ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

awesome update...pls pls pls update next part soon.,cant wait

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

So finally we are getting to know what happened a decade back between Arhi..

Waiting for the next update eagerly.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Oh pls pls do update, sorry for being selfish but
I've eagerly waited for this part, to know what actually happened between these two
This was an awesome update
Thanx

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

I want to spelunk Arnav with a sauce pan. I know its all wrong but spelunking sounds like hitting someone on the head. Hard. 😆

I'm enjoying this a lot Juhi. I know I don't comment regularly, but I do keep track and read. Waiting to see what dastardly act Ms.Gupta performed at Sheesh Mahal. Bring it on.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Res

Once again, I am stumped by the chapter and the comments by Semanti and Chai! I have nothing I can say that will do justice to the chapter but here are the highlights

Change seems to be the big word in both stories I have read in the past 4-5 hours. Something has changed between Khushi and Arnav today. The past looms but with that there is the wistful hope of a different future, fear for a future that would happen if everything went on as is.

Won't comment on Jha's corruption - kind of trusted Khushi's instinct - she has been around longer than Arnav. So she had to be right.

Won't comment on the past either...till we know more. And we will know soon, I think.

Bring it on. Your story and your writing are now flawless - makes for great reading especially when you have to sneak in a few minutes from a toddler and a husband who still doesn't get the obsession with characters from a show that ended so badly 7 months back!

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Clearly my words can.not do enough justice to your flawless,spot on,so well play of words and emotions,the instant transition from affection to shear hatred and finally the devastation of two souls and an abrupt an to a love story even before it started!!!
Goshhh m soo happie I didn't miss out on this awesomeee story!!

Loved how you unraveled the story!

Its like a journey from all hatred to some spark of attraction and affection till again pure hatred of past and firmly ardent decision of destroying the other...intense should be the right word

Poor khushi tried to fight all the darkness of past jus to be there fr the person who invited her as a special guest and then broke her to pieces

Sooo well written

Finally the everything of the past will be unfolded

Amazinggg update!!!

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Ohhh god my most favorite chapter to date...it was an impulsive decision on arnavs part...like sheesh mahal was a dementor sucking his khushi out of him...what i liked was through the hatred he could feel her pain n still feel happy to see her broken

U rock yaar

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

leave d shyam nw. Beautifuly written. Superb povs. Nw khushi is broken nd arnav in confusion. Waitng 4 nxt

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Stumbled upon this one in the evening n I just read all the parts..The first update made me sad and it prevailed upto the point where i read that arnav will try to make khushi jealous by flirting with sheetal..it kinda made me feel that the 1st chapter was a drama but now...😭

I just cant wait to read the next chapter and know what happened 10 years back..U are doing an awesome job with this mystery/drama..