PYAAR KI RAHEIN-sk fanfic - Page 104

yaar neelu too good [=D> 👏👏 . tumhare imagination ka koi jawab hi nahi. once again wonderful part yaar.excellent, and mind-blowing [;)😉😉 .the best scene was when sujal tells kashish that he wants to kiss her on lips 😳 . it was so amazing and romantic too. i can really imagine sujal saying that with his intense eyes. this was really excellent scene and even kashish lost herself in sujal. yipeeeeee! 😉 😉 ok my guess is that now i think i am sure that they will become one forever cause this is the real time where they can give chance to their relationship to make it more stronger. keep it up, neelu. and can't wait for next part yaar. continue soon plz............. 😊 👍🏼

wowwwwwwwwwwwww...................how romantic.............it's beutiful scene btw sujal and kashish.........cantinue.....i want to read more..........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz............awesome...... .i love this pair 😉

neeeeellllluz dear awesome part toooooo tooooooooooo great,amazing,mazedarh rapchik part tha..oh no abh sujal is losing his control usne itni sharab pee hai ke usseh hosh mein lana next to imposssible hai and kashish ko sjal ka dar dekha nahin jataaa uski koshish jarri hai sujal ka dard mittane ki lekin yeh esah dard hai jo zindagi bhar nahin mitsakta kyunke abh yahi uski pehchan hai kashish jitni koshish karre sujal ko apni pehchan se duuuur honne ki lekin yeh donon kashish aur sujal jante hai ke sach to wahi hai ke woh ek dhande walli ka beat hai poooooooor him uske passss sabh kuch hai woh kuch bi karsakta hai lekin uski papa ki ek galti ki wajeh seh sab kuch bikhad gaya aaaj woh kisika saamna nahin kaar pa rha hai naaa uska koi dost hai na koi dushman uske pass sirf kashish hai jo usseh samaj sakti hai jo uska pyar hai ..sujal kashish ko puch ta retah hai kya tumh inmein so ho jo mujse nafrat karreh doo u even think i m bad lekin kashish ka ek hi response hai keh sujal woh hai jiske bina woh jeee nahin sakhti uska pehla aur akhri pyaaar..he telllls her tum bohot acccchhhi ho pehle sujal ko kisssi bi cheez seh daar nahin lagta tha na hi maut eh lyunke nah uske passs kuch khonnne ka tha na hi kuch ennneh ka abh uske passss kashish hai joh uski zindagi banh chuki hai uska pya ,uski hamard ,ek essssi sathi jo her musibatth her mushkil mein uskah sath deeegi sujal ko purrra yakeeen hai ke she's the only one for him..kashish sujal ko pyar seh kisss karti hai ek gaaal parh ekin sujal ko aur chaiye bohot naughty hogaya hai lolz and he gets one more kisss abh yeh toh hadh seh zyada barh gaya hai ussseh kisss hotoh par chaiye 😆 and isss chotteh pyarre se momentko kashish nahi sujal misss karna chate hein they one to feeel each second of this moment 😳 ..neeeeeelu dear awesome part continue sooooon can't wait more

stop blaming urself sujal 😡 ...u r not a thing to b scared of but a person to be loved and cared...awsummme part neelu...sad and romantic tooo...lol sujal is getting nauty-nauty 👏

Ok nxt prt- [arre surya yaar kahan ho?]

s dheere dheere brings his lips very close 2 hers

k closes her eyes 4 the moment!

S dheere dheere apne hoth k ke hothon ke aur kareeb

Kareeb se bhi kareeb leke jaa raha hai

S also closes his eyes

S k ke jitna kareeb jaa raha hai

Utni hi k ki dil ki dhadkaanein tez ho rahi hain

K ka dil dhak dhak karr raha hai zoro se

Usse ghabrahat bhi ho rahi hai,excitement bhi

Abb s aur k ke honth itne kareeb hain ki

Kissi bhi pal wo lamha unhe haasil ho sakta hai

K intezaar karr rahi hai, s ke uss behad chotti si durri jo unke beech hai ,usse bhi mitta dene ka

Aur wo intezaar kaar rahi hai ki kabb s ke honth uske hothon ko chuenge

Kabb wo ek dusre ke hothon ko chukaar ek dusre ko kareeb se bhi aur kareeb mehsoos karenge

Abb s apne hoth aur aage lejaata hai k ke hothon ke aur kareeb

Uss durri ko mitaane ke lie

Paar!

Achanak!

S k ke kandhe paar naashe ki haalaat mein behosh hoke gir jaata hai

Aur so jaata hai!

K is strtld

She cldnt even react

She never expected this

Uska mooh kuch der khula ka khula reh jaata hai

Usse to 2-4 second taak samaj hi nahi aata ki hua kya

Then kuch der baad she realizes ki akhir actually hua kya hai

Then she holds s

Aur uske gaal paar thapkiyaan maarke kehti hai

k-sujal!sujal!kya hua!sujaaaaaaal!!!!!!!!uffffffffffffff……!!!!!!!!!so gae kya!uffffffff!!!!!!!!!!

k shakes him

k-uthoooooooo naaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!

Paar phir bhi kuch nahi hota

S ko hosh nahi aata

K bass thandi aahein bharti reh jaati hai

k-ufffffff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abb k kare bhi to kya kare

Islie wo s ki shirt ,joote etc uthar deti hai

Aur s ko bed paar sula deti hai

S bilkul ek bachche ki tarah

Bilkul innoscently gehri neend mein so raha hai

K jst cant help but smile seein s who is sleepin so innoscently & cutely

Wo s ke seene pe pyaar se apna sar rakhti hai

Aur wo bass s ko dekhe jaa rahi hai gaur se,pyaar se muskurate hue

K pyaar se apna chehra s ke chehre ke kareeb leke jaati hai

& kisses him on forehead,both the cheeks,chin ,tip of his nose

wo s ke chehre ka ek bhi hissa nahi chodti

aur aise kiss karte karte

stps near his lips

k ke honth s ke hothon ke bohot kareeb hain

wo pyaar se s ko dekh rahi hai jo ki iss waqt gehri neend mein so raha hai

k brings her lips close 2 his

& puts his lower lip btwn both her lips

& plants a small sweet juicy kiss on his lower lip

usne abhi jo kia wo sochke k Sharma jaati hai ,thoda

aur muskura deti hai

abb k pyaar se puts her arm arnd his neck

aur s ke kandhe paar sar rakhkaar uske saath let jaati hai

she rubs her nose pyaar se with his neck

aur s ke kaan pe dheere se kehti hai

k-i love u!

aur s ki gardaan pe plants a small kiss

aur s ke kandhe pe sar

aur uske seene paar haath rakhke usse jakad karr so jaati hai

awsum part...haila neelu u made me all blushy blushy 😳 ...ye sujal bhi naa wrong tym pe so gaya...and u was literally creating such a suspence on the kiss..i was lyk...god neelu make it fast 😆 ...continueeee sooon 👏

wow neeelu once again masth part toooooooo tooooooooooo goooooooooooooood quite i mean bohot hi romantic accha part...abh essah moment chal raha hai jisseh koi miss nahin kara chahta sujal toh harab ke nashe mein hai usseh yeh bi nahin patah keh woh kya karne ja raha hai aur kashish wh nervous ho rahin hai excited bi ,ek ajeeb se kushi ho rahn hai ussseh donn keh hoth tne kareeb hai keh ek aur move seh samjo mil jae lekin dhaaaattt teri ki !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eah nahin hua sujal wahin behosh ho gaya aur kashish stands there shock mein uske dimag mein yeh baaat tun tun kar rahn hogi keh kash sujal neh ek aur kaddam bharaya hota toh shayd woh essssa pal kabi misss nah karti .. 😕 😕
woh sujal ko uttthane ki purrri koshis karti hai lekin usseh sujal uttha nahin gaya she takes him to the bed uska shirt unbuttton kaarti hai uskeh joote nikalti hai aur usseh theek se letati hai and ussseh ghor seh dekh rahi hai aur sujal toh bilkul ek chotteh bache ki tarah lag raha hai jiski masumiaat kashish ko chu jatti hai and a smiles comes ..woh jaaake sujl ke sseeeneh peh sarh rakh kaar sojati hai and starts kissing her everywhere naaak ,neck ,kaanh,cheeks ki donon taraf aur reh gai ek jagah woh hai hooth she doesn't wana miss this and she slowly kissses hi there after a while thinking about that she starts blushing and slowly sujl keh kaaaan mein i love you kehti hai while kissing him aur soooh jaatti hai sujal ki bahon mein 😳 [:$
wowo neeeelu bohot hi rmantc part fullll of rmance continue soooon can't wait more

hi , really superb parts, after sad part vvvery nice romantic part 😆 . afterthat i expected something to happen 😉 . But any ways cool part 😛 . waiting 4 d next part cont soon

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arey yaar........ i thought something would happen....... 😉
kya twist hai bhai........hehehehehe
neways...cooooool part.........

amazing part 👏 .....what a twist 😆 😆 ...i was 100% sure that kashish and sujal wont come close to eachother...it happened that way only......i am eager to read next part ...plzz post soon