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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

finally a big update.beautiful and emotional update.really i like this update too much.the way u discribe virat pin and guilt awesome.virman moment in acu was too magical.i can imagine the whole scene.last part was cute.karan word scare me.what he want to do now.plz don't separate virman plz.waiting for virat realisetion.continue soon.

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shonaten

@shonaten

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Congraxx new thread
the update s superbbb awesome
virat s so caring
but urgg karan
update soon

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

awsssmmm shilpa congo on 5th thread

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow lovely update...
Loved it...
How Virat care for Manvi and how Manvi can feel Virat
when she is not in her sense...

Pleaseee update soon...

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Oh finally an update... Just awsum mindblowing but this karan.. Arghhh i wanna kill him.. Waiting for more...

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

First of all congrats for the new thread wohooo u deserved it so kudos to ya!
Update was reallyyy niceee!!! Finally after all those hardship Virman r together n I love the fact that he came running fr his lady love... His frustration n guilt for hurting her .. Words saying I need u beside me haiii maar dalaaa !!! Have seen the bad boy, outrageous ruthless monster but haven't seen the pure gold hearted VIRAT!' wanna see wat his passion, possession n obsession leads to!!! Want him to be a good pati :))))) but some naughty boy touch needed tooo..
The soup drinking trick was reallyyy cuteee! Hehe he is not being forcefully' n the hugs <3 love how she came back to life... Everything was written bueatifully loved it! Continue soon n want a treat for reaching thread 5! Want a sexy item hehehe hahaha

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

First of all congratulations for the 5th thread shilpa🥳🥳🥳
Amazing update shilpa👍🏼 this was really awesome !!! change virat !!! awwn i m loving this<3 the way manvi react on virat touch !! hayye !!! n the hospital scene !!! caring virat !! gosh !!! ❤️tat was way too awesome !!!! i juz loved tat part alot !! can't get enough of it !!! so cute 😛awwn manvi love for virat is soo memorizing !!! i was can't stop awwing the whole update !! it was mind blowing !!! i have big smile at the end !! :DDD it was sweet n romantic !!!❤️ Lovely update shilpa !!! tat jerk karan😡😡 aargh wat he is going to do now !!! looking forward for next update !!! will be eagerly waiting !!! continue soon if possible :D thanx for the pm in advance :D

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Sofia

@SweetAngels96

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Awesome update shilpa!! N congrats for 5th thread!!

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Wonderful update Shilpa...And this is what I am waiting for... U proved it again that u r an awesome writer... Finally Virat realised his love and started to care her whole-heartedly... Manvi's childishness is really portrayed in a beautiful way. Continue soon but take care of ur health first and that's really important. Eat well and stay healthy dear...😊.

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Congratulations Shilpa for the new thread!!! 😃 5th thread!! Wohoo!!! You deserved it 👍🏼..
Coming to the update, it was fabulous ⭐️⭐️.. Full of emotional and sweet moments.. VSV is so much in love 😳.. Though he failed to realize his own feelings but unknowingly he is falling for her so hard.. Beautiful portrayal of his emotions, his guilt & his dilemma 👏👏.. Loved the ICU scene ❤️.. "Please come back. I need u…by my side!" - Loved this line ❤️.. He was so scared of loosing her.. Manvi is really an angel 😃.. Virat's angel.. She can go to any extent to make him happy.. She felt his presence, his touch even when she was unconscious.. Loved the way you have portrayed their relationship and love for each other 👍🏼.. Virat's trick was nice.. He knows how to handle her tantrums 😛.. Karan is ready to destroy their little happy world with his evil plans!! Really eager to know what is cooking in his mind.. OMG Virat is going to sing for Manvi!!! Wow!!! 😃 Looking forward to it.. Will be waiting for the next update.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😊