ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1071

Fantastic update
Thanks for the pm

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1072

oh no...how could he not realize - now how many steps they have taken back...

-Sona

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jojo21

@jojo21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1073

I've read this all in one and I can't help but say WOW! What an amazing amazing story. Each and every chapter just left an impression on me. When you revealed their past, I couldn't help but thing what our leads were thinking, how could they ever move past everything that transpired? And then you followed that chapter with the scene in Khushi's apartment that left me reeling and emotional. Just a fantastic story. Thank you.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1074

Jo Pehle Hua Na

I loved it when Arnav shared details of his aspirations and hos concerns wth reagrds to remaining a politician with her, Unknowingly they had already taken the first step towards a reconciliations.

Alas that joy was short-lived. Setting foot on Sheesh Mahal brought back all those memories. I know I may be in the minority when I say that in a way Im glad that the Sheetal episode happened. Arnav hadn't moved on from the past, he needed to do something to make peace with the past. But in his efforts to hurt Khushi he also realised that he couldn't see her like this. You have stayed true to Arnav's character here and did complete justice to their love hate relationship. One second he shares something very personal and another second he hurts like no one else.

Interlude-

This is poignantly tragic chapter. there are so many grounds you have covered here. Right from communal harmony in the form of Hindu parents adopting muslim children, the undying love of a sister for her brother and of a brother for his sister and the evil in men who did what they did to Anjali.

You handled the chapter with aplomb. there are stories that make you cry, but this update made me think.