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HEY FRIENDS! I'M NEW HERE AND M TRYING TO WRITE A STORY. SERIOUSLY I'M TOO BAD AT WRITING AND BUILDING UP SENTENCES SO A BIG SORRY IN ADVANCE.
I'M NOT GONNA GIV D CHARACTER SKETCHES. THE STORY WILL REVEAL THEIR CHARACTERS.
HERE V GO-------

IT IS THE MONSOON SEASON IN MUMBAI , THE MONTH OF JUNE.A BABY GIRL WAS BORN IN JHA FAMILY ON 8 JUN. A SWEET LITTLE GIRL WHO HAS A CUT & PASTE FACE OF HER DAD. AS HER FATHER TOOK HER IN HIS ARMS HE WAS OVERWHELMED WID JOY. ONLY HE & GOD KNEW WHAT HE WISHED FOR HIS DAUGHTER, DREAMT FOR HER THO HE LUVED HER BUT HAD SUM DESIRES WHICH HE WANTED TO FULFIL THRU HIS DAUGHTER.
BASICALLY HE PERSONALLY DISLIKED GILS FOR THEIR ANNOYING HABITS OF ARGUING WHICH HE DISLIKED D MOST, THEN THEIR HABIT OF LIEING , CAUSING MISUNDERSTANDINGSAND ALL.THE REASON WAS HIS PERSONAL EXPERIENCE IN HIS FAMILY. EVERYDAY HE HAD TOSEE LIVE DRAMAS OF D LADIES OF THE FAMILY AND LASTLY HIS BHABHI GOT SEPARATED FM D REST OF D FAMILY. SO HE WANTED TO MOULD HIS DAUGHTER IN SUCH A WAY THAT THO BING A GIL SHE IS AWAY FM SUCH THINGS.
AND ASLSO THAT'S WHAT SHE GREW UP TO B. IN FACT HER FATHER'S STRICT BEHAVIOUR TOWARDS HER MADE HER LESS OF A GIL IN BEHAVIOUR. SHE WAS RUDE , SHORT TEMPERED ,VIOLENT, EMOTIONLESS SERIOUS IN STUDIES, AGAINST ALL WRONGS ALWAYS HONEST, CUDN'T STAND GOSSIPS . PPL USED TO SEE HER AS IN CONSIDERATE BUT AT HEART SHE WAS PURE AND HAD EMOTIONS , SHE ALSO HAD FEELINGS. THO NO ONE EVER SAW HER CRYING IN SCHOOL, PPL THOT HER TO B A DAMN STRONG GIL WHO'S INSIDE A WALNUT, A HARD NUT TO CRACK, BUT SHE KNEW SHE'S TOO WEAK EMOTIONALLY.
SHE ALWAYS HOPED THAT PPL WILL UNDERSTAND WHY IS SHE SO - RUDE STERN INCONSIDERATE BUT ALL IN VAIN BUT NO ONE EVER UNDERSTOOD HER.
SHE'S MANVI . SHE'S JUST LIKE A COCONUT-HARD AND TASTELESS FROM OUT BUT SOFT& SWEET FM INSIDE SHE JST NEEDED SOM1 2 BREAK THAT HARD COVERING .
SHE HAD FREND BUT JST 2 AND DIDN'T KNOW WHETHER THEY REAL OR JST TO GET D SIDE EFFECTS OF BING FRENDS WID A STUDIOUS NUT.WHY SHUD JST THEY B MENTIONED WHEN EACH OF HER CLASSMATES SIMPLY USED HER FOR THEIR NEEDS. WHEN NEEDED EVEN RIVALS WUD COM TOUCHING D FEET BUT AT OTHER TIMES THEY NEVER USED TO SAY EVEN A :"HI". SHE FELT BAD, DAMN BAD BUT NEVER EXPRESSED HER ANGUISH COZ SHE KNEW THEY ARE NOT THAT SOM1 SHE'S WAITING FOR.
IN FACT WHAT TO SAY OTHERS WHEN HER PARENTS HERSELF DIDN'T UNDERSTAND HER FEELINGS AND DIDN'T SEEM TO CARE FOR HER DESIRES. AS TOLD B4 HER FATHER WANTED HER TOFULFIL HIS DREAM OF GETTING INTO IIT-KANPUR THE BEST IIT AND HER MOTHER WANTED THE SAME NOT THAT BCOZ HER HUBBY WISHED SO BUT SO THAT HE WILL NEVER TAUNT THE WOMEN. BUT NO 1 EVER ASKED HER WHAT THE HELL SHE WANTED TO DO WHAT WAS HER AIM ? FROM HERE ARISES THE PROBLEM SHE HATED PHYSICS BUT HER FATHER HAD MADE IT HER CAREER AND SHE WANTED TO GET INTO FASHION DESIGN,JEWELRY DESIGN OR INTERIOR DECORATION. BUT FOR HER DAD IT WAS WASTE OF TIME BUT FOR HER IT WAS ALL SHE WANTED TO DO COZ SHE KNEW SHE CAN DO IT WELL AND KNOWS WELL THAN BLOODY PHYSICS. BUT HER FATHER WAS ALSO DAMN ARROGANT JST LIKE HER.
WHEN HER FATHER TOLD HER HIS WISH OF CING HER IN IIT-K SHE SAID NOTHING BUT AT THAT MOMENT SHE FELT AS IF SHE WAS TORN APART COZ THAT' S NOT HER DREAM.
ONCE IN CLASS WHEN THE CORRECTED PAPERS OF PHYSICS TEST WERE GIVEN SHE GOT THE HELL OF SHOCK FOR AN EXACT OF 10 MIN NEITHER SHE SPOKE NOR SHE MET ANYONE'S EYES NOR SHE ANSWERED ANYONE NOT EVEN TO HER BEST BUDDY SIA. SHE DIDN'T BLINK FOR EVEN ONCE DURING THAT STRETCH OF TIMECOZ SHE GOT 3 OUT OF 9 .SHE FELT TODAY SHE' SBREAKING HER FATHER'S TRUST AND DREAM. SHE CARED MORE OF THEM THAN HER CAREER GOD KNOWS WHY COZ EVEN SHE DIDN'T KNOW WHAT HELL WAS SHE SUPPOSED TO DO NOW. AFTTER 5 MIN MORE WID TOO MUCH OF SIA'S AND 2 OTHER GIL'S PESTERING SHE SPOKE BUT WHAT -"WHAT WILL I TELL MY DAD ABOUT MY MARKS? " HER EYES WERE NOW FLOODED WID TEARS AND THEY MADE THEIR WAY THRU HER CHEEKS. THEY WERE SIMPLY UNCONTROLLABLE. SHE EVEN BLURTED OUT THE WHOLE PHY AND IIT THING. IN FACT THAT INCIDENT HAD FREAKED THE HEL LOUT OF HER. HER FRENDS SUGESTED TO TELL HER WISHES TO DAD BUT SHE CUDN'T SPEAK ANYTHING ON THIS MATTER SHE WAS CRYING BITTERLY. THAT WAS THE FIRST AND LAST TIME SHE CRIED IN FRONT OF HER CLASSMATES SO MUCH . LATER THET DAY SHE TRIED TO SPEAK IT, EVEN SPOKE IT BUT ...AS EXPECTED HE GOT DAMN ANGRY. AFTER SO MANY YEARS SHE WAS BEATEN WID A STICK. SHE WAS GIVEN D ADJECTIVES LIER, STUBBORN, DRAMA QUEEN AND SHE DECIDED SHE WILL GET INTO IIT BUT THEN SHE WILL GET INTO FASHION DESIGNING AFTER THAT. AND WORST PART SHE HAD STOPPED HOPING FOR GD OR BAD THINGS FORM LIFE AND EVEN HER COCONUT BREAKER BUT STILL SHE PRAYED DAT SHE MIGHT GET HIM
AND THAT'S WHAT SHE DID.
NOW SHE IS 23 AND HAS COMPLETED HER B.TECH AND IS IN 1nd YEAR OF B.DES(BACHELORS OF FASHION DESIGNING) FROM NIFT-DELHI AND IS D BEST DESIGNER IN THE WHOLLE INSTT EVEN BETTER THAN D SENIORS. SHE NEVER VISITED HER FAMILY EVEN ONCE SINCE SH JOINED IIT DELHI. THO THEY TALKED ON PHONE BUT NEVER DID SHE VISIT AGAIN.
SHE HAD AN EMPTY LIFE WHICH WAS SOON FILLED AS SHE ENTERD IN IIT. SHE WAS LITTLE WEAK IN MAKING FRENDZ AND ESPECIALLY BOYFRENDS BUT FRENDSHIP AND LOVE FINDS ITS WAY.

IN NEXT PART I SHALL START THE LOVE STORY.
ALL THOSE WHO PATIENTLY READ IT THANKS A LOT .GUYS DID U LIKE IT I MEAN IT'S SORT OF WEIRD BUT STILL I JST TOOK A CHANCE. RESPOND SOON. EVEN IF IT IS BAD TELL ME WHAT ELSE SHUD IWRITE OR IMPROVE GIV ME SOME IDEAS.
TOMATOES, ROTTEN EGGS, CHAPPLES EVERYTHING IS WELCOMED SWEETLY.

INDEX
CHAPTER 1-------ABOVE
CHAPTER 2- -----BELOW
NOTE-------
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear. nice start.. really an interesting one..
one request.. next time pls dont write in capital letters... it feels like crowed... just a request... pls continue it.. and do pm me!
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nice start interesting looking u r story looking forward how u r story moving
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love the concept sounds very interesting really wanna read more so plz do continue soon 😉
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thank u dears.
i'm soon gone update it.
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I am damn excited to continue this for sure.Thanks to all those who commented & pressed d like button.
chapter 2
It was the 1st day of Manvi in IIT . 1st day of a new session, awhole new batch of students which means seniors will have a good time ragging them. There she was entering d IIT wid a sad expresion and hatred written all over her face tho no one read it. It was d name which had drained d happiness of her life. Tho she was a gil wid grumpy face but didn't leav an opportunity to enjoy her life. But when her father told her his desires she was broken. She didn't tell how hurt was she but was crying fm inside. That day onwards she thot a million times b4 laughing bcoz she had learnt fm life-"the amount u laugh, that much u cry." But in her llife dis statement had been changed a lil coz she seemed to hv not laughed equal to d amount she had to cry. Yes she cryed but not in front of her parents or she'l be a drama queen & if she cryed in front of her classmates she wud get vulnerable to their lame jokes and comments.She knew she was a laughing stock boz of her seriousness in her class but never said anything coz she might gv them another reason to laugh & even now she was prepared to b d so in her college but certainly not d vry 1st day.
Ther wer grups of seniors standing at diff. positions awating d newcomers. But manvi was not that fool to let dem hv a chance. Instead of asking dem d way 2 principal's office she asked d peon &met d principal &d seniors got offended as dey lost a chance. But then d day wasn't over yet dey wud find more chances and dey found. While she was going towards her hostel but suddenly she was stopped by a gil. She forwaded her hand & said "Hello i'm Maya dis college's most butiful n hot gil. And u c i'm of helping nature so i offer to help u , plz" Meanwhile Manvi was thinking'She looks like a ghost wid lil bit of face over her make up. BTW who d hell told her she's d most butiful and hot dat person wud b another moron to complement dis make-up-kit.How does she manage doing it wid her studies &helping nature not fm even 1 angle does she look so.'She was too engrossed in thots meanwhile Maya was waving her hand infront of her eyes, only then she came back to reality. Maya quizzed her,"where were u lost. i know i m butiful but u can hv a look at me later as well as i'm not going anywhre and nor even u. Now let's go to your room.BTW what's ur room no. Show me d key.Ah got it 896.Let's go ." Basically Maya was stardom gang which consisted of d college's famous, spoilt, rich brats.And which consisted of Ayush, Rishab, Virat & gils-Riya,Simmy& lastly Maya.They had planned up sth to irritate Manvi.She followed her coz as it is she needed ask d floor & direction.& dey got to her room & Maya pushed her in & ran away where she hit som1, a boy.(actually it was his room, it was room no.968 but dey pulled out 1 nail &put it d opp way which made it 896.A nd dat boy was none other than Ayush of ⭐️gang) She got scared &tried to run away but he caught her& by now d rest of d gang had come over.Dey hadn't planned to molest her jst irritate her. But dey didn't knew Manvi was a karate champ. She kicked him hard on his lower abdomen.He screamed loudly.Now Manvi slapped him & punched him on his face and blood oozed out fm his nose.She opened d door & came out & saw d whole gang wid shocked xpresion on their face but she said nothing & also she noticed d hole of nail on d door & went off. Then dey entered to have a look at their frend who was badly hurt and took him to d sic room.They wer all pissed off when he narrated how d slap&punches of her soft hand tasted.Ayush told dem "stop screwing up wid her yaar. she is damn hot figure wise and attitude wise."He had started liking her and her atitude as if her punches had got all d screws of his head loose... no actually dey wer lost. His gang got d 2nd biggest shock of d day😲 co z he was crying in pain a while ago & now he says he's started liking her.

hope u like it guys and sorry i said i wud start d luv story but since it wasn't a pre-planned story I wrote it as it came to my mind. and a big SORRY (kan pakad ke) for any mistakes I've done. Any requests, suggestions or comments from u guys are heartily welcome. guys do press d like button if u like.
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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nice update she very smart and brave girl
she not showing how sad from inside to any one
update soon next part and do one thing u should add
that what u writing ff and ss so everyone get to know about u r story
and send u r pm and buddy request to them who click like button

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wah!! kya update thareally fabulous - lolz manvi karate champ good one i feel really bad for her n hopin with fingers crossed nw virat will meet her, see through her n help her live life again teach her to smile from the heart great update- plz plz continue soonthe like button is nt working for me i dnt kno y -so do count my like in too as im nt able to press the button 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awow this is soo interesting in a way i can relate to this character...i adore her she is quite strong and interesting one ...
and poor ayush dnt messup with the sherni 😆
and he already likes her god bless him 😆
yu write very well and its very interesting too
and if yu need any help yu can just scrap me
update soon and do pm me 😊
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THANKS to all those who liked and commented.SORRY for writing late as i was busy wid my school projects and moreover i've advanced d story in such way dat write now i m confused wat to write but still for my readers i m continuing di wierd and horrible story. dis one u may not like. SORRY for that.

CHAPTER 3
Ayush's secret gf, Simmy(she had a crush on him) was het up & was abt to go d principal but d gang members stopped her. Rishab said "I m quite impressed by her. She is diff. from others and has a gd attitude." Seeing towards his gf, Riya who was now glaring at him,he said," it doesn't mean she is better than my Riya. Actually she's d best attitude gil." Dis line jst earned him a slap on hand.But soon dey, Ayush-Simmy& Rishab-Riya resolved their probs.
Den Virat started,"Whatever u say but dat gil surely had smthg spl in her. Her eyes had a spark in them.She is not like d other gils. To b precise exactly opposite. i felt she vil b nice.She shud b a member of our gang."Dis shocked everyone. dat snobbish Maya angrily said,'Virat hv u forgotten v r d stardom gang. V r d most famous &rich students of d college.She didn't seem to b rich fm any angle & leave alone famous coz whatever she did she did in a closed room. no 1 knows abt it& v r nt crazy to tell abt dis to everyone to gain her name n fame. So listen to me n drop d idea."Virat thot,' Maya if u r stubborn then i'm double of u aakhir tumhara elder bro hoon.' Yes guys Maya is Virat's sibling. an yr younger which means she is wid Manvi in her class. But since she was his sis she got her entry into d gang d vry 1st day n widout ragging.
D boys were already overwhelmed wid joy to hv her in their gang. After arguing n lecturing for a gd 1 hr d boys convinced d gils. But now dey were scared how vil go to her to talk & dey started wid their yet another round table conference discusing what wil dey speak.
On d other hand Manvi found her way to room. In d room she got her 1st frend Daisy. she had arrived a day early & had cleaned d room.Now she helped Manvi put her clothes in d closet and books on shelf. Manvi felt nice seeing her gesture of kindness.Dey bcame gd frends n wer comfortable wid each other.Dey told each other abt d day's happenings since arrived. Daisy felloff d bed when she heard Manvi's incident, but she jst smiled bcoz even in school whoever messed wid her wer always screwed.Manvi also told her abt d make-up-kit,Maya who claims to b d most butiful and hot gil of d colleg. Now Daisy told her abt d stardom gang. Manvi hated dat gang for their deeds 1st and now even more due to their snobbish ideals.
Here was d gang on their way to meet manvi, apologise and invite her to b a part of their gang.Maya knocked coz manvi only knew her.Daisy opened d door & stood their looking d gang & manvi alternately.Manvi was frustruated cing dem.D gang looked at Manvi nd cud make out she was angry. 1st dey 1 by 1 introduced demselves. 1st Maya apologised for leading her in wrong direction, den Ayush for trying to coming close to her,3rdly Rishab& Virat for turning d no. plate, and Riya and Simmy for coming up wid such idea.But manvi was still glaring at dem.
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago

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