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Posted: 18 years ago
neelu,neelu,neeluuuuuuuuuuuuuu.... what can i say yaar main to puri ki puri behosh ho chuki hu.i just can't express what i am feeling 👏👏👏 .GOSH!it was amazing, too cool and soooooooooo romantic. the best part was when kashish starts kissing sujal all over his face and not leaving a single place unkissed 😳😳 😳 . it was so good.neelu yaar maine tujse kaha tha na that you should try to write a novel on romantic couple maybe imagining sujal and kashish you should really give it a try yaar. i am serious 😊 😊 😛 . i mean that if u can write so well expressing scenes in fanfic why can't u write a book. that will really be good. the way kashish is expressing her love is so romantic and good but now what happened to this sujal, he is so stupid. how can he sleep like this. god this is all because of his sharab😡. he should really stop taking it. now my guess is that they will get along with each other very well and yeah don't forget that kashish still has to teach him the dance. i think that will be the most romantic part ever 😳 . ok neelu fantastic job👍🏼. and yeah do continue soon plz....... can't wait any longer.bye 😛
Edited by fravashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 wooowwwwwwwwww such a romantic part........i expect something else, but i can wait for it..........awesome update......i can imagine the hole scene...very cute 😊 update soon..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ok nxt prt-

Subah hoti hai-

K uth jaati hai

S abhi bhi so raha hai

K uthkaar s ke sar pe pyaar se haath ferti hai

Aur uthkaar she goes 2 freshen up

Kuch der baad

K comes aft bein freshened up

Aur she looks at s who isstill sleepin ,peacefully

She goes & sits besides s

Aur uske sar pe pyaar se haath ferti hai

Aise kuch der haath ferte ferte

S ki neend kulti hai aur wo uth jaata hai

k-[givin him a sweet smile]arre!tum uth gae,thoda aur sona hai to so jao 😊

s-nahi thik hai[in a passive tone]

s gets up & goes 2 the washroom

k is waitin 4 s

usse pata hai ki s kuch nahi keh raha paar andaar hi andaar uske jo toofan umad raha hai usse wo samaj sakti hai

s comes out of the washroom aft some time

s-kashish![on a serious tone]

k-haan[goin 2 s,& looking at him pyaar se] 😊❤️

s-kashish hum aaj hi yahaan se chale jaenge

k-aaj??


s-haan,I am sorry ,I knw humein aur kuch din rehnaa tha,paar ..i cant……..plz…,I knw I spoilt everythin 4 u..but….

k-nahi sujal!main samaj sakti hoon[s ke gaal pe pyaar se haath rakhtihai,gives a sweet pyaari understandin smile 2 s].hum aaj hi challenge 😊 ❤️

s also gives a chotti si kanjoos smile 2 k 😳

s-main travel agent ko ph karta hoon,aaj ki tickets ke lie

k-hmm[smiles] 😊

s makes a call

s-kashish!

k-haan!tickets book karli?

s-haan flight kuch ghante baad ki hai

k-oh thik hai!sujal!

s-kashish!

k-hmm

s goes closer 2 k

takes her hand on his

& hugs her

k is a bit hairaan at s ka behaviour

she also embraces him with all the warmth

s-thanxs!

k-thanxs?4 wht?

s-4 everythin!

k-[pyaar se,touchin his cheek]u don't hav 2 be thankful ,atleast 2 me! ❤️

S smiles a bit 😳

S touches k ka both the arms & makes her sit on the bed along with him

Aur k ki god mein sar rakhke simat ke ankhen band karleta hai

Holdin her hand onto his & keeping his fingers between hers

Aur k pyaar se uske sar ke haath ferti hai aur s ke baalon ko affectionately sehlati hai

Aise kuch lamhe guzar jaate hain

Kuch der ke baad

K thoda hilti hai uthne ke lie

S becomes cautious & attentive

Aur kass ke k ka haath thaam leta hai

s-kahan jaa rahi ho?

k-kahin nahi!packin bhi karni hai naa!

s-matt jao,yahin raho,mere pass!

k-sujal!main tumhare pass hi to rahungi,aur packin nahi karungi to hum jaenge kaise?bolo❤️

s-muje chodke matt jao!

k-arre!main tumhe chodke those naa jaa rahi hoon,ain to yahin rahin tumhari nazro ke saamne!tum yahin letkaar araam karo,main bass 5 min mein phir tumhare pass aa jaungi ,thik hai naa! 😊

s-mere pass rahogi naa!

k-haan baba,tumhare pass hi rahungi,hamesha! 😃


Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwww...kitna affectionate part tha..kash is sooo understanding...hope she nver leaves him...awsum update hamesha ki tarah 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
arey neelu unhe intni jaldi wapas kyun bhej rahin hone, 😭 kuch aur waqt saath rahenge tho ,they will understand eath other better 😉. waiting 4 next part 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow neeeelu once again sweeet and abit of mixture rmance part tooooo goooooooooo ...abh subha hotteh hi kashish uth jatti hai lekin sujal abi bi soh raha hai becase of alll his pain and plus sharab uski wajesh seh he reall needed some sleeeep..thodi deher kashish bi sujal ko pya seh dekh rahin hai uskeh saarh peh hath pherti rehti hai and she know keh usne kitna saha hai itna toh shyad kisi neh bi exerience nahin kiya hoga abh useh laga hai woh bohot akela hai..kasish goes freshens up and still saw sujal sleeeping phir se uskeh pass jatti hai uskeh saarh peh pyar seh with lots of love and care hath pherti rehti hai esah karte karte sujal ki ankh khul jatti hai and kashish usseh keht hai u can sleeep more agar tum chaho par he thinks abb bass ,woh fresh ho kaaar bahar nkalta hai and tells kashish that abbh hmmeh yahan eh chalna chaiye he is right after jo kuch hua usse ek minute bhi yahan sukun nahin milega ..he appologizs 4 leaving early and kashish understands why he doesn't want to saty here any more..abh he talks to the travel agent and confirm all the tickets and formalitezzz..then achanak seh kashsh keh kaar usseh kassh keh galleh lagata hai kashish thodi heran ho jati hai lekn phir bi feels all the moments...then takes her form both her arms makes her sit on the bed aur uski goodh mein sarrh rakh keh sottah hai aur kashish uskeh balon ko dheereh se jesse brush kar rahin hai usa dard itna gehra hai keh shayad koi bi dawaaa assar nah karreh usseh esah lagne lagaa hai ke woh abbh bohot akela hogaya hai par haarh bar jab kashish ko dekhta hai toh sujal ko tassali hoti hai keh koi hai mujse pyar karne wallla harr cheez mein mera sath denne wala abh yahin hain jo usseh sambal sakti hai ..after some while kashsh hilti hai to get up sujal feels like ki usseh hamesha chor ke jannneh walla hai ..jesse uski dil seh koi bahar nikalne ki koshish kar raha hai he asks kashish kahan ja rahin ho and woh yar seh kehti hai only packing karne warna how wil we go phirse sujal behki batein karta hai mujeh chor keh maat jana aur kashish usseh samjati hai keh nahin kabbi nahin mein sirf panch minute ke liye packing karne ja rahin hun aur phir wappis arrahin hun tumhare pass hamesha hamseha ke liyeh 😳 😳 ...wow neeelu bohot hi accha likha continue sooooon cant wait more..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wwowwwwwwwwww.............such a nice part.........how sweet is kashish,.........n sujal doesn't want her to leave him...........a really cute scene........continue soon.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏
twas a very cute part...........continue soon

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey, neelu too good yaar.i loved the part when sujal hugs kashish and thanks her for everything. it was an awesome part 👏 👏 . sujal really needs kashish's support which kashish is giving him and that that is good to see 😳 . i am so happy that sujal behaves nice with kashish and gives her all affection 😳 . i am sure now they will lead a good life in future 😉 . it was a nice sweet part neelu. well done 👍🏼 👍🏼 . and yeah! continue soon yaar 😊 . can't wait any longer plz....... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok nxt prt-

k-arre!main tumhe chodke thode naa jaa rahi hoon,main to yahin rahungi tumhari nazro ke saamne!tum yahin letkaar araam karo,bass 5 min, main phir tumhare pass aa jaungi ,thik hai naa! 😊

s-mere pass rahogi naa!

k-haan baba,tumhare pass hi rahungi,hamesha! 😃


abb k is doin the packin

s is sittin on the bed,starin at his beloved

achanak s ki nazar k ki kalai paar padti hai

he is horrifiedly surprised 2 see k ki kalai pe ungliyon ke nishaan
[remember ussdin s ne k ka haath gusse mein kitni kasske pakda tha,jaab wo usse apni mom se milanae le jaa raha tha,ussi ka natija hai]

s uthkaar jaldi se comes 2 k,who is busy in packin

s[uske haath ko dheere se,care se chute hue]-ye..ye..?kashish! 😲

k[k is 1st confused,then looks at the area where s is referin 2] [she smiles jaise kuch hua hi nahi] oh ye!!!! Kal gusse mein thoda zor se pakad lia tha naa ,haath tumne,isi wajah se,kuch nahi hai,sujal! Thoda sa nishaan hai,thik ho jaega. 😊

s-[guilty]kashish,I am sorry…I am sorry,meri wajah se tumhe itni zor se………damn it [bangs his hand on the table]…how..cld I hurt u…? 😕

k goes 2 s uske kandhe paar pyaar se reaasuringly haath rakhti hai

k-sujal!kuch nahi hai,kaha naa maine,thoda sa daag hai,main thik hoon,tum bekaar pareshaan ho rahe ho,aur waise bhi ,maine bhi to tumhe kitna dard dia hai tumhe kitne ,anginat thapad mare bewajah,tumne uff takk nahi kia,aur agar tumne galti se mera haath thoda zor se pakad hi lia,jisse zara sa nishaan pad gaya to kya hua?main tumhare lie itna nahi she sakti!………aur..waise bhi Mr, main itni bhi nazook nahi hoon,samje!harr dukh,haar dard,sehne ki himmat rakhti hoon! 😃 😉

S doesn't say anything ,jst sighs with guilt 😒

k-[smiles pyaar se at s]waise agar hum aise hi baatein karte rahenge,to kabb flight humein chidke India chali jaegi humein pata taak nahi chalega.to chalein? ❤️

s-[givin a small smile]chalo! 😳

Abb k apna bag uthane jaati hai

s-ruko,main uthata tha hoon

k-nahi main karr lungi!

s-main karr raha hoon naa!

S saare bags utha leta hai

Ek bhi k ko uthane kya chune taak nahi deta

k-arre ye kya?tumne to saab utha lia!ek to muje do!

s-nahi!thik hai!
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They reach the airport & r waitin there

K ko to s ek pal taak ke lie bhi apne aap se judaa nahi hone de raha

Usne k ka haath pakada hua hai

His fingers are betwn her fingers

& he is leanin on her shoulders

& k kisses him on his head with affection ❤️


they r in the plane-

the plane is in the air

s chup chap baitha hua hai,wo khayalo mein gumm hai

k bhi kuch nahi keh rahi ye sochkaar ki s kuch kehne sunne ki haalaat mein nahi hai

he is emotionally very unstable

to k bhi chup hai

kuch der baad

s gain holds k ka haath

& kisses it

aur uski god pe sarr rakhke,ankhen band kar leta hai

k kuch nahi kehti,she pyaar se accepts him &uske sar pe pyaar se haath ferke

kisses him affectionately near his eyes ❤️

all the while s holdin her hand & lyin on her lap lik a small baby,bilkul simatkaar

kuch der baad air hostess comes with hard drinks

ah-mam,sir!drinks?

k-not 4 me!thanxs!sujal,tumhe kuch lena hai?

s-[ussi position mein,k ki god mein lete hue,bina thoda sa bhi hile]nahi,muje nahi chahie.kashish,isse kaho,jaldi se jae,akela chod de hume

k-no thanxs,we don't want drinks!

Air hostess goes


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