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pink1

@pink1

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

nice update he was in guilt because of him
she going through lot of pain and he still unaware
about his feeling toward her now what karan will do
update soon and congratulation for 5 thread

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

im loving this caring side of virat even if he is a little bit hesitant bt stll hes there for her

really loved the way virat tricked her into drinking the soup very good strategy

sounds very interesting wats gonna happen next

virat singing woah that is gonna be very very interesting damn excited for it bt then again theyre happiness wnt last long if karan his dad r still there

amazing update continue quickly plzzz😉

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roshreb

@roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

congrats for 5th thread.. update was awesome..love how uve portrayed virat's guilt , frustration, pain & fear of losing manvi... even in her unconscious state manvi is affected by virat's presence.. she is so much in love wiz him..whereas virat is still confused.. he has already fallen for her..and its time that he forgets that mannu is his enemy's daughter and gives her all the happiness she deserves... i hate that karan, its better for him not to mess wiz "monster" vadhera...can't wait to see virat's singing for his angel..update soon

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mkkpb_fan

@mkkpb_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

for the 5th thread!!!🥳

seriously this period of waiting had made me go mad

Now coming to the update... it was superb as usual😳...

Virat has started developing feelings for Manvi❤️...yayyy... nd he made her drink that yucky soup😎... whole of the hospital scene was beautifully written.👏

nd what the hell is wrong with this evil Karan😡... he should stop dreaming about getting back Manvi in his life!!!... desperate to know how will his plans fail🤣

nd this time plzz don't make us wait for long tym or else i will...🤢...😆

and once Congratulations!! nd thanx for such a big and superb update!!!😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome Awesome..!!! Loved it..!!!Maanvi's accident bought out all his confusion out and he realized what importance she has in his life...He still hates her dad...but after this hurting Maanvi will be the last thing in hs mind...he could see the difference he created from the person she was to now...Loved Virat's little confession n he was confused abt his behavior through out though he didn't accept his feelings completely but he is taking care of her which is sweet...love the song and Congrats of new thread...!!!Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM..!!!

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tellyrox

@tellyrox

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

5th thread!!!!congratz shilpa...plls try to giv regular update...n let virman not seperate ...it shud b happy times nw

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Polo_s

@Polo_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesome creation. Full of emotional drama. Now Viraat has fallen 4 her. WOW! Karan is mad. Hate him. Plz update next soon!

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kittu_11

@kittu_11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

congratulations shilpa for 5th thread and ur roaring sucess update was superb I liked it 😊 specially soup part 😊

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Anaida

@iamanaida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Wow...mindblowing update after a real long wait. thx alot Shilpa. It was awesome. Thoroughly enjoyed the behaviour of the caring Virat. I loved the way you penned Virat meeting Maanvi in the emergency room and her cute words to him.

Good job. :)

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meghasweet

@meghasweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Woowww Shilpa awesomwee part yr love it sooo muchhh Virat love fr manvi soo much nd dt wn manvi is unconsious he said sorrry too her dn his touch is make manvi unconsious his cry fr her wife its soo hearttouching part yrr
nd soup part was too good nd dn manvi sleep nd Virat hold her in his arms
Nw karan is doing evil wid dem
Bt Virat is nt gng her wife anywhr nd Virman r 1 nww
Awesomeee Updatee
wn u hv time ppzz continuee soon :-)
Awesomee update