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Posted: 12 years ago
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back wid update

CHAPTER 5(i)
Next day in class. physics period.
D tcher enters wid a big smile on her face.Her face reflected her loving caring & motherly bhaviour towards her students.D students started liking her as soon as dey saw her."Gd morning class and a warm welcome. I m ur phy tcher. My name is Satyajeet n I'll b teaching u till 3rd yr. If u hv any problems or any confusions regarding wat I teach u can ask me. I'll b glad to clarify ur doubts.Other dan dis if u hv any oder, personal problem in which u think u need some1's help or suport I m there for dat as wel. b free to share dem wid me ok."Her words reflected genuinty, her concern and luv for d children.(actually i had satyajeet mam as my maths tcher i loved her a lot. she was always ready to sort out our problems and she nevr talked in loud voice. )"so dat's my intro now it's ur turn. tell who u r & ur views abt life."
Maya was d 1st,she spoke in as mch decency she cud hv in,"My name is maya vadhera. My view is dat u get life jst once live it to d fullest, enjoy as mch u can. phir kabhi mile na mile."Next was Daisy. She spoke out frankly," I m daisy & m from Goa. for me it's dat u r lucky to hv born on dis earth solife ko khulke jiyo lekin itna bhi nahi dat u cause probs to others"Next was Manvi, she stood up and said,"i m manvi jha from mumbai. my view is dat- life is like a coin. It has 2 sides 1gd and 1 bad & God thrwos d coin of life& who knows which side it may turn out to b."Mam semed to like her view,she nodded and gave her a big smile which manvi replicated.To b precise not only mam but also d other students liked it. So d first day dey didn't hv any study. dey got to know abt d tchers and gave their intro.
Later dat day Manvi & Daisy were in d canteen discussing abt their tchers when d Gang came over to dem & seated wid dem and asked abt d tchers. Both Manvi& Daisy exclaimed,"awesome mam! v love her."d gang was startled at der sudden reaction. Rishab spoke,"whom r u talking abt?" Daisy spoke,"Satyajeet mam, our physics tcher. She seems to understand us so well. she is so frendly." "She is so clear abt wat she wanna speak. her words r crystle clear." said Manvi wid a reliened sort of expression as if she feared dat she will get a monster phy tcher.Maya broke Virat's moment who was busy reading her face, by her shrill voice,"ya... & u donno wat u hv in ur mind & dat's d reason u were blabbering abt life, coin,God...""Maya wen u don't get anything y don't u opt to clarify it rather dan creating an issue out of it."Manvi retorted.Maya was pissed of"watever" Daisy asked her to speak it once more so she cud get it properly. Manvi spoke it once again& now d gang members were amazed by her ease at which she spoke dos philosophical & complicated ideas.t Dey decided to change d topic.Dey started discussing abt their fav subjects. wen it comes to Manvi she says"Maths"
gang members:WAT?? Y?
manvi:coz maths represent our lives. It's not always easy der r probs but each has a solution & u jst need to hunt for it widout losing ur patience & dat's exactly d same wid life watever obstacles come ur way all of dem have a solution to clear dem out. So i jst like to relate it coz it gives me d courage to find d solutios and emerge victorious."
All d others were dumbstruck as if she spoke in german n now Manvi was like'wat? wat d hell did i do'But at that time Virat was out of d world listening to each & every word attentively coz it cud reveal more abt her though he was confused yet he was grinning like an idiot.After everyone was bak to normal leaving him, Simmy said,"from where on earth do u find such comparisons.Actualy to b true dey r really perfect but u sound more mature dan u r. nice" By d time Ayush noted his dear frend staring at their not-yet-frend-Manvi and elbowed him waking him up from his dreamy creamy land.He whispered in Virat's ears,"wat r u doing? stop oggling at her. if she catches u v wil hv to hv a trip to d hospital everyday wid fruits. btw which fruit do u want us to bring sugarcane or watermelon or pineapple...""now u shut up if u don't want me us to bring fruits for U"Virat said now he thot of pulling back d old topic."ummm Hey_...r..v..frends...now?"he asked nervously glancing once at others.Manvi's face which had brightened up now fell and she walked out of d canteen.d oders followed her. Riya asked again.
Manvi: why r u all hell bent over it may i know?
Riya: listen v genuinely want u to b our frend.
Rishab: u r unique. v felt u to b diff. from others
Ayush: ur punch made me understand dat u r not like others who jst fall of for any guy. u r a gd gil
Simmy: u hv valuable and gd thinking which v want in us as well
Virat: v like u and want to free u from ur unsaid buried woes which r showing up in ur eyes.
Daisy: Manvi dey sound genuine plz agree to dem.

Guys i m gonna update d next part a few hrs later. happy reading.
Silent readers plzzz hit d like button or comment it hardly takes to min
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
nice update everyone have there philosophy about life
and he just trying to read her and all gang member want to
freindship her and there teacher too good update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
will comment for bth the parts together ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

will comment for bth the parts together ๐Ÿ˜Š


SO B IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry didnt get yu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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veryce updateloved manvi's definition of life - cuz its so true continue soon ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice...
update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
HI i'm saathana.i just read ur updates.
i have to mention that you are a fabulous writer.
loved the story concept.its different and heart touching.you have beautifully portrayed the emotions,negligence and trauma that manvi is undergoing.
loved her matured atitude towards life.eagerly waiting for next update.
add me to ur buddy list.
continue soon and don't give up writing.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Sorry guys for not updating d 2nd part as I said.Actually I had wrote it but den I cudn't post it coz being a newbie I cudn't hv had 10 posts in 24 hrs and I had 10 posts in jst 8 hrs. But don't worry now I'm here with d update.

CHAPTER 5(ii)

M-Listen I m not at all a nice gil. I m short-tempered, rude, stiff, inconsiderate, outspoken stubborn, violent. U wud surely like to thro me out after 3 days. U r such a nice grp y do u wanna hv probs in ur grp due to me. Plzzz [saying dis she walked away]

After sometime dey go to her who was sitting on a bench in the ground. Riya sat bside gloomy and perplexed Manvi.

R [she kept a palm on Manvi's shoulder]-Manvi do u trust us?

Manvi stred at her wid a qstioning look

R ' yes or no? answer me fast. Do u trust us?

M- of course I trust u all ur genuiness is shown up in ur eyes, I know u r true to ur words and action.

A - even v trust u a lot.

M ' u mite b trsting me but I don't trst myself, my words, my mentality, my actions. . Wat if I hurt u? wat if I speak sth I shudn't hv? Then????

V(wid stern look)- even ur eyes show up sth.ur eyes spk ur unspoken words & eyes never lie. & der's a lot more dan u spok

Rish- anyway manvi v can't change a person v mst accept as it is. It even helps in learning d mentality of such type and I hv d practice of handling stubborn ppl [pointing to Simmy]

S ' so v hv decided dat to change ur image abt urself v wil accompany u wid everything jst like frends for 6 months. Let u & us c if v can bear u. & Manvi no need to fake urself b wat u r react d way u wud actually do regardless of our presence

D ' manvi staying wid u for 2 days I hv felt u r actually a nice gil. I swear.

M [sighed, stayed silent for smtime, then] ' OK, I m ready to b thrown out after d enjoyment of 6 months[actually she was damn happy but den feared to loose dem as well so she didn't show it]

R [smacked her & said]- stop ur nonsense talks n gv a hug now.

They wer hugging and Simmy n Daisy joined 'em suffocating Manvi

M - leave...me...now... or else u'll...loose..ur...new..frend...2day..itself...

R & D & S[left her]-SO sorry

V- so let's go out for dinner celebrating d entry of 2 frends. Wat say??[wid his typical raised eyebrow and smirk]

Everyone agreed

A ..-2day's dinner will be spl for some1[ li'l did dey understand d hidden meaning]

Maya[after her maun-vrat of almost 2 hrs finally spoke]- wooow dinner. Viru let's go home fast I need to change into my new frock com'on[dragging virat]

After a drive of half an hr dey reached hotel Paradise which indeed looked so. It had its walls painted in heavenly combi of lite aqua&lite red wid d furnitures in tan. Ayush had already booked a table for dem in a far of corner. Dat part was decorated with daisies, roses of all possible colours

Now ever1 felt sth fishy and sensing dis ayush asked dem to sit & vanished and came wid a teddy wid abundle of flower.

He went u[to Riya made her stand & he went on knees and proposed her. All der frends wer happy coz dis secret lovers had finally declared demselves lovers.Virat again got lost in his world and he took a rose from d decoration and handed it to Manvi who was kinda shocked and others were shocked as well. So Ayush elbowed him & whispered

A-wat d hell r u doing? y did u gv her a rose?

Virat realised wat he had done & gave 1 to Daisy as well & covered up saying

V- I was giving dem roses as atoken of our frendship.

Others were convinced leaving Rishab who had always sensed Virat's abnormalities wen around manvi.dey had a nice dinner n dey enjoyed well. Most importantly Manvi was hpy. Dat's wat HE noticed.

At n8 in Virat's room-he opened his diary which he had made to note things abt Manvi to add new things . Her thinkings abt her, her beliefs, her smile's description, her eyes desription . And he slept dreaming abt her


dats all for 2day . sorry for mistakes.

Ihv thot for 1 name for my SS do tell me how's it"MY NUTCRACKER"

Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
thanx alott for the double updaes both were just fab and the story is getting really interesting and also yu write very well clear and apt ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
firstly manvi's thought abd views on life or any other thing is just fab she is nt one of those galz who keep on dreaming or imagining stuffs she is practical real fighter plus who knows how to adjust as per the needs of the situation nt alwayz into makeups and gossips like any girl...this strong and bold yet the hidden emotional and longing for love manvi has attracted the one and only virat vadhera towards her or clearly saying towards her eyes he reads them admires her thoughts and views he is already falling for her hard ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
soo manvi finally in the group and maya is ok wuth tht kinda scary ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
virat dreamily giving her the rose and then covering up his silly act how cute ๐Ÿ˜‰
and also a diary for manvi woww dude yu are sooo much into teenage love ๐Ÿ˜›
update next part sooon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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