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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

That was a fantastic update
eagerly waiting for the next part <3

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

You deserve a 👏

What I liked the most was your explicit details on the political system of our country.. You have weaved a brilliant story..

SMJ - culprit.. no surprises.. Khushi tried to catch a glimpse of self prestigious ASR who would never give up on his decisions but instead she got to see his another face his true face. He was sincere enough to admit that this wasnt his cup of tea and he was being forced into this. A different relationship growing in between them just forgetting about the past for some days was a pleasure to read. He thought he could read her mind by looking at her eyes on the invitation to SheeshMahal. Her ready acceptance did knock him off that hatred and a small ray of hope appeared when that array of thoughts was going through him inside the helicopter.

The dreaded past.. coming back ... as you said that building did cast a black magic on him inviting the hatred inspiring him to take the revenge for the past.. So there we could see how we reached the prologue..reading the prologue I actually thought she was his wife and this as his part of revenge. My prediction was only half true then. Coming back to the revenge part . He made Sheetal a bait who was unaware of his plan falling for his display of intimacy. His mind was registering the fact that she was behind watching him feeling his hurt which he had experienced before I guess. He found his pleasure seeing her hurt but something was paining within himself. Thats a different emotion. Hurting her by hurting himself?

Waiting for that much awaited past to come at the front.

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

that was bad Arnav.. hope he atleast talks to Sheetal lest she has some feelings... waiting for the past..

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sukritaa12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Just happened to come across this amazing story and I am so glad that I came across. .. what a great story. .. I am in aww... keep it up. .. ur creativity and the thread of emotions you weave is outstanding. ... love love love it

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Awesome awesome update!!!

Well it wasn't entirely Arnav's fault for the disaster that happened, like I thought. Khushi was bland on her reason for not liking Shyam.

Loved the progress Arnav-Khushi's relationship made. But unfortunately, Lucknow brought back bad memories for Arnav 😒
Just when they wanted to dream of a better future..

And the prologue scene. So it IS Arnav and Khushi..

He wanted Khushi to feel jealous when she sees him with Sheetal. But things got worse with the memories. To think that he actually went a notch higher and kissed sheetal..it gives me the creeps

Poor Khushi..

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Maybe the past will be revealed? 😉

Loved it!

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Juhiji 👏 Kab kitna achcha likhti hain...

God you should get into book writing business. BAS

Aap chamkate sitara ho aur hamesha rahengi. ⭐️

I had thought that i would not do a res till i finish my comment for the previous chapter But i cant help being here Dammit.

What a gripping sensational chapter 6 you wrote for us. And you left it there and your note about asli duniya well what can i say

I don't know what the hell i am going to do to get through till the next update where hopefully you will clarify things for us. But its you so i never can make a guess. (But can i just share this secret with you i love the way you make us hairan pareshan everytime you update)

Its still a RES for me for this chapter too and i will get back to both my res the first thing tomorrow morning.

Toh hamara RES remains...

*Edited*

Part1:

So Mr. Jha is the culprit for making khushi go all ASR on Arnav...well i loved the way khushi taunted Arnav and equally also how Arnav gave it back to her. These two really don't need any other source of entertainment besides themselves. There's never a dull moment around Arnav and khushi.

So like the show here too Mr. Jha played the cupid to their love saga and helped them maybe get more closer.

Khushi happiness at Arnav's bharosa has me being pretty sure that this time around maybe Arnav was the wronged person and hence so much of anger and khushi is carry the guilt of being the one who did it.

Loved the way you described the week in which Khushi did all she could in her professional capacity to help Arnav any ways with which she could inspite of all the thoughts that kept troubling her and the few odd dhak dhak as well.

Sheesh mahal the cup which holds all the problem in Arshi land but i am sure your past will be much more interesting and complex than that lame excuse of a past that we got to see actually.

But i am wondering where Anjali will fit in all of this. I am so tempted to change my guess here to say that maybe it was Anjali's wedding and khushi stopped the wedding due to some MU...

So i think i did a pretty job of creating another *facepalm* moment for me.

Part 2:

My good god Juhi the 2nd part of this chapter has to be one of the best part that i have ever read. The way you brought out the whole ASR taking control over Arnav was just amazing and i am stumped. Don't think my writing skills are good enough to appreciate something so so awesome. ⭐️

The khushi who was evoked anger in arnav is now able to give him some solace but still ASR wants to hurt her and hurt her very badly at that.

And boy does he do it...

He has some super cool moves to get the saree and blouse off so quickly and ya it must have helped that Sheetal was kind of desperate in her NEED of him.

Poor poor khushi but dammit she is khushi she could not have done something so grave 10 yrs back or did she😕

And just when they start to remember you stop...

Chalo we all know INTEZAAR KA PHAL MEETHA hota hai...

So i am going to wait for my meetha phal but please next update tak raaz khol dena nahi toh mai Seh nahi paoongi...

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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faffy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

You are one of the finest weavers of tales on IF without doubt, you keep surpassing yourself each time!!!

You have me totally enmeshed in your web of tales - power-packed and unpredictable updates.

Thank you so much for writing for us.

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Loved how the cave experience and the disaster in Delhi brought them closer.

You could just feel them falling for each other.

Loved the way you described the transformation in Arnav the second he steps into Sheesh Mahaal.

The past over takes him and his only purpose is to hurt Khushi as much as he can.

I'm so glad prologue part is here. It was driving me nuts waiting for it. A part me is happy that it wasn't as horrible as I imagined but the other part of me is feeling heart broken for Khushi.

Looking forward to you revealing the secrets from the past!!

Awesome story & great update.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

So it was Shyam Manohar Jha!!! Her intuition was right after all. But glad they didn't argue over it.

The pain she felt when realised that he won't be here in India for long is another reminder of their changed equation. In the beginning they both wanted to stay as far as possible and now they're talking on phone daily.

The feelings have carried themselves forward and to such a great extent that they even knowing fully about the past still ignored it and took the greatest risk - risk of risking their heart with a person with whom their past is tainted with unmemorable memories.

But the past loomed and made its presence felt in Lucknow. He couldn't forgive after all. He blames her for all the mess and pain of the past.

Sheetal- whom he was thinking to use just to tease and make Khushi jealous, but with his hatred he used her for breaking her heart with all his might. He just didn't break it but walked over it. this was so heart breaking. Khushi came to Lucknow, to Sheesh Mahal ignoring everything for him but what did he do? He took revenge from her in the crudest way he could.

Looks like now past would be revealed. I'm bracing myself to know the reason for it all, to know why Arnav hold her responsible for everything and why does Khushi feel guilty, to know what made him break her heart like this.