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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Superb...
Awesome..
Like rthis virat to...
Fab update

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virmanhus

@virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

KDHI updated in fifth page of fifth thread!!!!

update worth waiting shilpa... and how was the update?

giving u in Barney's style it was AWE wait for it SOME!!! AWESOME!!!

did i read it ryt?? virat is gonna sing for manvi??

wow!! cant wait for this new twist...

get going!!!

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome update
Loved it!!.. virat is so caring..loving the change in virat's behaviour..manvi's dad wanted to thank virat..thats a good sign.. excited to read the next part
Karan is planning something really evil...I hate him!!.
Virat singing for manvi..its exciting..lavanya is so sweet.
Update soon

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iluviratmanvi

@iluviratmanvi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

great one yaar

plz update soon

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ddljfan

@ddljfan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Congrats for the new thread!!! Gud going.
Now coming to the update once again it awesome, mind blowing.
Keep up the gud work and update when you can

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tanishalnk

@tanishalnk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Omg it's freaking awesome. ...
Manvi's pain revealed with his one touch...I will never leave ur side...even if u want to haye .its so touching
Evil karan 😡
Awwwsssuuummm
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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

It was a phenomenal updt...*bow down*...each n every scene was terrific...fantastic work dear...i really dont hv a words to praise u...i starts lacking them...lolzzz

virats inner turmoil, eagerness were completely visible frm his frm hi acts...he too LOVE her immensly...n now there is no doubt abt that...manvi too knw that...love n the pain the r the 2 sides of same coin...n he experianse both the things together today...

Manvi...wat to say abt her...she is just so pure n innocent...the delicate doll who serrender herselve fully to virat to her husband...with heart n soul...lovely

hmmm so here is the catch...the evil clouds r still there on their beautifull lill world...but as says so life is not a fairytale..so virmaan r also not a exceptional case..

Now cont soon dear...its hard to wait anymore...jaldi jaldi

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

superb update
loved the title 'monsters angel'
loved how virat was caring for maanvi
wonder what is karan upto now
excited for next part - virat singing for maanvi
please continue soon

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hey Shilpa...Congrats for the new thread...ur 5th thread...👏👏.n ufcourse ur wrk wud create a new benchmark very soon... pakka...👍🏼

Cuming to the update...it waz beautiful n emotional...

Virmans bits in the ICU z fav scene till date...well i do hav fav portions of each chapter but this particular scene struck a chord in my heart...Manvi cud feel his presence evn in her unconcious state...shows the depth of their luv fr each other...his luv for her buried deep in his heart has surfaced out unknowingly making his utter those words..."Please come back. I need u…by my side!"

"I will never leave ur side…even if u want…." these lines by manvi gives a small insight into the future

well u hav no idea hw much i luvd this scene...it wil remain close to my heart❤️...it knw it mite sound silly but itz true 😃

Soup drama part was really hilarious...😆...manvi z too cute n virat knws very well hw to handle her

Well m a bit curious to knw...whther Madan or Karan wud find out abt those divorce papers...n if Karan gets it in his hands ...thn😕...ughhh...i hate him...😡

Throughout the update, u hav beautifully penned down each n every emotions ...Virats desperation to c his wife,his fear of losing her, his guilt n above all their Love for each other...in short...an update par excellence...👏👏

Hav already read it 5 times by nw n dunno hw many times more before the next update..Thanx for such a wonderful update...🤗

Plzz cont asap ...will b waiting!!!