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Posted: 18 years ago
hai sujal akela rehana chahta hai apni kash ke saath 😉 😳 ...awsum part neelu...sujal kitna caring aur loving...kashish is having such a cute caring hubby cum coolie 24*7... 😆 😳 😛 ... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part 👏 .kashish bahut hi lucky hain😊 jo use itna pyar karne wala pathi mila hain 😳 😳. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow neeeeellu great ek aur romantc part tooo tooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooood ..abh sujal koh ek minte ki durrri bardasht nahin hotti kashish sirf packing karne jaaati ha sujal ko essah lagta ai keh uski zindagi usseh chor keh ja rahi hai phir she tels sujal mein abbi aii thodi deher mein hamesha hamesha ke liye tumhare pass abh kashish packng shuru karti hai and sujal usseh yar seh dekh raha hota hai uski masumiyat keh kaise woh ek angel ki tarah lag rahi hai dekhte hi dekhte usi nazar kashish ki kalai par pohonchti hai woh kuch wierd se nishan dekht ahai aur usseh yaaad ayah yeh sab kuch ussi ke wajeh se hua hai na woh kashish ka hath gusseh mein pakad ta nah esa hota he goes to her and tells her yeh nishan kashsh says oyar seh as iif kuc nahin hua keh yeh tumne gusseh mein kiya its okay lein phir b sujal ko bohot bura lag raha hai jisseh woh pyar karta hai ussseh choth pohonchai hai usne and sarts banging his hand n the table..kashish usseh samjati hai keh yeh toh sirf ek mamuli sah nishan hai woh usseh yakiin dila rahi hai keh yeh kuch nahin hai cghill..abh dono airort challe jatte hai sujal neh kashish ko esseh thamma hua hein keh usseh saar ha koi kashish k usseh chin na leh uska hath apne hath mein they reach in to the plane aur dono chup hotteh hai kashish ko baat karni hai sujal seh lekin wh abbi usseh disturb karna nahin chatti kynke woh abbi tuth chukka hai phir thodi deher baad sujal khud kashish ka hath ko chumta hai aur uski godh mein leth jata hai aur kashsh pyar seh uske sarh peh hath ferh rahn hai ek air hostess tapakti hai she ofers 4 drinks lekin kashish aur sujal donon naa karteh hai sujal kashish seh kehta hai usseh kaho chali jai humein akela chor deh aur kashish tells her to leave sujall abbi essi halath mein hai keh usseh koi nahi pasand uske aju baju 😕 ..great part neeelz continue sooooon can't wait more
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Posted: 18 years ago
cho cweet..........sujal is sleeping like a baby...... 😊

cool part yaa...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
once again excellent part neelu an sooooo... romantic. too good yaar 👏 . sujal and kashish are so sweet. i love the way sujal sujal kept his head on kashish's lap. that was damn romantic yaar. aur hamari kashsih bhi use accept kar let hai 😳 😳 . ab lag raha hai that she is coming out of her kiddish behaviour and letting sujal come close to her ❤️❤️❤️. the best part was when sujal asks kashish to tell the air hostess to leave them alone. this was really amazing ❤️ . this shows that he doesn't want anyone near him except kashish 😉 . he wants to be really close to her and really cares for her which is revealed in this scene and also when sujal sees his finger marks on her wrist and gets angry on himself ❤️ . this was excellent part. keep it up neelu 👍🏼 . and yeah continue soon plzzz..... seeing both of them like this, i think that next, all parts will be damn romantic and i am really curious about it 😃. can't wait any longer. continue soon. bye.take care. 😊😊😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

S & k reach home

K goes & touches dadi's feet

d-khush raho!tum dono itni jaldi aa gae?tumhe to aur kuch din rukna tha naa?kya hui koi prob hai?kya baat hai sujal?

s-[sar jhukake]..emm..wo..emm..dadi..wo..main….. 🤔

k cuts him

k-dadi wo actually,maine hi inse zidd ki aane ke lie!

S is looking at k surprised 😲

d-kyun kya hua beta?tumhe achcha nahi laga?

k-[smiling & holdin d pyaar se]nahi dadi,trip to bohot hi achcha tha,bohot mazza aaya,paar actually mujhe zaaraa home sick feel hone laga,wo main itne din ghar se bahar nahi rahi naa,aur abroad-shbraod ki aadaat nahi hai naa,tht y.main to zidd karke sujal ko laai 😃

s is constantly starin at k hairaani se 😲

d-oh achcha,waise achcha hua tum dono aa gae

k-kyun?koi prob hai dadi?

d-nahi actually beta,tumhare ghar se ph aaya tha,tumhare papa ki tabiyaat thodi bigad gai hai

k-kyaaaaaaaaa?????????papa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kyaa..?????????kya hua..papa ko????????[bohot ghabrakaar] 😕😒😲

d-wo to beta muje thik se pata nahi,I think tumhe abhi hospital jaanaa chahie!

k-haan,haan hospital,thik keh rahi hain aap😔

d-sujal!beta tu bhi jaa,kashish ke saath,wo akeli jaegi kya?

s-haan!haan..kashish chalo!


k-nahi sujal!main chali jaungi,ur not well naa..i mean tumhari tabiyaat kharab hai naa,u need rest,tum aaraam karo!

s-nahi kashish!main aaraam baad mein bhi karlunga,mere araam karne se kai zyaada zaruri hai mera tumhare saath jaana,tumhare saath rehna,to hum dono saath chal rahe hain,ok!chalo kashish!

K doesn't argue further aur chup chap maan jaati hai

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They reach the hospital

Wahan mehek k ki mom saab hain

K[worried cryin]-kya hua mamma?kya hua papa ko? 😔

K mom-beta pata nahi,unki haalaat improve ho rahi thi,paar pata nahi achanak kya hua?dr abhi check karr rahe hain!

k-oh

k cant control herself ,she is cryin,she didn't expect her father's situation 2 detoriate 😭

s dheere se touches k ka kandha

aur usse apni bahon mein bharkaar sahara deta hai

k s ke seene se laag kaar ro rahi hai

aur s ne usse safely thama hua hai

k-[cryin]..sujal..sujal…..papa..papa..papa ko..kya hua……??????..abb..kya… hoga…. 😭

s-[holds her arms,& looks at her reaasuringly & with care]..kuch nahi hoga kashish!kuch bhi nahi hoga,saab thik ho jaega!

k-[phir se s ke seene se lagg jaati hai ]kuch nahi hoga naa.. sujal…bolo…kuch nahi hoga naa! 😭

s-[embracing her with warmth & runnin hand arnd her hair 2 console her]nahi kashish,kuch nahi hoga!meri baat pe bharosa hai naa!main hoon naa…. tumhare saath!saab thik ho jaega..main kuch galat nahi hone dunga!

K ki mom jo s aur k ko dekh rahi hai,aur unki baatein sun rahi hai,has a small satisfactory sweet smile on her face,seein both 😊

Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 Hey neelu.............sorry i cudnt comment yesterday............i just read both the parts.........they were very nice.........im loving these cute parts between sujal-kashish........waiting 4 more such cute parts............continue soon

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nce part it is nice to see the protective nature of sujal 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
neeeelu great part and kind a sad ..abh donon ghar pohinch teh hai aur dadi nneh dekh keh suprise ho jati hai keh itni jaldi kesse agai inka trip toh kuch aur din continue honne wala tha phir sujal kuch nahin keh sakta kyunke uski wajeh se toh yeh log jldi agai toh phir kashish baahana bana ti hai keh she has abroad rehne ki aadat nahin hai aur phir hme sickness isiliye usne zidd kki wapis anneh ke liye ar sujal shock and hairaan ho jata hai kashish ke jooth bolne seh ...abh dadi kehti hai keh goood tm log agai kyunke usseh abbi patah chala keh kashish ki papa ki tabiyat kuch kharab hogai hai kashish yeh sunke bohot sad ho jatti hai dadi ko itna nahin pata hota toh kashish decides to go there sujal bi jaana chata hai woh manna karti hein lekin sujal phir bi zidd karke uskeh sath jaata hai..they reach at the hospital aur kashish see's everyone there her mom mehek woh jaati hai uski mom ke pass aur uski papa ki tabiyat ki barreh mein puchti hain uski mm kehti hai sab kuch toh theeek tha lekin pata nahin yeh achanak kya hogaya she starts crying sujal usseh console karata hai usseh apne bahon mein piglne deta hai kashish sujal seh keh rahi hai kya mere papa theek honege wau woh usseh yehi keh rhaha hai keh tum bilkull fikar maat karo tumhare papa ko kuch nahn hoga aur kashish ki mom un donon ko dekkh keh kush ho jattti hai 😊 😊 😊 ..wow neelu mast part continue sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazinggg part...sujal kitna supporting aur caring ho gaye hai 😳 😛 ...kashish was sooo sweet in taking care of the situation in front of dadi...hope kash's father gets fine....fabulous hun...cont soon!!! 👏

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