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Posted: 18 years ago
ok nxt prt-

K ki mom jo s aur k ko dekh rahi hai,aur unki baatein sun rahi hai,has a small satisfactory sweet smile on her face,seein both

abb s goes twrd k mom

s-emm..emm..aunty..!

k mom-hmm??

s-emm..i mean m..m..mamma [k mom smiles],emm,,kisi bhi cheeez ki zarurat ho ya kuch bhi chahie ho to muje bataega plz,aap plz chinta matt kariye!

k mom smiles at s pyaar se,aur s ke sar pe pyaar se haath ferti hai,& with motherly afection kisses s on forehead

k mom-abb tum aa gae ho beta,muje kaise koi chinta ho sakti hai?[smiles warmly at s]

s ke ankhon ke kone mein thode thode asoo aa jaate hain

& he also gives a faint smile 2 k mom

tabhi dr comes

dr-patient ko hosh aa gaya hai,aap log unse mil sakte hain

k smiles khushi se

k-chalo mamma ,papa se milke aate hain

k mom-nahi kashish ruko!

K is surprised

k-mamma?paar kyun?

K mom-mehak jao tumhare papa se millo jaake,muje sujal aur kashish se kuch baat karni hai!

K & s both look twrds each other confused

Mehak goes

K mom-sujal,kashsih!

K- boliye mamma!

S is listenin

K mom-kashsih maine,tumhare papa ko ye bata dia hai ki tumne shaadi kar li hai!

k-kya???????phir…?????phir papa ne kya kaha?

K mom-tumhare papa bohot gussa karr rahe the,tumse bohot naakhush the

K makes an upset face

K mom-keh rahe the ki kashish se aisi ummeed nahi thi,jaab uske papa hospital mein hai,taab usne parivaar ke dukhon ka zaraa bhi khayal nahi kkia,aur sirf apni khushiyon ke bare mein socjkaar,shaadi bhi karli!..[k ke ankhon mein asoo hain]..aur kaha ki..jaab uska pithaa zindagi aur mauth se laad raha hai,taab beti honeymoon manane nikaal gai hai,keh rahe the ki ,jis kashsih ki wajah se mera sarr garv se uththaa tha aaj ussi ne mera sarr sharm se jhuka dia!

K is cryin

K mom-to beta maine kaha ki kashish bohot khush hai sukhi hai,uska pati bohot achcha hai,uska khayal rakhta hai,khush rakhta hai usse,sasural bhi bohot achcha hai uska

k-phir?

K mom-paar phir bhi wo nahi mane,phir bhi ye hi ratt laga rakhi hai ki kashish ne ye kyun kia?meri kashish,meri beti itni khudgarz kaise ho gai?kaise wo mere die hue sanskaar bhool gai,keh rahe hain ki,usne shaadi ki uss baat ki khushi hai muje,wo khush hai uss baat ki bhi paar jis tarike se kashish ne apna ghar basaya,uss tarike ne ek baap ke dil ko uski umeedo ko uske garv ko cheer ka rakh dia!

K is cryin,aur s sarr jhukake,pocket mein haath daalke sunn raha hai

K mom-paar kashish!maine abhi taak unhe ye nahi bataya ki tumhari shaadi sujal,se hui hai.ussi ladke se jisne…tumhe..uss din..party mein….jiski wajah se..tumhare papa ko……tumhare papa..aaj bhi wo haadsaa bhool nahi paae hain,aaj bhi ussi baat ka zikr karte hain…,aur agar unhe pata chalega ki tumhara pati aur koi nahi balki,sujal hai to,…….naajane kya hoga!


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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome...toooooo gooood...omg pooor kash...mayb she wud hav to keep her marriage thing with sujal under wrap now...hope her father forgives her and sujal...go sujal u idiot apologize to him 😡 😆 ...cont sooon...cnt w8 2 read more 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 poor sujal hope he does not blame himself 4 everyhitng and i hope kashish ke papa ko samaj me aajay ki sujal is the best!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow wow neelu awesome part toooooooooooo tooooooooooooooo tooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooood..now kashish ki mom ko bhot kushi hoti hai sujal aur kashish ko eessseh dekhne ke baaad ..sujal kashish k mom ke pass jata hai aur kehta hai keh appko kissi bi cheez ki zarurat ho toh bataiyega k's mom feels happy woh sujal ko pyar seh kiss karti hai aur abh toh usseh essa h lag raha hoga keh kashish uski beti bohot kush hogi sujal jese aadmi ke sath jo itna pyar karta hai usseh yahan taak keh uski mom ka bi dhyan rakkhne ko tayar hai..sujal thda emotional ho jat ahai jab kashish ki mom usseh apni bete ki tarah terat karti hai usski ankon mein thode assoo ajatte hai uskeh dimag mein ek hi baat gum rahin hogi kash meri bi maaa essi hotttti jiskeh sath mein mazak kar satkta ,,jiske kandeh peh saarh rakh kar rooh sakta kyunke maa hi ekk essah shaks hai jo humein jeene ka dhang sikhatti hai hamesha humein support karti hai advices detti hai par sujal hai badnaseeb jjiski maa hi ek dance club mein dhanda karti hai..thodi deher baad doctor comes and says keh patient ko hosh agaya hai kashish th kushi keh marrre jumh utthhti hai woh baash uskeh papa seh milne jaa rahin hotti hai par beech mein uski mom uussseh rokh leti hai ..kashish's mom sends mehek in kyunke usseh kashish aur sujal seh baat kaarni hot hai mehek goes in and kashish ki mom starts saying jab mene tumhare papa seh kaha tunne shadi karli woh bohot gussah hue woh keh rahein the jiss beti peh mujjeh garv tha usne mera saar jukha dia logo ke saamne kashish ko bohot dukh ho raha hai jiske wajeh seh usne yeh shadi ki wahi insaan aaj usseh nafrat karta hai ..k's mom saya kemene mannane ki kosish ki lekin woh manne hi nahin woh bohot hi zyada gsseh the kashish keeps on crying and cryng usseeh abh lgne lagt ahai keh its all her fault jo uski papa ki halath hai uski wajeh seh hai ..sujal sab kuch chup chap sun raha hai kyunke addhe kaaam mein ussiki galti hai ussi neh skashish seh kaha tha marry me aur paise milenge apni papa ki ilaaj ke liyeh s he does't say anything ..abi taak kkashish ki papa ko yeh nahin bataya keh uski shaddi jisse hui hai woh wahi addmi hai jisne kashish keh sath us dn party mein buraa kiya tha woh kabi bulaa nahin sakte j kuch sujal neh kiya tha kashish keh sath..abh jab neh pata chalega toh pata nahin kya hoga ..llz i feel so sorry 4 kashish abbh jitni glati kashish ki hai utni sujal kki bi ,sujal neh kashish ko ek ddeal sign karne ko dii aur kashsh neh maanlia sirf appne apa ke liye. .once again great part wonderful continue sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice update >>>>>>>>>>>>>........ ...............kashish's dad in the hospital and angry with???......abb sujal aur kashish kya karege ??????.........continue soon.plzzzzzzzzz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i am so sorry neelu .actually i was busy in doing my project that's why was not able to reply. waise kafi acha part tha 😊 . it was simply adorable 😳 .it was good to see that sujal-kashish are coming closer to each other with understanding. aur sujal, he is so sweet the way he consoles kashish is very good.i love the scene when he says that nothing bad will happen to her father aur main ho na! that was really amazing when they hug each other 😳😊😳 . ab lag raha hai that everything is well but i am scared neelu cause kashish's dad doesn't know that she is married to sujal 😕 . i don't know what the hell will happen that time 😕 . i think he will not accept them for some period but then finally he will 😉 . lekin us darmian i don't want sujal kashish getting away from each other 😭 . pehele se hi duriyan itni hai usme honeymoon par kuch kam ho gayi but don't know what will happen know. actually this sujal is so stupid 😡 . usse bhi kashish ko party mai yahin kehna tha kya. now see what happened sujal!. but anyway it was an emotional and a cute part neelu 😛 . keep it up 👍🏼👏👍🏼 . and yeah! continue soon plz..... can't wait any longer. aur ha! i am sorry for replying late kal se jaldi part padhu gi and will reply u as soon as possible. pakka. bye take care and do continue soon. 😊😛😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 nice part but i feel bad for kashish
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

K mom-paar kashish!maine abhi taak unhe ye nahi bataya ki tumhari shaadi sujal,se hui hai.ussi ladke se jisne…tumhe..uss din..party mein….jiski wajah se..tumhare papa ko……tumhare papa..aaj bhi wo haadsaa bhool nahi paae hain,aaj bhi ussi baat ka zikr karte hain…,aur agar unhe pata chalega ki tumhara pati aur koi nahi balki,sujal hai to,…….naajane kya hoga!

k-paar mamma,papa ko to batanaa hi hoga naa,ki…emm..meri shaadi..aur kisi se nahi balki..sujal se………..[looks twrds s aur s looks back ]

k mom-main jaanti hoon,paar..tumhare papa ko ye bilkul achcha nahi lagega…

k-i knw mumma,paar ye hi sachch hai,ki sujal mere pati hain,aur unhe bhi ye baat accept karni hoga,mamma main papa se naa hi apni shaadi ke bare mein jhooth bolna chahti hoon,naa hi kuch chupanaa,aage jo hoga,dekha jaega!

K mom-thik hai beta,jaise tumhari marzi

k-mamma,main papa se milne jaa rahi hoon

k walks a few steps

then mudti hai

k-kya hua sujal?chalo!

s-main?

k-haan tum!hum dono saath jaa rahe hain naa,papa se milne!

s-emm..hum?nahi..emm..kashish tum jao..mil aao..main yahin thik hoon

k-nahi sujal!tum mere saath chalo,hum ek saath jaenge!

S kuch kadam k ki taraf chalta hai

Phir when they reach twrds the entrance of k dad room

S stps

K gives a questioning look

s-tum jao,main yahin rukta hoon,zarurat pade to bulana

k-hmm

k goes in

dad lete hain

k-papa!

d-matt kao muje papa!tum jaisi ladki ka pita nahi hoon main!

K ke ankhon se asoo aa jaaate hain

k-aisa matt kahie papa!
d-tumahri jaisi khudgarz ladki ko aur kya kahun main?

k-papa

d-kya shaadi karna itna zaruri ho gaya tha?wo bhi itni jaldi,humse puchne ki zarurat taak nahi mehsoos hui!

K nazre jhuka leti hai

d-kyun sharam aa rahi hai,mujse nazre milaane mein?taab sharam nahi aai,jaab ye besharmon ki tarah haarakaat ki thi?kashish,main chahta tha,meri beti ki shaadi aise ladke se ho jisse uske lie main pasand karun,agar tumhe love marriage karni thi,kamm se kamm mujse apne baap se ijazaat le li hoti!

K is silent ,ankhon se asoo beh rahe hain

d-kahan hai wo?

k-ji?

d-kahan hain aapke pati parmeshwaar?[sarcastically],uss maahaan haasti se milvaengi nahi?

k-papa..wo..wo..bahar hain!

d-bulaiye unhe!sunna hai bohot bade aadmi hain!aane ke lie invitation card chapaanaa hoga kya?

k-papa unke bare mein aisa matt kahie!

d-bulao usse!

k-jii bulati hoon![she calls s]..suno!………..emm..suniye!

s ki awaaz aati hai

s-haan!

k-wo..papa….bula rahe hain,yahan aeiye!

Sujal comes in,sarr neeche karr ke ,dheere dheere comes in

s-namaste…papa!

d-[shocked]-TUM?????????????????????????????

S is confused,k bhi darr jaati hai

d-KASHISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

k-jii papa?

d-ye wohi..hai naa..wohi laadka hai naa..jisne tumhare saath..party mein..wo hi badrameez hai naa!

K looks at s

Aur s guiltily nazrein jhuka leta hai


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Posted: 18 years ago
neeelu dear awesome part hamesha ki tarah masth ,rapchik ...tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood .... abh kashish ki mompareshan ho jati hai agar kashish keh papa ko patah chak gaya ke jisse kashish neh shadi kii hai woh aur ko nahin wahin larka hai jisne party mein usseh batameezi kii th toh pata nahin ky ahoga kashish bi bohot pareshan ho jatti hai par she thinks abh woh jooth nahin bulsakti usne faisla kar liya hai keh apne papa ko batakeh rahegi keh uski shadi sujal seh hui hai ..woh andar jannne lagti ha phir kehti ha keh sujal bi ussekh saath challleh papa seh milne pehle woh keta hai nahn mein baaad mein milunga lekin kashish zidd karti hai jab woh darwaje ke pass pohnchta hai he says tum jao jab zarurat paregi mujeh bulalena sujal ko bi acccha nahin lafa raha kashish kki papa keh saamne esseh jae kyunke woh jant ahai wohh ussseh bohot nafrat kartein hoge ..abh kon baaap apni bet ki behzatti sehen karega aur kashish ke papa apne trikeh sahin hai sujal is now feeling guilty for what he sis ..kashish andher jaaati hai aur uskeh papa usseh bohot gussah hotteh hai he says tumein sharaaam nahin ayii essi harkaat karteh hue she feeel guilty for what happend phir uskeh papa sujal seh milna chateh hai he says kya itna arra aadmi hi keh nvtation denah parega annne ke liye kashish feels bad about what her father said woh kehti hai please essah maath kahiyeh uskeh baareh mein kyunke sujal ko kashish keh ilawa aur koi nahin samaj sakta ..she calllls sujal woh ander jattta hai namasteh karta hai aur kashish keh papa shock ho jateh hai sujal ko pata tha essa hi kuch hone wallla hai isiliye ussseh shuru mein ander nahin anna tha lekin ek din ttoh sachai ko saamne ana hi tha ..kashish keh papa usseh yaad dilata hai yeh wah aadmi hai jisne kashish ki bezzati ki thi party mein saari puurani battein yaaad atti hai he is in anger aur kashish and sujal ek dusrein ko dekh rhein hai aur sujal appne nazrein kukha letta hai he feels very guilt ..oh no abh pata nahin kya hoga sujal keh sath hope kashish keh papa maan jaye isssh shadi ke liyeh aur saaabh kuch teek hojae ..great parrt neeelz continue ssoooooooonnnnnnn...can't wait more
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey, neelu nice part 👏👏👏 but yaar i am afraid ki kashish ke papa sujal ko kuch aisa vesa na kehede 😕 . i mean he should't go on his parents and stuff you know cause then again he will feel bad, again he will drink and will again start to ruin his life😭😭😭 . i am afraid that this should not happen any more now. it was an exciting part and next part will be more exciting as it will show how sujal will react and what her father will tell him 😕. good job neelu 😛 👍🏼 ⭐️ . i think that in some of the next parts kashish's dad will insult sujal and my guess is that kashish will not be able to handle sujal's insult and she will tell her father to keep quiet and will support sujal fullheartedly. this my guess. i wish it to be like that. thanks for the part 😉 . and yeah! continue soon plz.... can't wait any longer. bye, take care. 😊😊

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