ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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shona-li

@shona-li

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Every line had my heart racing for the next. I see that the Sheesh Mahal is a prominent character in this story. First off, poor Sheetal. The girl doesn't know she's a mere puppet. No one likes to be played. Second of all, what the hell is this dark and mysterious past of theirs? I'm dying to know? It's enough to send Arnav raging like a barking dog and Khushi into frightening despair. I'm more than just a little intrigued, so can't wait for your next update!

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

great updates.eager to know what happens next

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Brace yourself.

Unres 1 here.

Unres 2 here.

Unres 3 here.

Round of applause for you (and me) ya?

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

OMG PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOONER THAN THESE...

OMG what a update, absolutely loved it

I'm speechless, firstly his confession about what he really wants and trusting her

Then these 2 actually talking on the phone and not being able to keep their eyes off each other

and woah both going to lucknow and him wanting to make her jealous, he surely did that

But his own nightmares didn't help and now both are in pain

WOW JUST WOW! The feelings that u have brought with this update are so strong that i wana know what happened in the past right now

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Amazing update. Arnav s emotional turmoi wss well written. Waiting for khushi s ...
hope next update will be flasback...

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

that was a superbly done update!! excellento!

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Wonderful update.This is the trailor part...I already assumed that when I read the party going to be in Sheeshmahal...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Sighhhs We have now arrived at the prologue and you ma'am have given us the mother of cliff hangers *sniff *sniff this is not fair! How could you do this to me? I don't even know when the next update will happen? How would I survive now?

^^ Yeah yeah as you can gather you have some really dramatic readers, but it is all your fault for making us react the way we do. At the risk of repeating myself for each time you update, this chapter was absobloodylutely fantastic. Just when we were enjoying the great progress in Arnav and Khushi's relationship, we got to witness it all go down the drain when arnav got too consumed by the memories of the past and went too far. He didn't even realize that he actually used someone aka Sheetal no matter how much she was into him he had no right to use her for his purpose of hurting Khushi. And then after everything he went through with Khushi ( in their working period where she worked so hard for him as well as their time in the expedition), then his inviting her as his special guest and after all that to put her through what he did regardless of what happened in the past is totally unacceptable.😡 You ma'am portrayed their emotions wonderfully as always, as we got to witness Arnav feeling every bit of the pain he inflected on Khushi. *sighs now that Arnav has totally shattered her and ruined their present/future, does the past matter? I know I won't excuse him regardless of how much pain he suffered in the past! Let's see what you instore for them next, can't wait to read the next update!

Truly appreciate all the effort you put into these beautifully written and detailed updates despite having a hectic asli duniya! Can't wait to read the next installment! :)

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#489

😭 😭 😭 i have come across a cliffhanger and am clueless as to how to overcome it...somebody help...whose recommendations will work with Juhi to come and pull me over this cliffhanger ?????

Semanti???? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

Oh Dear that was perfect...hatred with vengeance can blind you too everything ..you have left us hanging to know what it is in the part that has tangled them so bad...