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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
sorry for late reply
awesome update
now she became part of their group officially
loved it
nice precap
pkz cont soon
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
read ur story. Loved it
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
FINALLY M HERE TO GIVE NEXT UPDATE.

CHAPTER 8
MANVI"S POV
Our 2nd semesters r over n v r hving leaves of 5 days,which means v hv 2 days for classes to start.Dis tym m damn sure of scoring badly in all d 4 subjects.It wasn't like i didn't prepare well but i was a hell lot tensed n so i forget even wat i knew perfectly.
Fine now let's not go dere...so rite now d whole grp is at riya's place n v r chatting over random n most weirdest stuffs like how many capsicums r dere in a large pizza, or wat's d temp. at which dey r baked...seriosly r dey mad or r planning to open up a pizza parlour to earn money, no i mean who on earth discuss such stuffs n anyways i hate pizza.
VIRAT"S POV
I c manvi's tensed mostly probably regarding d tests or my frends r freaking her wid der cheesy talks. Dis Ayush n Rishab has seriously lost der nuts n bolts...I'll book beds in an asylum in agra. After d tests dey hv started talking all damn nonsense.
Anyway lemme think of sth to cheer up Manvi...ummm...ya..got it.
[sms]
v-lets go to the nearby restaurant to get some eatables.
m-not in mood tak maya...
v-no u only. don't deny
m-y..
v-coz u r nyc.. i mean maya is all too confused abt wat she mite want..dont wanna take a risk
m- ok c'mon..
Vry gd now i'll take her to a nyc place
v- frends! m planning to get some eatables m hungry n i c my frends too r n dat's d reason dey r talking of pizzas n its ingredients since past i hr.N Manvi accompany me coz u seem not interested in der idiotic talks.
m- ok!! frends neva mind he is hungry too so he too is behaving idiotic. V'll b back in an hr or so.
yes!!!...yes!!!...yes!!!...v r gonna go somewhere all alone away fromm d chatterboxes.
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[in d car]
M- virat wher r v going?? rn't v supposed to go d oder way???!!!
oh god she is flooding me wid qs. I had to think so hard to get dis xcus to b out wid her n now she is concerned abt der hunger...anyways at least she spoke she seemed so tense i thought i she'd b my namesake company.
V- Manvi v r going to some nyc place which is my fav. n u too will like. so b quiet v'll reach in..5 min
she jst nodded.
v reached in 10 min n she was again lost in her world. i got out n opened d door for her -
v-- Manvi, c'mon
[she looked around. d reflection of dat park wid d stupendously shaded sky in her eyes made it more beautiful..tho it was faint but clear enough for me to s thru]
[d park}
m- virrat wher r v?? weren't v supposed to go to a restaurat
v- but b4 dat i wanted to uplift ur mood. soo..howz d place..my fav place may b urs as well now..now speak up [i shook her, she is lost-no not in her world but in dis park. she's physically wid me but mentally enjoying a tour around d park. her eyes r popped out, her mouth is open(a butterfly wud get in)n she's forgot to scream at me]
[ya so dat was my idea. She is a gr8 nature lover she loves to visit new places n so opted for dis place]

MANVI"S POV
as v reached d park i was quiet mad at him for lieing to me but d beauty of d place is so amazing. It's feb now which means spring season.Dis place shows d beauty of spring to its full extent. It will look more mesmerizing during sunset.It has d capability to capture anyone's attention. i'd like to live here foreva.So many flowers so colourful, so many species. Der smell is making d surroundings a drug sort for me.Trees wid new lite green coloured leaves r complementing d flowers.N d sky is complementing d scenery in front of my eyes.
oh!!
m- virat!! [n i hugged him tightly...he's brought me to such a nice place i can't help but stare...it is so so nyc..ouch virat is breaking my bones...he's hugging so tight..its like a rock is kept over a twig...finally i freed myself from d hug n]
M-virat!! dis such a nyc place.it hasn't left me wid words to describe its beuty.Com let's go.U hv made me so damn happy.
[Till now i suppose i was bhving stupidly after looking at d view but since i hv hugged him he's been grinning like an idiot n its scaring me.No I mean whenever i m around he keeps on staring wid dreamy eyes or he smiles like an idiot.Is he mentally unstable. But wateva it is I like him..ya sometimes he confuses me wid his actions, like now n sometimes he's so sweet.I luv his activities. He makes me feel so special at times.He compels me to come out of my reserved self}
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
amazing update Iishita
their Pov is great
Thanx 4 the PM
make it long dear
waiting for next part
update soon 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Nice update
yesss im happy mmanvi feeling sumthing for virat
shes more comfortable with him
n will hopefully open up to him 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
nice update he want to spend time to her
and she like his company when he took her
out first she angry and when she saw where
he brought her she feel happy to see
surrounding update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
its an sweet lil crazy update 😃
firstly the group talking nonsense lol they are soo crazy then manvi's reaction to it and virat's concern that manvi is getting tensed coz of them how sweet is he 😃
then the virman moments virat to full on latto ho gaya hai 😉
and the moment at the park was beautiful virman hug eeeksss thats sooo awesome
and manvi noticed him smiling at her idiotly dreamily admiring at her and now after the hug grinning like an idiot how cute 😊
update next part soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awesome update.. Next time make it long
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
superb update
loved virman pov
thanks for pm me
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Lots of chapters to read. Enjoyed reading it.

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