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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sujal entered his house karan akshat and rishi were waiting for them[wo sab sath me rehte the]
Karan: tu kaha reh gaya tha ?[seeing his wrist] aur ye kya hua
Sujal : are kuch nahi chota sa jhagra ho gaya tha
Rishi : kaisa jhagra?
Sujal told them every thing
Akshat tu thik to hai na
Sujal: ha I am fine chal rat bahut ho gai hai tumlog so jao. Kal college bhi to jana hai
Karan akshat and rishi : ok good night
They bid each other goodnight and wet to their rooms
Sujal is standing near window thinking about kashish
Sujal: ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai mai usi ke bare me kyou soch raha hu. Kahi mujhe……….. nahi nahi mai to usse abhi abhi mila hu phir mai usse pyaar kaise kar sakta hu. Mai bhi na pata nahi kya kya sochne laga. Bahut rat ho gai hai kal subah subah office bhi to jana hai phir college bhi hai
saying this he went to sleep
On the other side kashish is also standing near her window thinking abt sujal
Kashish: ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai mai usi ke bare me kyou soch rahi hu. Kahi mujhe……….. nahi nahi mai to usse abhi abhi mili hu phir mai usse pyaar kaise kar sakti hu. Mai bhi na pata nahi kya kya sochti rehta hu.
saying this she went to sleep
Next day in the college kashish simran and nandini were in the library kashish saw sujal coming
Kashish: hi sujal
Sujal: hi kashish
Kashish:come on have a seat
Simran to nandini: ye kamal kaise ho gaya
Nandini: pata nahi kal tak to ek dusre ko khane daurte the aur aj
Sujal: hi nandini, hi simran
Nandini and simran both say hi to sujal
Kashish: tumhara hath kaisa hai
Nandini get tensed to c his hand wounded
Nandini: ye kya hua
Sujal; kuch nahi thora sa cut gaya tha
Nandini: ye thora sa cut hai sujal tumhe apna khayal rakhna chahiye apna nahi to aunty…..
Saying this she stopped with a jerk. She saw tears in sujal's eyes
Sujal: excuse me mujhe kuch kam hai c u later
Saying this he left
Nandini: ye maine kya kar diya
Simran: kya kiya tune aur ye yaha se aise kyou chala gaya
Nandini: wo……maine…. Meri bat….maine use….
Kashish: nandini akhir bat kya hai. Kal party me bhi tum kuch kehte kehte ruk gait hi
Nandini: do sal pehle ki bat hai tub humlog yaha nahi London me rehte the sujal aur karan ke sath.
Meri behan nisha and karan ka bhai prem ek dusre se bahut pyar karte the. Dono ki shadi bhi fix ho gai thi.
Shadi ek thik do din pehle sujal veena aunty aur nisha ko le kar shopping ke liye gaya
Jab wo log laut rahe the to nisha ne gari chalane ki zid ki bahut argument ke bad sujal ne nisha ko gari chalane de di. Nisha jaldi pahuchne ke chakkar me bahut tez gari chala rahi thi ki tabhi samne se ate huye truck se uska accident ho gaya sujal to kisi tarah bach gaya par nisha aur veena aunty nahi bach paye
humlogo ne kisi tarah apne ap ko sambhal liya par sujal depression me chala gaya. Wo un dono ki maut ka zimmedar khud ko manta hai. Bad me jab hum yaha settle hone lage mumma ne sujal ko bhi sath le liya taki jagah badalne pe uski hatal bhi thik ho jaye.
Decide ye hua ki karan aur sujal yahi rehke India ka apna business bhi sambhalenge aur sath hi apni parahi bhi puri kar lenge.
Yaha mumma papa ke bahut samjhane ke bad sujal kuch normal hua. Humlog bhi hamesha yehi koshish karte the ki use kabhi akela na chore na hi kabhi purani bato ki yad dilaye.par aj maine use ek bar phir us hadse ki yad dila di. Ye mujhse kya ho gaya
Iske liye mai apnea p ko kabhi maf nahi kar paungi
Kashish: nahi nandini yumne ye jan bujh ke to nahi kiya.
Nandini: [crying hard]par kiya to hai na.usko kitni takleef ho rahi hogi. Mujhe uske pas jana hai
Kashish: tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho halat dekhi hai apni khud ko sambhal nahi pa rahi ho usko kya sambhalogi
Nandini: par wo ekdum akela hoga
Kashish:tum Ghar jao
mai jati hu uske pas. Simran tum iska khayal rakhna plz
Simran; don't worry mai iske sath iske ghar jati hut um bhi wahi a jana
Kashish: ok
Bahut dhoondne ke bad kashish found sujal sitting in basket ball ground. Chutti ho chuki thi so college me koi nahi tha. She kept her hand on his shoulder and said softly
Kashish: coffee pine chaloge?
Sujal: mujhe akela chor do plz
Kashish: tumhare London me dosto ko is halat me akela chorte hongepar yaha aisa nahi hota
Sujal:[rudely]I said ki mujhe akela chor do
Kashish: tumhe kya lagta hai tumhare is tarah khud ko saza dene se kya hoga
Sujal: mujhe is bare me tumse koi bat nahi karni
Kashish: bhul jao us bat ko and forgive nandini
Sujal: mai nandini se naraz nahi hu naraz to mai apne ap se hu. Agar maine us din nisha ki bat nahi mani hoti to mumma aur nisha zinda hote
Kashish: tum kyou us bat ke liye apnea p ko blame kar rahe ho jis pe tumhara koi bas nai tha. Jo hona rehta hai wo to hoke hi rehta hai chahe hum lakh koshis karle par use nahi rok sakte.so plz don't blame urself 4 that
Sujal had no reaction. Seeing this kashish got disappointe aur wow aha se jane lagi. Suddenly sujal caught her hand
Sujal[looking twards the court] coffee pine chale
Kashis nodded happily and hugged him .
Sujal: Where is nandini?
Kashish: Bahut ro rahi thi. maine use ghar bhej diya. Actually I have a plan pehle uske yaha chalte hai phir sab sath me restaurant challenge. Ok?
Sujal: thx kashish.
Kashish: dosto ko thx nahi kehte
Sujal: ok sorry
Kashish: dosto ko sorry bhi nahi kehte.
Sujal: ok to ab chale
Kashish: ha chalo
Kashish ne driver se keh ke car ghar bhej diya and both went to nandini's house. Karan and akshat were also there. sujal pacified nandini and thenall enjoyed coffee made by parwati.
Parwati was very happy to c sujal and nandini laugh
Parwati[to herself]in ki khushi ko kisi ki nazar na lage

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Posted: 18 years ago
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toooooo gooddddddddddd varallika.... i like your story very much.. 👏
please continue soon.. 😊 😃
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Two days later when sujal was returnig home from office he saw tulsi standing on road and was looking very tensed. He stoped the car and went to her
Sujal: namaste aunty
Tulsi:jite raho.
Sujal: kyahua aunty ap bahut pareshan lag rahi hai
Tulsi: wo actually meri gari kahrab ho gai hai.gahr pe mihir pareshan ho rahe honge. Aur dekhna mai apna mobile bhi ghar pe hi bhul gai hu.pata nahi ab kya karu
Sujal: to isme tension ki kya bat hai mai apko chor deta hu
Tulsi:r u sure mera matlab tumhe koi pareshani to nahi hogi.
Sujal: isme pareshani ki kya bat ha. Ap chaliye mere sath
Tulsi; thx beta
Sujal:kya aunty beta bhi kehti hai aur thx bhi bol rahi hai
Tulsi: acha baba galati ho gai sorry. Ab chale
Sujal:[ smiling cutely] ha
Tulsi; tera hat kaisa hai
Sujal;much better
10 mins later they reached khanna house
Tulsi: andar ao
Sujal: nahi aunty mai chalta hu
Tulsi: tum har bat pe bahas kyou karte ho ? chup chap andar chalo nahi to ek lagaungi
Sujal: ab to ana hi parega
Both smile and go inside .
Mihir was moving to and fro in tension.seeing tulsi he started questioning her.
Mihir: kaha reh gai thi tum? Mai kab se pareshan ho raha hu. Mobile bhi off karke rakha tha.
Tulsi:[cutting him] are itne sare sawal ek sath poochoge to mai jawabab kaise dungi?
Mihir: oh I am sorry. Par tum thi kaha?
Tulsi: are wo raste me gari kharab ho gai thi
Mihir: to tum ai kaise?
Tulsi: [pointing to sujal] iske sath. Oh mai bhi kitni bewakuf hu tumdono ko introduce hi karwana bhul gai. Mihir ye sujal hai maine bataya tha na
Mihir: oh ha to tum sujal ho.
Sujal: ji
Tulsi: tum dono baitho mai abhi ai
Mihir: tum kahre kyou ho baitho no.
[Both sits]. Us din jo tumne kiya uske liye mai tumhe kitna bhi thx kahu kam hoga
Sujal: uncle ye ap kaisi bate kar rahe hai. Maine to kuch bhi nahi kiya meri jagah koi aur bhi hota to yahi karta. Akhir kashish meri bhi to dost hai
Mihir: aj pata chala tulsi tumhari itni tareef kyou karti hai
Sujal;thx uncle
Mihir: kaha rehte ho beta
Sujal: ji veena niwas me
Mihir: veena niwas. Par wo to chetan garewal ka hai. Tum jante ho unhe
Sujal: ji wo mere dad hai
Tulsi comes with coffee and snacks.
tulsi: tum veena ke bete ho
Sujal: ji
Tulsi: are hum dono bahut ache dost the. kaisi hai wo. London jane ke bad to phir bhi phone karti thi par yaha do sal se wo bhi band hai. Usse kehna ki….
Sujal[tearfuleyes]; aunty mai chalta hu kuch jaroori kam hai
Tulsi: coffee to pe kar ja
Sujal: nahi aunty phir kabhi
Kehkar wo jane lagta hai. He meets kashish at the door
Kashish: hi sujal. Tum ja rahe ho?
Sujal leves without replying to her. Kashish noticed tears in his eyes. So she said nothing
Kashish[ to her mom]:ye aise kyou chala gaya?
Tulsi: pata nahi abhi thorider pehle tak to thik tha. Pata nahi achanak kya ho gaya?
Kashish: apne isse kaha kya?
Tulsi: kuch nahi mai to bas isse veena ke bare me pooch rahi thi
Kashish: kaun?
Mihir: veena is ki ma
Kashish: ye apne kya kar diya?
Tulsi: par hua kya
Kashish tells them every thing
Tulsi: hey ram ye maine kya kar diya? Ab kya hoga
Kashish: nahi mumma apne janbuja ke thore hi na kiya hai. Waise mai use kal mana lungi.
Mihir: beta waise bhi wok al party me to ayega hi
Next day kashish told sujal ki tulsi ne use ghar pe bulaya hai.sujal man jata hai waise bhi wo kal ke liye tulsi se mafi mangna chahta tha.Kashish ne apni gari ghar bhej di aur khud sujal ke sath uski gari me baith gai
Sujal:waise kashish aunty ne mujhe kyou bulaya hai? Koi kam hai mujhse
Kashish: tumhe mumma ne nahi papa ne bulaya hai
Sujal: kya? Kyou
Kashish: mujhe lagta hai ki us din tum waise chale gaye is bat se papa gussa honge
Sujal: kya?
Kashish: aur nahi to kya. Really tumhe is tarah se chale nahi jana chahiye tha
Sujal: par tum to janti ho ke
Kashish: mai to janti hu par papa nahi jante na. aur jab wo gusse me hote hai to kisi ki nahi sunte
Sujal: sach
Kashish: [making an angry face] to tumhe kya lagta hai mai yaha baithe baithe tumse mazak kar rahi hu mujhe aur koi kam nahi hai
Sujal: nahi wo mai
Kashish: ab jaldi gari jyada der ho gai to papa ka gussa aur barh jayega
Sujal:ye lo pahuch gaye
Kashish: ok to chalo
Sujal: kashish mai jata hu kisi aur din aunga jab uncle ka mood thik ho
Kashish: are tum papa ko nahi jante agar tum aj nahi aye to wo tumhare ghar pahuch jayenge. Age tumhari marzi
Sujal: ok to chalo
House was full of ppl party was going on.kashish ke ate hi sab use happy birthday wish karne lagte hai.sujal sees karan and goes to him. He was a bit upset that no body told him tht it was kashish's birthday
After cutting the cake every one was called on the dance floor. Karan went with nandini and sujal with kashish. He was still angry.
Kashish: abhi tak gussa ho
Sujal: nahi to
Kashish: jhoot mat bolo
Sujal: tumne mujhe bataya kyou nahi ki aj tumhara janamdin hai
Kashish: agar batati to kyat um yaha ate
Sujal: shayad nahi
Kashish: tumne apne sawal ka jwabab khud hi de diya
Sujal:par
Kashish: par war kuch nahi. Dekho aj mera birthday hai aur aj tum mujhse naraz nahi reh sakte. Aj to moh se bhi meri dosti ho gai aur tum ho ki naraz ho ke baithe ho
Sujal: ok baba. tumse na koi nahi jeet sakta
Kashish: to maf kiya
Sujal: ha kiya
Next day was sturday so aboth the families decided to spend this day togather at their farmhouse in khandala
In the farm house. Every one was playing cricket except sujal.kashish tried a lot to make him play but he denied saying he has some imp. Office work to do.
Wo koi file le ke apne room me baitha hua tha jo ki lawn ke thik samne tha. He was lost in his memories
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx guys 4 all those claps and comments i will post the next part by tom
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantastic parts 👏

cont soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for late posting....so here goes the part


Flashback:
Its London every one is in their cricket uniforms all ready to play. Both the captains(sujal and prem) are deciding their teams. Every one is selected only nisha and akshat are left
Sujal: ok to nisha will be in my team
Prem: its not fair har bar tu nisha ko apni team me leleta hai
Sujal: tu bhi to hamesha nandini ko apne team me leta hai
Prem: to kya hua nisha meri team me rahegi
Sujal: nahi wo mere team me rahegi
Prem: no she is mine
[all starts laughing except sujal who was too busy in the argument]
Karan: tum dono chup raho. Let nisha decide ki wok is team me hogi
Prem: ha ye thik hoga.
Sujal: dekha kaise jhat se man gaya ise pata hai ki nisha isi ki side legi au waise bhi ise dar hai ki agar nisha meri team me rahi to ye is bar bhi har jaoge
Prem: dar. Mujhe? Wo bhi is billi se……
Karan an sujal together: nisha tumhe billi kaha
Nisha: ok to mr. prem mittal it's a challenge
Akshat: prem tere ko challenge kar rahi hai
Prem: ok then it's a challenge
Nisha: ab dekhte jao first ball pe out nahi karwa diya to mera nam bhi nisha nahi
Prem: so start thinking of a new name
Nisha: we will see
Prem:we will see
First ball pe hi prem out ho jata hai and nisha wins the bet as well as game. Sujal's team celebrates their success
At some distance
Sujal[to karan]: congrats karan humara divide and rule ka formula phir se kamyab ho gaya
Karan: wo to humesha hota hai. Waise bhi ye dono kitne bewakuf hai na har bar humare dhoke me a jate hai.
Sujal: ha aur wo akshat mujhe ti us bechare pe taras ata hai kitni koshish karta hai ki dono ko sab pata chal jaye par kabhi kamyab nahi hota
Karan: aur wo kamyab na hi ho to acha hai warna agar nisha aur prem ek team me ho jaye to humara harna tay hai
Sujal: u r right. Waise dono ab bhi lar hi rahe honge. Chalke dekhte hai
Jaise hi wo dono murte hai they find prem akshat and nisha standing infront of them
Nisha: to kya keh rahe the ap log
Akshat : divide and rule
Prem : hum log kya hai?
Akshat: bewakuf
Sujal: karan bhag nahi to aj bahut pitenge
Karan: par bhagne ke liye jagah bhi to honi chahiye . is akshat ne to aj phasa hi diya
Sujal: vasu aunty
Hearing this akshat prem and nisha peeche murk e vasu ko dhoondne lagte hai isi beech sujal aur karan bhagne lagte hai and all three of them starts following them
End of flashback
Sujal had tears in his eyes. Just then he saw parwati coming in.seeing her he quickly wipes his tears
Parwati : kya hua yaha akele kyou baithe ho
Sujal: wo office ka kuch kam pending tha
Parwati: tujhe kya lagta hai tu mujhse apne asu chupa sakta hai?
[Sujal says nothing he keeps looking outside] kabtak purani yado me khoya rahega?
Sujal: ye yade hi to hai manna jiske sahare mai jeer aha hu
Parwati: yade zindagi ka hissa to hoti hai par jine ka sahara nahi ban sakti. Jane wale to chale jate hai par hume to zindagi jeni hoti hai
Sujal: par manna kaise bhul jao nisha ko mamma ko. Kaise bhul jao prem ki halat ap logo ki takleef kaise bhul jao manna
Parwati: mai tujhse kuch bhulne ko nahi keh rahi hu. Us hadse ko bhulana to hummese kisi ke bas ki bat nahi hai.par jara soch ki tujhe is tarah dekh ke veena aur nisha ko kitni takleef ho rahi hogi. Wo log to tujhe humesha khush dekhna chahte the. Kitni takleef hoti hogi unhe ye dekh ke ki teri asuo ki wajha wo hai.
Sujal: par manna mai koshish to kar raha hu.
Parwati: dikhawe ko koshish nahi kehte sujal
Sujal: I will try manna ki mai un yado se nikal saku
Parwati: waise tujhe kashish kaisi lagti hai
Sujal: achi hai
Parwati: oh to tujhe koi khas pasand nahi hai
Sujal: maine aisa to nasi kaha
Parwati: pyar karta hai use?
Sujal: ha …..matlab nahi
Parwati: ha ya nahi?
Sujal[softly]: ha
Parwati: bataya usko?
Sujal: nahi
Parwati: to jaldi bata de warna mai bata dungi waise bhi mujhe bahu lane ki bahut jaldi hai
Sujal gives her a cute smile and hugs her
Two weeks later kashish was returning home from college . usne dekha ki logo ki bheer jami hui hai. She goes there to see whats the matter she saw that some ppl are beating a man brutally and then one of them hits him with a knife.the man falls dead there and the ppl went away. Just then police arrives
Inspector: ap logo me se kisi neb hi agar killer ko dekha ho to plz bataiye
But no one came forward to say anything. Kashish wa astronished to c the attitude of ppl. Inspector requested once again this time kashish came forward
Kashish: inspector sahib maine dekha hai murder hote huye.
Inspector: ok to plz mere sath police station clhal ke apna bayan de dijiye taki humlog unhe pakar sake
Kashish: ji chaliye
She goes to the police station and registers her statement.then she returns home and tell her parents abt the incident. They praise her for her act and at the same time they tell her to be carefull.on the other hand police arrests the killer and called kashish for identifying them.
Kashish: mumma mai police station ja rahi hu
Tulsi: par tu akeli ja rahi hai
Kashish: obviously papa ki imp. Meeting hai to mujhe to akele hi jana parega na
Tulsi: tu akeli wha nahi jayegi pata nahi kitne khatarnak log honge.
Kashish: par jana to hoga hi na
Just then sujal comes.
Tulsi: are beta tum yaha
Sujal: ha aunty wo manna ne apke liye ye packet bheja hai
Kashish: ok to mai jati hu I am getting late
Tulsitum akele wahanahi jaogi
Sujal: kyou kya bat hai
Kashish: wo maine bataya tha na us murder ke bare me usi me identification ke liya jana hai.
Tulsi: aur dekh na mihir ghar me nahi hai. Aur ye akele jane ki jid kar rahi hai
Sujal: to Mai kashish ke sath jata hu wahi se sath college bhi chale jayenge aur sham ko mai ise drop bhi kar dunga.
Tulsi: ha ye thik rahega
Sujal[to kashish]: to chale
Kashish: ha chalo bye mom
Tulsi: bye beta
Both went to policestation there kashish identified the murderer.
Inspector: thx miss kashish aj apki wajah se hum ise pakar paye hai isne ajtak najane kitne galat kam kiye hai par har bar sabut nahi hone ke karan hume ise chorna para hai.
Kashish: apko mujhe thx kehne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai ye to mera farz tha
Inspector: kash ki sab log apki tarah sochte. kal 11 baje case ki sunwai hai aplog time pe pahuch jayeyega.
Kashish: ji acha ab mai chalti hu
Dono college jate hai.
On their way to college
Sujal: waise tum kafi bahadur ho
Kashish: aisa nahi hai mai to kutte ko dekhkar bhi dar jati ho
Sujal:tumhe pata hai pure shaher me tum pehli insane ho jisne us gunde ke khilaf gawahi dene ki himmat dikhai hai. U r really great.
Kashish: ok man liya ki I am great bas.
Sujal: ye lo college bhi a gaya. Chalo bye. College ke bad yahi milte hai I will drop u home
Kashish: ok bye
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tooo good varallika dear...👏 please continue soon... 😃
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tooo goooood love ur ff

i am ur new reader but jsut simply love itttttttt

continue soooon me waiting eagerly to read

Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

tooo goooood love ur ff

i am ur new reader but jsut simply love itttttttt

continue soooon me waiting eagerly to read

Saraa

hi saara thx a tonn for liking my ff..... really was so happy to c ur comments on it....hope u cont to like it

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