked the phone
Sujal: hello agarwal house
Tulsi: hello kaun Sujal? Main Tulsi bol rahi hu
Sujal: ji aunty ek minute hol kijiye mai manna ko phone deta hu

Sujal gives phone to parwati

Parwati: hello
Tulsi: ha parwati ek khushkhabari hai
Parwati: khush khabari??
Tulsi: ha wo Kashish shadi ke liye man gai hai
Parwati[shocked] kya Kashish man gai
Tulsi: ha. Ab jaldi se taiyariya shuru kar do sat din bad sagai haina
Parwati: ha mai abhi sabko bata deti hu[she keeps down the phone]
Vasu: kya kaha Tulsi ne?
Parwati: usne kaha ke Kashish ne shadi ke liye ha kar di hai
Vasu: really? Oh parwati tumhe nahi pata ye khabar sun ke mai kitni khush hu. tumhe pata hai jab maine Kashish ko dekha than a tab hi mujhe laga tha ke sirf Kashish hi hai jo mere prem ki zindagi me khushiya dobara wapas la sakti hai. Par sath hi ek dar bhi tha ke kahi usne shadi se inkar kar diya toK. But ab sab thik hai K.sujal tum to Kashish ko pehle se jante ho tumhe kya lagta hai mera faisla sahi hai?
[Sujal was lost in his own world. Every moment that he had spent with Kashish was floating infront of his eyes. Every moment he was hating himself for hurting Kashish.]
Rishi: big B ap thik to haiK.big b
[this time he keeps his hand on his shoulder this brings Sujal back to his senses]
Sujal: ha kuch kaha tumne?
vasu: kya hua Sujal? Kaha khoye huye ho?
Sujal: kuch nahi aunty bas ek project ke bare me soch raha tha. Waise ap kuch keh rahi thi?
Vasu: ha mai tumse Kashish ke bare me pooch rahi thi.
Sujal: bahut achi larki hai prem ko bahut khush rakhegi
Vasu: I knew it. Mujhe pata tha ke Kashish hi wo larki hai jo mere bete ki muskan use lauta sakti hai.

Days were passing on wid both Garewal and khanaa houses busy the preparation of marriage.Sujal was trying his best to cover up his emotions but jane anjane uski ankho me dard saf nazar a raha tha udhar Kashish ka bhi yahi halt ha. Magar shadi ki taiyaro me sare log itne masroof the ke kisi ko inki ankho me basa hua dard nazar nahi a raha tha.sabhi ane wali khushiyo ke swagat me lage the magar kisi ko us toofan ka ilm nahi tha jo in khushiyo ki buniyad me chupi thi. Dekte hi dekhte 6 din beet gaye. Kal charo ki engagement thi. Pure ghar me Khushi ka mahaul tha. Shor sharabe se pura ghar gunj raha tha kisi ko sans lene tak ki fursat nahi thi. Charo taraf bas khushiya hi khushiya thi. Insab ke beech ghar me ek aisa karma bhi tha jaha koi Khushi koi shor kuch bhi nahi tha. Waha agar kuch tha to akela pan dard aur zindagi se dur jane ki tees aur wo karma tha Sujal ka jo bheer se dur waha apni zindagi apni Kashish se dur jane ki taiyariya kar raha tha. Lekin use ek bat ki khaushi thi ki wo apni zindagi ek aise insane ke hatho saup ke jar aha hai jispe use duniya me sabse jyada bharosa hai. Inhi khayalo me khoya wo apni packing kar raha tha ke tabhi uske darwaje pe koi dastak deta hai.
Sujal: come in[nandini enters in the room] are nandini tum yaha?
Nandini: kyou mai yaha nahi a sakti?
Sujal: nahi magar tumhe to abhi neeche hona chahiye
Nandini: acha to ab mujhe kab lya karna chahiye ye tum mujhe bataoge
Sujal: mera matlab wo nahi tha. Phir bhi agar tumhe bura laga ho to I am sorry
Nandini: mujhe bura lage ya na lage isse tumhe koi farak parta hai Sujal? Jab tumhe Kashish ke asuo se Kashish ke dard se koi farak nahi parta to mere bura lagne se tumhe kya farak parega.?
Sujal: nandini plz kames kam tum to mujhe galat mat samjho. Tumhe achi tarah se pata hai ki Kashish ka ek asu mujhe hazar maut marta hai
Nandini: bilkul jhoot. Agar ye sach hota na Sujal to tum yaha se aise bhag nahi rahe hote. sujal tum to yaha se halato se bhag jaoge kyouki tumme apne pyar ko kisi aur ka hote huye dekhne ki himmat nahi hai par Kashish ka kya Sujal? Use to khud apni zindagi apne sapne apna pyar sabkuch luta ke kisi aur ka hona hoga. Kyou Sujal kyou? Kya galati hai uski. Kya gunah kiya hai usne jo tum use itne bari saza de rahe ho? Batao mujhe kya galati hai uske?
Sujal:[shouts] mujhse pyar karne ki galati ki hai usne. Uski galati yahi hai ke wo mere kareeb ai.suna tumne uski galati ye hai ki usne mujhese pyar kiya hai. Sharap(curse) hu mai baddua hu jiski bhi zindagi me jata hu uski zindagi tabah kar deta hu. job hi mujhse pyar karta hai use zindagi me dukho ke siway kuch nahi milta nisha mujhe apne bhai se bhi jyada pyar karti thi aur maine use kya diya mar dala maine use. Mam humesha mujhe rishi se jyada pyar karti thi maine unhe bhi mar dala. Prem ne meri wajah se apna pyar kho diya. Manna meri wajahse humesha dukhi rehti ha. Jab mai in sabko Khushi nahi de paya to Kashish ko kaise de sakta hu?mai ek bura saya hu nandini jo agar kisi ki zindagi me par jaye to uski puri zindagi barbad kar deta hai. Isiliye behtar yahi hoga ke mai yaha se tumlogo ki zindagi se dur chala jau[teary eyes] taki tumlog sukun se reh sako
[nandini was abt to say some thing just then prem enters in the room]
Prem: ye lo tumlog yaha bate kar rahe ho aur waha mai tumlogo ko pure ghar me dhoond raha hu.[ tabhi uski nazar Sujal ke bag par parti hai] Sujal tum kahi ja rahe ho?
Sujal: ha wo London me kafi kam ruka para hai wahi ja raha hu
Prem : kab ja rahe ho?
Sujal: aj rat ki flight hai
prem; kya iskamatlaK Sujal this is not doneK
tabhi karan bhi waha a jata hai
karan: kyou bahi kya bate ho rahi hai?
Prem: karan Sujal aj rat ko London jar aha hai
Karan: what? Tera dimag to nahi kharab hai. Kal humlogo ki engagement hai aur tu aj London ja raha hai. Nahi tu kahi nahi jayega
Sujal: plz tumlog samjho mera jana bahut jaruri hai
Karan: ok to ja
Prem: karan ye tu kya bol raha hai
Karan: pehle meri puri bat to sun lo. Sujal tu aram se London ja mai shadi and engagement tere ane tak postpone kar deta hu.
Sujal: ye kya pagalpan hai karan?
Karan: bachpan se humlogo ne har kam sath kiya hai. Mai tu aur nandini humesha humlog sath rahe sath khele sath school gaye sath college join kya hark am sath kiya hai humne. Maine aur tune to is dharti me ankhe bhi sath hi kholi hai. Humare birthdates bhi same hai aise me tune soch bhi kaise liya ki mai apni zindagi ka itna important din tere bina hiK. Nahi agar tera London jana itna jaroori hai to mai apni shadi ki date age barha deta hu. ab faisla tere hath me hai

after a long pause Sujal dials a no on his cell
Sujal: hello mr. batra
Batra: yes speaking.
Sujal: can you plz cancel my booking for London tonight
Batra: okay sir
Sujal: thx[he keeps down the phone and turns to karan] ab khush
Karan[ hugging him] bahut khush
Prem: acha chalo ab sab log neeche chalo bahut der ho gai hai
Sujal: tum log jao mai ye saman rakh ke ata hu
Karan : ok but jaldi ana. Chale nandini
Nandini: tum dono jao mujhe sujal se kuch bat karni hai.
Karan: ye lo ab ise bhi kam hai[to prem]lagta hai pure ghar me sirf hum dono hi bekar baithe hai
Prem: chal neeche chate hai waha atleast hume full attention to milti hai
Nandini: ab bolte hi rahoge ya jaoge bhi
Karan: ha ha jate hai. Kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki tumhari shadi mujhse nahi sujal se honi chahiye thi
Nandini: sahi kaha tumne ab isse pehle ki mai apna faisla badlu tum chup chap yaha se chale jao
Karan: are bapre ab to jana hi hoga shadi ka sawal hai

[karan and prem goes out of room to join celebrations leaving sujal and nandini alone in the room]
Nandini: sujal tumne yaha rukne ke liye ha kaise kar di
Sujal:tumhari wajah se
Nandini[confused look] mai kuch samjhi nahi
Sujal: nandini tumhine kaha tha na ki Kashish akele ye saza kyou bhugte to lo maine tumhari shikayat dur kar di. Kashish ke sath sath ab mai bhi ye saza bhugtunga. Magar shayad ye saza mere liye kuch jyada hi hogi Kashish ko to is bat ki tassali hai ke usne galat insane se pyar kiya. Ek aise insane se jo use dhoka de raha tha. Par mujhe to us dhoke ka bhojh bhi uthana hai
Nandini: sujal tum kyou apni aur Kashish ki zindagi barbad karne pe tule ho? Dekho abhi bhi kuch nahi bigra hai hum neeche ja kar sabko sabkuch bata dete hai believe me wo log man jayenge
Sujal: nahi nandini bahut der ho gai hai ab kuch nahi ho saktaK. Kuch nahi hi sakta

CUT TO KHANNA HOUSE

Kashish was sitting in the middle of hall surrounded by gals and relative. Tulsi use mehandi laga rahi thi[ sorry guys mujhe nahi pata ki kaunsi rasam kab hoti hai bas situation banana ke liye engagement ke pehle hi mehandi ki rasam dal di. So plz just bear this wired timing wid meƒ]
Simran: wow aunty apne kitni khubsurat mehandi lagai hai ise. Plz mujhe bhi laga dijiye na
Tulsi: are ruk pehle iska to ho jaye
Simran: aunty apne iske hat pe p to kahi nahi likha
Tulsi: wo shadi ke pehle likhte hai abhi nahi[again an wired logic sorry]
Simran: jo bhi ho ye mehandi Kashish ke hath me bahut achi lag rahi hai
Charu:sambhalo kahi jiju Kashish ke wajaye uski mehandi hi na dekhte reh jaye
Simran: jab bhi bolegi bura hi bolegi. Are Kashish to khud itni sundar hai ki majal hai kisi ki jo ispar se apni nazar hata sake
Tulsi: acha ab ise cherna band karo aur upar ja kar iske engagement ka jora le ao
Simran; aunty to kal hai. Ise kya aj se hi taiyar kar ke baitha dengi?
Tulsi: hey bhagwan mujhe is pagal se bachao. Are jhalli mujhe wo jora bhagwan ke charno me rakhna hai taki un ka ashirwad mil sake samjhi
Simran: oh to ye bat hai
Tulsi: bat wat chor aur jaldi ja ke jora ke kar a
Simran: abhi lai[ wo kasish ke room me jati hai] bed par to nahi hai shayad cupboard me hoga[ she opens the cupboard and finds the dress there she pull it out in the meantime she notices some thing falling from the cupboard she picks it up] are ye to Kashish ki diary hai.

FLASH BACK

[we c Kashish is sitting in some garden busy in writing some thing in the meantime simaran comes and snatches the diary from her hands and starts runnigs Kashish also starts chasing her]
Kashish: simran ki bacchi meri diary lauta de
Simran nahi aj to mai ye parh ke rahungi ke tu is stupid diary me kya likhti hai
Kashish: nahi simran plz mujhe meri diary lauta de
Simran: lauta dungi but parhne ke bad aj tu mujhe nahi rok sakti
Kashish: simran statue
[Simran freezes in the same position Kashish comes and takes away her diary] statue over
Simran: kya yar its not fair tu hamesha aisa hi karti hai. Lekin yad rakhna ek din mai ye diary parh ke rahungi
Kashish: aisa kabhi nahi hogaK kabhi nahi

END OF FLASHBACK

Simran: aj acha mauka hai aj mujhe pata chal jayega ki wo is bekar diary me likhti kya hai
[she opens first page of the diary]

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do sumthng varallika...this cannot happen...dont let them be seprated....anyways nice part....gr8 work... 😊
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Aj college me humara pehla din tha aur pehle hi din mai ek pagal se takra gai nahi nahi pagal nahi tha wo actually kharus tha. Mai to as usual simran ke peeche bhag rahi thi patanahi kaha se akar wo mujhse takra gaya. Sorry tak bolne ki jaroorat nahi samjhi usne uapr se ghur aise raha tha jaise sari galati meri hai. But u no galati uski bhi nahi thi bhagwan ne uski shakal hi aisi banai thi pura Bandar . chirgoza kahi ka. Upar se tragedy ye ke wo nandini ka best frnd hai. I wonder Koi use apna dost bana kaise sakta hai?


[she turns the page]

Kabhi kabhi hum jo sochte hai wo sahi nahi hota. Aj tak mai sujal ko ek akru arrogant and badtameez insane samajhti thi par aj mujhe lagta hi ke uske is chehre ke peeche ek bahut hi acha aur saf dil hai. Mujhe nahi pata ki jo mai feel kar rahi hu wo kya hai par mai uski yado ko apne dimag se ek pal ke liye bhi nahi hata pa rahi hu. ye mujhe kya ho raha hai kahi mujhe …………..

[next page]

Veena aunty aur nisha ke bare me suna to ache bhar ai. Pata nahi nandini aur sujal is dard ko kaise sehte honge. Itni takleefo ke wawjud dusro ke liye haste rehna koi asan bat nahi. Inhe dekh kar pata chalta hai ke dusro ke liye jeeena kya hota hai.

[next page]

Oh I am so happy today sujal ab bilkul thik hai. Kal use hospital se discharge bhi mil jayega. Pata nahi mai uska samna kar paungi bhi ya nahi. Uski is halat ka agar koi zimedar hai to wo mai hu. meri wajahse hi wo itne dino hospital me tha. Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke mai use is halat me dekhungi. Jan se bhi jyada pyar karti hu usse uski ye halat mujhse bardash nahi hoti. Yes I love sujal I love sujal more than my life

[ simran was shocked to read this. She was not able to understand that why was Kashish marrying prem if she loves sujal. She was abt to turn the page whil Kashish enters the room]

Kashish: simran statue
[Simran freezes in the same position Kashish comes and takes away her diary] statue over
Simran: Kashish ye kya hai
Kashish: ek sapna
Simran: Kashish mazak mat kar plz.agar tu sujal se pyar karti ahi to prem se sahdi kyou kar rahi hai
Kashish: kyouki sab yahi chahte hai
Simran: wht do u mean by sab yahi chahte hai? Mai tujhe aisa nahi karne dungi. Mai abhi neeche ja kar sabko bata deti hu.
Kashish: nahi simran ab bahut der ho chuki hai. Ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Waise bhi sujal mujhse pyar nahi karta
Simran: mai samjhaungi use I am sure wo man jayega.
Kashish: nahi simran tujhe meri kasam tu is bare me kisi se kuch nahi kahegi jo jaisa ho raha hai hone de. Use badalne ki koshish mat kar

Now the scene is divided in two one having Sujal standing with his back at nandidi tears flooding from their eyes same is on the other part of screen but characters here are Kashish and simran

Song starts in background

Sare sapne kahi kho gaye haye
hum kya the kya ho gaye
Sare sapne kahi kho gaye
hai hum kya the kya ho gaye


dil se tanhai ka dard jeeta
kya kahe humpe kya kya na beeta
tum na aye magar jo gaye
haye hum kya the kya ho gaye

Sare sapne kahi kho gaye haye
hum kya the kya ho gaye
Sare sapne kahi kho gaye
hai hum kya the kya ho gaye

dekhte dekhte subah ho gai. Suraj ki pehli kiran ke sath hi pura ghar ek bar phir ane wali khushyo ki taiyario me la gaya. Subah ked us baj rahe the sirf 7 ghanto bad sagai thi.kashish ke ghar me charo taraf sagai ki taiyariya jor shor se chal rahi thi.magar Kashish ke liye to mano zindagi hi ruk gait hi. Aj sare log use khush rehne ki dua denge par unhe kya pata ke aj ka din hi usse uski sari khushiya cheenne wala hai
udhar agarwal house and veena niwas me bhi sagai ki taiyariya chal rahi thi. Magar gujarte huye har pal ke sath Sujal aur Kashish ki bechainiya bhi barh rahi thi. Aj woe k dusre se humesha ke liye alag hojayenge. Har wo sapna jo unhone sath dekha tha aj humesha ke liye toot jayega. Har wo kasam jo unhone sath khai thi aj wo unke liye bemaine ho jayega. Unke dil se jana anjane bas ek hi dua nikal rahi thi kash sabkuch pehle jaisa ho jaye. Kash wo kabhi juda na ho kash…


aa dholna, dholna
(zindagi mein koi kabhi aaya na rabba
aaye jo koi to phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon
to pehle koi hasaaye na rabba) - 2
to pehle koi hasaaye na rabba
(dil ke jo armaan the dil mein hi rahe gaye
aashiqui jo kee to hum aashqon mein bahe gaye) - 2
ghum ka fasaana hi dard yeh puraana hai - 2
itna bhi koi yaad aaye na rabba
zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye na rabba
aaye to phir koi jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon
to pehle koi hasaaye na rabba - 2
(yehi sochta hoon kaise usko bhoolaoonga
na woh kabhi aayegi na usse bhool paaoonga) - 2
jeene ka tikaana hai na marne ka bahaana hai - 2
itna bhi koi sataaye na rabba
zindagi mein koi kabhi aaya na rabba
aaye jo koi to phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon
to pehle koi hasaaye na rabba - 3
rabba


finally wo waqt bhi a gaya jo Sujal ko Kashish ki zindagi se dur bahut dur le jane wala tha. Its time for engagement all ppl are gathered in the hall karan and piyush are standing wid Sujal rishi and akshat. Nandini and Kashish are in their room s upstairs getting ready for the ceremony.

Rishi: are yar akshat ye humari bhabhiya taiyar hone me itna time kyou laga rahi hai? Bechare humare bhaiyaq dekho unke intezar me inki bechainiya barh gai hai
Akshat: har yar but humare samajhne se kya hoga jinko samajhna hai wo to upar baithi hai
Karan: ruk ja beta teri shadi bhi dur nahi phir dekhta hu ke tu kitna bechain hota hai

Tabhi all see Kashish and nandini coming down. Both were looking stunning. Nandini was wearing golden lehanga with light gold jewellery and Kashish was wearing white lehenga wid platinum and diamond jewellery. Sujal ki akhen na chahte huye bhi Kashish pe ruk jati hai. Wo akri bar Kashish ko jee bhr ke dekh lena chahta hai kyouki inhi yado ke sahare use apni baki ki zindagi bitani hai. Kashish bhi Sujal ko dekhti hai. Use aj bhi yakeen nahi ki Sujal uske sath aisa kuch kar sakta hai uske liye ye sab kuch ek bure sapne ki tarha hai jise wo jaldi se khatam karna chahti hai
Sare log hall ke charo taraf khare ho jate hai unke center me karan nandini prem and Kashish hote hai

Vasu: chalo ab jaldi se ek dusre ko anguthi pena kar ek dusre ko apne liye book kar lo
Tulsi: are vasu ji sabr se kam lijiye itni jaldi kya hai
Vasu: bhai mujhe to apni bahu lane ki bahut jaldi hai. Mujhese ab aur sabr nahi hoga
Prem: but mom sabr to apko karna hoga
Vasu: kya matlab
Prem: matlab ye ke muhe ap sabse kuch kehna hai
Vasu: kehne sunne ke liye to puri zindagi pari hai abhi tum apni engagement par dhyan do
Prem: nahi mom ye bat bahut jaruri hai
Vasu: acha thik hai bol kya bolna hai
Prem: aise nahi mom.[to every one] can some one pass me the mic plz
Akshat[giving him the mic] ye lijiye
Prem; ladies and gentlemen can I have ur kind attention plz.[sare log piyush ko dekhte hai wondering whats the matter] jaisa kea p sablog jante hai kea j meri sagai hai. Par is Khushi ke mauke par mai ap logo ko ek kahani sunana chahta hu. plz aplog ise dhyan se suniye coz end me is kahani ka faisla aplogo ko hi karna hai. So r u reand

Every one: yes

Prem: to is kahani me ek larka hai ek larki hai dono ek dusre ko bahut pyar karte hai. Itna pyar ki dono ek dusre ke liye apni jan tak dene ko taiyar hote hai. Dono ne sath jine marne ki sari kasme khai hoti hai. But but but… larke ko pata chalta hai ke uska dost jo uske liye bhai se bi barhkar ek pita jaisa hai use bhi wo larki bahut pasand hai. Aur isiliye wo apne pyar ki kurbani dena ka sochta hai [Sujal and Kashish are staring him continuously wid tears in their eyes. Unhe apni kahani yad a jati hai] aur wo larka apne pyar se kehta hai ke uska pyar ek khel tha sirf ek mazak aur wo larki wo apne pyar par se bharosa kho kar us dusre larke se shadi ke liye taiyar ho jati hai. Ap hi bataiye kea b jab us larke ko jisse us larki ki shadi hone wali hai sab kuch pata cha;l gaya hai to use kya karna chahiye? Kya use us larki se shadi karni chahiye? Come on speak up

Every one: nahi

[ kisi ko bhi samajh nahi a rahatha key aha ho kya raha hai. Sab bas khare tamasha dekh rahe the]

Prem: thankyou every one.
[Prem Kashish ke pas jata hai aur uska hath pakarke use Sujal ke sath le jakar khara kar deta hai Kashish continuously roye ja rahi thi(remb the scene in kuch kuch hota hai)]

Prem[to Sujal and Kashish] tum dono ne kya socha tha ke mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega? Khun ka rishta na sahi dil ka rishta to hai na. sirf zuban se bhai nahi kaha tha tumko dil se mana bhi tha. Wo to acha hua ke maine usdin tumhari aur nandini ki bate sunli nahi to tum dono ko alag karne ka pap mere sir ata. Sujal nisha ka jana sirf ek accident tha. Na to maine kabhi tujhe us bat ka zimmedar mana tha na hi manunga. Mai to har pal bhagwan ka shukriya ada karta hu ke usne tujhe mujhse nahi cheena. Sujal kuch bate aisi hoti hai jinpar humara koi bas nahi hota. Par un bato ke liye hum apni puri zindagi sari khushiya to nahi luta sakte na. teri Khushi Kashish me hai aur meri Khushi tujhme aur tu mujhse meri Khushi chinne jar aha tha.

Sujal: [tears falling from his eyes] am sorry prem

Prem: mera to man kar raha hai ke tujhe jor se ek thappar maru.

Nandini: to roka kisne hai jaldi mari ye isi layak hai. 7 dino se ro rokar mera bhi dimag kharab kar diya hai isne
Sujal; mai nahi roya tummujhe rulati thi
Nandini: acha mai rulati thi tumhe jhut bolte sharam nahi ati tumhe

Karan prem Kashish all shouts together: chup

And story ke end me sabkuch thik ho jata hai sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jata hai. Sujal aur Kashish ki engagement ho jati hai phir shadi bhi ho jati hai. Prem wapas London chala jata hai ghabraiye mat isbar wo wapas an eke liye jata hai. Wo jaldi hi apna business waha se shift karke humesha ke liye India le ayega . shayad age ke kuch salo me use apna pya bhi miljaye coz India me to har taraf pyar hi pyar hai jarurat hai use pehchanne ki. Kuch salo bad rishi –simran and akshat –charu ki bhi shadi ho jati hai is shadi me Sujal Kashish bhi shamil hote ahi par is bat wo akele nahi the unke sath thi nisha. Confuse ho gaye??? Are ye prem ki nisha nahi thi ye Sujal aur Kashish ki nisha thi unki 2 sal ki beti.
To lijiye humari kahani yaha par kahatam hoti hai. Wo kahani jo s&k ke pyar ka sabut bani uni judai ka sabut bani unke safar ka sabut bani. Par sari mushkilo ke bad bhi dono ke raste ek ho hi gaye. Kyouki

YE RASTE HAI PYAR KE
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow gr8 part 👏
or can say ending
hope u would cont. soon wth another ff sooon
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wht n endng varallika 2 good 👏 ....@last evrthng went well...prem 2 good...gr8 part he played...awsome ff it was... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
yaar.. u made me cry at the end.. it made me remember my cousin.. he was like my older brother and for a while i kept blaming my cousins... but then i realized i was wrong.. thanfully my cousins didnt mind cuz i am younger and they knew i would do something like this but get over it.....


this was a great fanfic!!! i loved it..
awesome job.. ill miss it.. a lot.. but u couldve added mukhti for prem.. u no......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx brainy child...this was the greatest compliment i had ever gt.... u no this stry i wrote abt an yr ago..tht time there was no prem mukti pair....so i didnt hav tht concept....even in my stry prem is nt manoj bohra rahther its rohit bakshi aka piyush of kth.... i hav written tht in intro also...this is why i didnt had the role of mukti...lastly thx a lot 4 ur luv and appreciation
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
awsome really like it seems ur inspired by kuchkhota hai

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