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Posted: 18 years ago
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surya thx a tonnn 4 liking my story but yar ppl dont seem to be interested coz i havent got a good response thats why i have decided to close it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: varallika

surya thx a tonnn 4 liking my story but yar ppl dont seem to be interested coz i havent got a good response thats why i have decided to close it



please don't close the topic varallika...😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Diiiiii
Aapne topic close kiya to hum naraaz ho jayenge. Humari story par bhi to sirf ek ya do log he comment karte hain, lekin hum unhe ke liye continue to karenge naa. Please, agar humara kehna mainay rakhta hai to aap ye topic nahi close karengi!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okay guys i will continue if u want.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 2

on the other side of garden sujal was talking to karan abt nandini
Karan: kya karu yar kabhi batane ki himmat hi nahi hoti hai. Tu to janta hai na use pata nahi kaise react karegi
Sujal: ab tu use bole ga tabhi to pata chalega na ki uske dil me kya hai
Karan: acha chor tu ye bata ki tune kya socha hai?
Sujal: kis bare me
Karan: are apne life partner ke bare me. I mean wht kind of life partner do u want?
Sujal: kuch nahi.
Karan: dekh jhoot mat bol. Kal maine teri diary parhi thi
Sujal: wht? Tune meri diary parhi.
Karan: puri nahi thori si hi parhi thi. Age parhne se pehle tu a gaya
Sujal: tujhe jara bhi sharam nahi ati?
Karan: sharam aur mujhe? Karan mittal ko? Mazak kar rahe hao? anyways Meri chor tu bata na
Sujal: ok now listen carefully I am not going to repeat it. wo sabse alag hogi. Mere liye wo duniya ki sabse khubsurat larki hogi, akhon me aisi gehrai jisme doob jane ko dil kare,uski muskurahat sab kuch bhula de, bato me tazgi ho, loving caring understanding responsiable and intelligent.
Karan : [teasingly]aur uska nam ho miss boring. Aur jab tum dono sath me niklo to pure city me red alert announce ho jaye
Saying this karan started running.
Sujal : karan ruk abhi batata hu tujhe bhagta kaha hai ruk
Suddenly he bumps on a gal. [yes the gal was kashish] he was abt to say sorry but b4 that she started shouting at him
Kashish : andhe ho kya akhon se dikahi nahi deta
Sujal: wo mai
Kashish: wo mai kya? Mai tum jaise larko ko achi tarah se janti hu.jaha larki dekhi nahiki peeche par jate ho
Simran: chor na kashish
Kashish kya chor na. tu nahi janti in logo ko
Sujal gave her an angry look and went away
Kashish: dekh kitna badtameez hai sorry tak bolne ka lihaz nahi hai
Simran : tu bechare ko kuch bolne de tab na.
Kashish: wht bechara itna hi tars aa raha hai to tu hi jakar sorry bol de usko
Simran: ok baba chor use dekh bell ring ho chuki hai class me chalte . nandini wait kar rahi hogi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 hey varalika its a nice story continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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After the class nandini kashish and simran were going to the canteen on their way they were stopped by some seniors.

Moh: hi I am moh. Meet my friends mauli sehar and abhik

Nandini : hi moh these are my friends kashish and simran

Moh: oh to ye tumhare dost hai very good.tab to tumne inko yaha ke rules bhi bata diye honge.

Kashish: rules what rules?

Moh: tumhe wo karna hoga jo hum kahenge

Simran: what

Nandini: are moh yar choro na they r my friends aur waise bhi ye juniors nahi hai humare hi class ke hai

Moh: to kya hua aye to humse late hai na. waise bhi rules are rules and cant be changed. Right guys

Mauli,sehar and abhik together: right

Moh: so miss kashish you go and slap the first guy coming from that door.

Kashish with a sweet smile moved twards moh and gave him a tight slap

Kashish: ye badtamizo ke sath bat karne ka mera rule hai sorry but rules cant be changed right?

Moh: you [raised his hands to slap her]

Moh: moh principal a rahe hai chal yaha se moh chal.

Moh: you will have to pay 4 this

Moh: moh chal

[moh and his gang went 4rm there]

Kashish saw sujal coming.

Kashish: lagta hai is college me sare badtameez log hi parhte hai. Maine to suna tha ki this is the best college of the city.par yaha ke logo ko to sorry bolne talk ki tameez nahi hai.

Karan:sujal dekh ye wahi subah wali larki hai tu yahi ruk mai use abhi sabak sikhake ata hu

Sujal: chor na yar jane de kyou mood kharab karne pe tula hai let them go

Simran: ye kya bole ja rahi hai moh to chala gaya

They all went to the canteen.

Nandini: tumlog baitho mai order place kar ke ati hu phir bat karenge

Kashish: ok

Nandini went to the counter same time sujal also came to place order

Nandini: bhiya 3 samose and diet coke

Sujal: same here

Nandini: sujal tum mera peecha kab choroge

Sujal: jis din tum karan ko I luv u boldogi [saying this he starts running]

Nandini: you

and she started chasing him

nandini: I will kill u

sujal: pehle pakro to sahi

after some time nandini got him

nandini: ab tumhara kya hoga

sujal: chalo let me go nahi to tumhara karan bhuk se mar jayega

nandini: u r dead mr.sujal garewal

sujal: [teasingly] plz mujhe mat maro mai margaya to karan ka work load barh jayega aur phir wo tumko kam time dega

nandini: this time I will really kill u[aur wo sujal ka gala dabane lagi]

unko larta hua dekh kashish simran karan and akshat charo waha a gaye

karan: are chor do bechare ko. Agar ye mar gaya to tumhe phasi ho jayegi

nandini: I don't care aj to mai ise mar ke rahungi

karan: choro use nandini

nandini ne sujal ko chor diya

nandini: ye tumhara akhri chance tha mr. sujal. Agli bar na mai tumhe mar hi laungi

sujal: nahi nahi aisa mat karna mai mar gay to tumhe phasi ho jayegi aur agar tumhe phasi ho gai to bechare karan ka kya hoga?

nandini: sujal

sujal: ok baba sorry

then the hugged each other. And went back to their places

nandini: are mai to tumlogo ko unlogo se milana hi bhul gai

kashish: koi bat nahi waise bhi mera mood thik nahi hai

simran:chor na yar abhi tak moh ko leke pareshan hai

Nandini: par yar kashish ye tune acha nahi kiya bechara mazak hi to kar raha tha

Kashish: wht ever. Waise wo kkaun tha?

nandini: oh wo he is sujal garewal

Simran: par tu use mar kyou rahi thi

Nandini: wo humlog ka bachpan se chalta rehta hai. hamesha hum dono larte hai aur karan humare me sulah karwata hai. He is my best friend

Kashish:[sarcastly] waise shakal se to kharoos lagta hai

Simran: tub hi na Subah se bechare ke peeche pari huai hai.

After college

Nandini: kashish ruko

Kashish: kya hua nandini

Nandini: wait a sec. hey sujal come here

Sujal: wht happened

[Nandini introduced them to each other. Kashish& sujal greeted each other rudely]

Nandini:kal sham ko tum sab a rahe ho na

Karan: wht do u mean by party me. Humlog agar party me aye to sara arrangements kya aunty so karwaogi.

Nandini: I didn't mean that yar

Karan :ha ha hume pata hai ki tumhara matlab kyat ha. Tum to hume apna samajhti hi nahi na

Hearing this sujal started laughing

Nandini: stop it u both

Sujal : ok sorry. Ab kam ki bat karte hai. Tumlogo me se koi bhi manna ko wish to nahi karega ok Humlog subah se hi farmhouse pahuch ke sare arrangements chk kar lenge .tum aunty ko leke thik 8 baje aa jana ok

Nandini:ok

Sujal: so lets go now c u in the evening

Saying he left with karan

Kashish: ye langur bhi aa raha hai party me

Nandini: kashish kyou bechare se chirhi hui hai. U no ye sara plan usi ka tha.

Kashish: whatever cu tomorrow

Nandini: ok bye. Bye simran

Simran:bye

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Posted: 18 years ago
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toooo goodddddddddd.........varallika me totally fida on your story...really very damn nice... 👏
please continue soon me waiting for the next part.. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls continue great parts. Just loving it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kashish: whatever cu tomorrow
Nandini: ok bye. Bye simran
Simran:bye
Next day In the farm house. Sujal and karan were busy in making arrangement.everything was perfect.
Sujal: karan ho gaya sab kuch
Karan ha mera to sab ho gaya. Hope ki nandini ko pasand aye
Sujal: mujhe tujhse kuch bat karni hai
Karan: ha to bol na
Sujal: jab tu nandini ko itna pyaar karta hai to use bata kyou nahi deta?
Karan: wo
Sujal: kya wo karan wo wo karte karte 3 saal bit chuke hai ab kya uski shadi hone ke bad batayega usko. Tu kahe to mai bol du?
Karan: nahi mai hi bol dunga
Sujal: ok its ur last chance aj acha mauka hai ya to tu aj usko batayega ki u love him or mai usko bata dunga ok
Karan : ok
Sujal: cha lab chalte hai phir ana bhi to hai party me
Karan :ok to chal sath chalet hai
Sujal: nahi tu ja mujhe office me kuch kam hai dad ko malhotras ke papers fax karne hai. To tu pahuch mai a jaunga
Karan: r u sure
Sujal: 100%
Karan ok c u then.
Sujal entered his house. karan was not in house
Sujal: kaka karan chala gaya?
Kaka: ha beta wo to kab ka tyar hoke chala gaya
Sujal:ok. Kaka mai sone jar aha hu ap khana kha lene mujhe bhuk nahi hai
Kaka: kyou beta nandini ke yaha nahi jaoge?
Sujal: nahi mujhe kuch kam hai aur phir sir me bhi thora sa dard hai
Kaka: par agar tum nahi gaye to nandini ko bahut bura lagega
Sujal: don't worry mai koi bahana bana dunga
Kaka: jaisi tumhari marzi waise bhi tumhe samjhane ka koi faida to hai nahi
Sujal gave him a cute smile
Kaka: tum kamre me jao mai tumhare liye chai lata hu
Sujal: uski koi jaroorat nahi hai I am fine
Kaka : chupchap kamre me jao har bat pe tumhari manmani nahi chalege
Sujal: [making a cute face] ok
Saying this he went to his room. There he saw pic of his mom on the table and tears came to his eyes.He felt a hand on his shoulders. He turned around. He was surprised to c nandini there
Sujal: are nandini tum yaha?
Nandini: kyou mera tumhare ghar ana pe ban hai?
Sujal: nahi wo
Nandini: nahi wo kya
Sujal: tumhe to party me hona chahye tha manna ke sath
Nandini: hona to tumhe bhi wahi chahye tha mere aur mom ke sath par mujhe pata tha kit um nahi aaoge isiliye mai hi chali aai
Sujal: actually wo
Nandini: don't give me silly excuses.
Sujal:[making guilty face] sorry
Nandini: yehi to tumhari problem hai pehle galti karte ho aur phir cute faces banate ho koi to tumse naraz bhi nahi ho sakta hai
Sujal: ha wo to hai
Nandini: ok ab jao ready ho jao we r getting late
Sujal: pata nahi tumhare bina mera kya hota?
Nandini: pata hai ki I am great ab jadi karo
They both hugged each other
In the party
Karan: to a gaye ap. Tu bhi na Ajeeb insan hai sab kuch plan aur arrange karke khud hi gayab ho gaya
Sujal: sorry baba
Karan: ab sorry se kuch nahi hoga autny kab se tujhe dhoond rahi hai.pata hai tujhe unhone saf af keh diya ki jab tak tu nahi ayega tab tak cake nahi katega
Sujal: are bapre manna bahut gusse me hai?
karan: ha bahut jyada.
Sujal: aj to mar gaya. Tu ruk mai manna se milke ata hu
Sujal parwati ke pas gaya.she was talking to om
Sujal: happy birthday manna
Parwati: om ise keh dijiye ki mujhe isse bat nahi karni
om: parwati ko tumse bat nahi karni
Sujal: but why
Parwati: poochiye isse kaha tha abhi tak
Sujal:I am sorry manna. Wo kuch kam tha
Parwati:tu ja ja ke apna kam hi kar.
Sujal: to ap mujhse bat nahi karengi
Parwati: nahi
Sujal: ok mai jata hu par raste me kuch ho gaya to rona mat
Parwati: chup ye kaisi bate karta hai ek marungi tujhe
Sujal: to maf kiya
Parwati: ha kiya
Sujal: happy birthday manna. ok to ab cake kat le
Parwati: ha chalo
On the other side of the party
Kashish: nandini kaha thi tu
Simran: hume invite kar ke khud hi gayab ho gai
Nandini: wo mai sujal ko lane gait hi
Simran: lane gait hi? Kyou use yaha ka rasta nahi pata kya?
Kashish: are akarne me maza ata hoga usko. Koi lane jaye tab sahab ayenge
Nandini: bas aisa hi hai wo sab kuch karke khud hi gayab ho jata hai. Sab ko khushi de ke khud dur chala jata hai. Pehle wo aisa nahi tha par jabse wo accident hua bas tab se hi akele rehna jyada pasand karta hai[tears came to her eyes]
Kashish: nandini kya hua
Nandini: [changing the topic] are tumlog yaha kyou khare ho lets go to the floor.
And they all go to the dance floor On the other hand
Sujal: karan ja yahe sahi time hai bol de usko
Karan: abhi par itne logo ke samne
Sujal: tera na kuch nahi hone wala. Waise to pre college ki larkiyo ko kam se kam dus bar I love u bol chukka hai par nandini se ek bar bhi nahi keh sakta You r just hopeless.tu baith yaha mai kuch leke ata hu
Karan: ok
Sujal goes to the counter and asks 4 two soft drinks. He taks his order and was abt to move ki wo kashish se takra jata hai
Sujal: I am sorry
Kashish sorry .wht sorry subah se mere peeche pare ho. Pehle college me aura b ye puri dress kharab kar di
Nandini comes there
Nandini: kya hua whats the matter?
Kashish: pure dress pe cold drink gira diya and now he is saying sorry
Nandini: relax
Kashish: kya relax
Sujal: ye pagal hai kya?
Saying this he went away
Kashish: how dare he
Simran comes there
Simran: kashish hume jana hoga
Nandini: kya hua
Simran: wo papa ka phone aya tha. Wo abhi America ke liya nikal rahe hai and he wants to meet me
Kashish: ha to chalo chalte hai I will drop u
Nandini: r u sure ki tum log ja rahe ho
Kashish: ha
Nandini: ok uncle ne bulaya hai to mai nahi rokungi tumhe c u tomorrow
Kashish: ok bye
After dropping simran kashish was returning home. In the mid way her car broke down her cell was also not functioning so she decided to walk. She heard sound of some jeep she asked for lift but unfortunately there were some spoil brats in the jeep. So she started running in the opp direction but they were more faster than her and got hold of her.
She tried to resist but one of the guys slapped her hard she fell on ground she was prepared that something was going to happen to her. Suddenly she heared sound to fighting. She opened her eyes and saw that sujal was fighting with the guys. Aftersometimes the guys ran away and sujal came twards kashish.
Sujal: tum thik to ho na
she was shocked n was unable to control herself she held him tightly.sujal tried to console her
Sujal: its ok Kashish.everythings fine now.relax.
Kashis was saying nothing she was just crying
Seeing the bad condition of her dress sujal wrapped his coat around her and made her sit in the car.
Sujal: tum itni rat ko yaha kar kya rahi thi?
Kashish[still crying] wo ……….. meri….gari….
Saying this she became unconscious in his arms
Sujal makes her sit in the car and turns his car towards khanna house. In abt 15 mins he reached there.he took kashish in his arms he found it too painful as his own han was badly wounded he knocked the door. tulsi opened the door as It was late night mihir charu and kanan all were also out of country. Tulsi seeing kashish unconscious became tensed
Tulsi: kaun ho tum aur ise kya hua
Sujal:aunty wo sab mai apko bad me bataunga pehle show me her bed room
Tulsi showed him kashish's bed room.sujal gentally put her on the bed
Tulsi: are hua kya hai ise tum kuch batate kyou nahi ho.
Sujal: plz aunty first u call the doctor phir mai sabkuch btata hu
Tulsi called their family doctor mr.seth.
Dr.seth: maine ise injection de diya hai agar 3 ghanto me hosh nahi ata hai to ye dawai manwake de dijiyega. Ab mai chalta hu
Tulsi: thankyou doctor
After doctor went tulsi came to sujal
Tulsi: ab bataoge mujhe ki hua kya hai
Sujal told her everything
Tulsi: oh thankyou so much beta aj agar tum nahi hote to to koi anhone jaroor ho jati thankyou so much
Sujal:iski koi jaroorat nahi hai aunty mai bhi to apke bete jaisa hu
tulsi kept her hand on his head. Suddenly she saw the wound on his hand
tulsi: ye kaise hua
Sujal: kuch nahi bas thora sa cut gaya hai
Tulsi: ye thora sa hai? its very deep.dard ho raha hoga. Ruk yaha mai dawai le ke ati hu
Sujal: uski koi jarurat nahi hai aunty choti si chot hai thik ho jayegi
In the mean time tulsi got the first aid box
Tulsi: absolute mum and sit still
Aur wo dawai lagane lagti hai.
tulsi: tumhara nam kya hai?
Sujal: sujal.
Tulsi: bahut acha nam hai
Just then they heared some noise from kashish's room. He ran to her room tulsi was somewhere behind him. Seeing sujal kashish started shouting
Kashish: you tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?mere peeche peeche yaha taka a gaye. Mai tum jaise larko ko ache se janti hu. Mujhe behosh dekh mera…………………
Tulsi: [angrily]kashish. Ye kya bole ja rahi hai tu isne to teri jan bachai aur tu
Sujal;plz aunty ye abhi abhi hosh me ai hai.
Saying this he went out of room.he was waiting 4 tulsi so that he can go home. Just then he heared some footsteps he thought tht it was tulsi so he turned around but it was not tulsi it was kashish
Kashish: I am sorry
Sujal: its ok tum rote huye bilkul achi nahi lagti. Tum to larte huye aur dantte huye achi lagti ho
Kashish: I am really sorry
Sujal: its ok waise bhi mujhe bura bilkul nahi laga tha. Mujhe to tumhari dant sunne me maza aya.bhi mujhe bura bilkul nahi laga tha. Mujhe to tumhari dant sunne me maza aya
Kashish smiled sweetly giving her hand she said: friends
Sujal: a let me think
Kashish: sujal
Sujal: ok
kashish saw the wound
Kashish: sujal ye kaise
Sujal: kuch nahi un me se ek ne chaku nikala to usi me anyways ab mai chalta hu bahut rat ho gai hai sab intezar kar rahe honge
Kashish: ok bye
Tulsi: ate rehna beta
Sujal: ji aunty
Saying this he left
Tulsi:[to kashish] bahut acha larka hai
Kashish: ha mumma

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