ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

You are a good storyteller and have a beautiful way with words. I have a feeling that there must have been a huge misunderstanding for their break up 10 years ago. But their passion now is intense and way you describe even looks between them is so good!

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

just read chap 5 n 6 in 1 go...

left me breathless..

loved the magic n the things that transpired in the caverns betwen arshi..

also hoped that wreched shyam udnt hav messesd things..our arshi cud hav shared a kiss !!

why oh why ..didthey go to sheesh mahal

that placed ruined eerything that was built..

i guess u r gonna reveal the past next..

plese make the update sun if u camn !!!

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

I absolutely loved the update. The way Arnav pushed Khushi on by belittling her and boosting her moral strength. The way he gave up the last bit of his sugar source so that she could keep going. The way Khushi was so professional at the time of crisis. Everything was very well written. Amazing update. Can't wait for the next chapter and don't forget to PM...

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

ufff...what an update...left me spellbound...cant wait to read about their past..

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Nirjhoramanisha

@Nirjhoramanisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Wow.you are superb.how nicely you depicted the emotional turmoil.amazing yaar.eagarly waiting for knowing the past.pls i want next update to be soon.i just love it.

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@Chocolate_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

part 1 chp 6
awesome one
how can shyam be so loyal to his country when he was not loyal to any relation in show😉...arnav khushi had sorted out the shyam mess and khushi finally saw things from arnav's side...they are having calls good their relations is going on steady pace...don't know why am sensing that it is calm before the storm...lucknow,his family and finally sheesh mahal...arnav invited her as his special guest
can't wait for part 2
loved it dear

Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

im shocked and heart broken
everything was going perfectly till they reach sheesh mahal
why the hell he chose this way to hurt her
i completely love the first part
but the second part its so sad
i hope arnav's this horrible action has some justified past incident
i hate sheetal i cant tolerate her
waiting for the next update

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@Chocolate_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

well i am still in the state of shock😲😲😲😲
firstly i was thinking like arnav how will khushi react at sheetal's presence and may be this jealousy will brought out but it was completely taken u-turn by arnav hurting her for the past
arnav wanted khushi to be jealous by seeing sheetal there but some past memories made him forgot everything that they shared as professional and personal way in the present
at last it left me heartbroken💔🥺
just waiting for the impact of this hurt and also the past
try to update soon

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Finally we will get a glimpse of their past in the next update.

Things progressed quite fast for both of them - their calls and furtive glances. Both of them also accepted that something unusual was happening between them but the past drove a wedge AGAIN !!

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kamalinee

@kamalinee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Finally we are coming to the truth, but somehow I do not want to know it so soon. Maybe because it is the fear that you will end this soon. I am hooked on this SS and would never want it to end. The rapid change of Arnav's mood and mind as he got down from the helicopter was unbelievable and so beautifully justified by you. Things moved very quickly in these chapters and I really feel for both Arnav and Khushi. Hope you update soon...