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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

V good ... At least hurt is both side ...
loved it

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Snake Manohar Jha is indeed a bad guy then...well its good his asli chehra came out quickly...
So jo pehle hua naa,ab hone laga hai...good to see that...
but again the past...what happened ten years ago...I am dying to know...
He realized his feeling...wanted to make Khushi jealous...then immediately after entering into SheeshMahal,he forget that all...what happened was really too bad,right????
What he did is unforgivable...Khushi is devastated now...
will u take us to the past in next update?????waiting...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

wooowww what a roller coaster update...

i loved the conversation they shared in the car... loved how they came closer emotional through the week... loved their late nite convos..

loved everything that happened in that week...

but..😭 the moment he entered Shanti Van..😭.. but i loved how u portrayed his emotions... it was soo heart felt...

it was just PERFECT.. the whole update...

hope u continue soon... as we finally are about to know what WAS there in the Past that was sooo dreading... waiting with bated breath...

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

And there it happened! *phew*

I have no clue what to say here!

I have been dreading this moment in the story so far! and i am glad its over... Now what lays ahead is something that needs to be checked!!

Oh man! Sheetal has clearly got it all wrong now! He has messed up everything all the more for him in an attempt to hurt her!!

Offcourse we very well know Khushi is devastated ... but why to this extent only the revelation of the past can tell us!

Beautiful update as always!

waiting with bated breath for the further updates!

Although the major portion of it is all over ... the best part of it is yet to come! and i cant tell you how eager i am for it!

Thanks for the update Juhi! :)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Oh oh the scenes of the prologue is here Atlast
What a wonderful update Juhi
The transformation in arnav in seconds has done it all
Now ism sure the next is the revelation of the past
Waiting eagerly for it
Lovely lovely update juhi

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

very well written...so much progress in 1 chap yet the transition was smooth beautiful nd justified...perfect growth fo SS 👏

so d matter was shyam...but it amused me being a secratary how khushi scold him...!! nd asr accepted it gracefully...sadda haq after all 😉

must be sumthing too harsh to rule him again...but he again messed it up super big tym...(blouse kiu utariii.😡 ...revenge my foot pervert-- chance pe dance kar liya.😈 )..playing wid fire.. nd burnt 3 lives khushi sheetal n he himself,,,,,professional mess was handle by khushi bt now who is gonna fixed it up!!

finally the raz is gonna reveal...pls pls pls don miss update...i will go mad otherwise...

nd yap voting is done...if u win don forget to treat us...😆
start another one sooonnn😛

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Loved the update!!
Cant wait for next one... Dying to know what happened 10yrs ago!!!
Update soon dear...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

😃

A woman's intuition should never be ignored ...

Khushi had this terrible feeling about Dr.Jha and she was so right ...

by accepting bribes he got the whole department and the Minister into a mess ...

Juhi ... have just loved the way you have shown the roller coaster ride Arnav's

emotions take ...

right from the time he sat in the helicopter ... to the time he reaches Sheesh Mahal ... 😲

from a man who had fallen hopelessly in love to a man who had his past demons catch

up with him ...

his whole stance ... his attitude ... his body language had changed giving out totally different

vibes ... of intense hatred ... for the one woman who he was in love with ...

So what started as a game just to make Khushi jealous ended up to hurt her beyond measure

for the past ...

the ugly head of the past has risen to destroy all the beautiful moments they had shared

the past month ...

Thanks Juhi for this beautiful story ...

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quicksand

@quicksand

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Waiting for their past ...
Hope the party changes everything😊

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#470

awesome and tooo good update..omg u have linked the story so beautifully to the prologue that while reading arnav's point of view i was having at back end khushi's side in front how she was giving another try to this...how she was going on stairs ...and was bit nervous and same time feeling lil happy at heart ready to give second chance...wow dear u r superb...love u for ur writing expertise...simply beautiful❤️...right now i am failed to understand should i cry for khushi or arnav ...both have some dark past...who is right who is wrong...damaged has done...sufferer is for sure "the love" here

Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago