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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Awsm ... I feel really sad for manvi... I guess she will say no when virat will propose... or maybe yes :S am so excited... pls cont soon... take care.. tada...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
nice update she was upset seeing her result
will she share her problem with him
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Sry for the late comment,
Once again it was a superb update
Loved it but yet bit sad for manvi,
Hope she hears happiness soon
Tanx for the pm,
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
BACK WITH UPDATE ...TADA.AA...

CHAPTER 10
VIRAT'S POV
i neva knew nature can wage open wars against her children.
but every coin has 2 faces. r8 now a nameless fear is clutching my heart.
i feel cut-off from d world, my frends..but i still remain expectant of
positivity there is a sinister silence in my heart.
d warmth n shine of sun in my life is replaced by a dark ruthless cloud

god i fell for her in 2 days n as d days passed by i fell for her in every passing second

r8 now she is in ICU.she committed suicide...had i not reached wellin tym...i wud hv lost her for eva...sheis struggling hard to live or may b die n m doing nothing but stare at her innocent, calm face. who wud say she has a huge storm suppressed in her.but i cant help admiring her straight face covering several folds of pain n lonelinessdat's what i observed in d past 4 days

["sometimes d strongest among us r d ones who smile thru silent pain"]

ihad tried so much to make her comfortable but she ignored us all sply me...it pained a hell lot n yesterday_ _ _ _ _...
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flashback
maya's b'day
d ful grp was at our house except manvi...she wanted to spend sometym alone n even i wanted a chance to speak in solitary

evening 6 pm
v- daisy did manvi tell wen is she coming?
d-no...
v- did u call her??
d- actually i was bzy wid preparations...
v-ok ...i'll call
[tries sevaral tym but she din't respond]
v-no response...
d-c she mite b on road so she cudn't hear
v-yeah! ok i'll c later

8pm
v-raj! ayush!did manvi com?
r-i dont know i cam e now i went to gat d cake
a- no i suppose. call her
v-fine!!
[tries again...after 5th try she picks up]
v-manvi!! finally u picked up...i hv been calling so many tyms...where were u?? y hvn't u come yet??plz say sthng...
m-viraaat!!...enjoy d party,...i m sorry ..i'll not b able to come...i hv a diff. destination to reach...ffar off from here...not to return soon
n do not come here to drag me n ask daisy to b in d party till d end...plzzz
[cuts d call]
v-manvi!! manvi!! wat did she mean???? i need to reach soon
[drives rashly n reaches hostel...bangs d door of her room no response...he breaks open...to d shockof life]
manvi lay on d side of d bed n on d floor was d wrapper of a hi-dose painkiller morphine
her face was pale yellow, breathings were slow, her pulse rate fell,nervesn finger nails were bluish-black n she had been vomiting...she looked pathetic...i went momentarily numb but her occasional jerk relesed me from my reverie n i rushed to hospital
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i hv informed her parents n dey will reach by 2morrow noon...now i need to tell my frends ..i hv not replied to their calls since last n8 n both of us r missing since den...God knows wat mite dey b thinking.i 'll inform
but b4 dat i'll talk to doc
he's here for her check-up
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v-doc! how's she?????????
d-fine...but she still needs to b der for som tym now
still weak...dont worry...
since how long hv u been luving her??[wid a sweet smile]
v-[shocked]-huh!wat...how do u ...
d-eyes r like d mirror of a periscope...whichever way u turn ur periscope..d heart ur eyes reflect it to d world...
ur luv, trust will never let her go...
ummm...btw did u inform her parents.??
v-ya! i did
thank u doc for helping me regain trust on my luv for her

lemme call dem
v- hey ayush!zip ur mouth n listen to me...manvi comited suicide
she is in icu...reach here soon
a-wat?? n u r telling now.!! coming soon

[after15 min everyone's der]

m- sorry bro!
v- for wat??
m-i thot u left ur sis n went to spend tym wid ur luv
v-:o,:o
raj-v were so angry on u for dumping ur sis's b'day that v decided never to c u again
d-i decided to change my room partner...bcoz i thot manvi acted dat she s feeling low spend tym wid u
v-wat?u know i luv her but wud never do such crap n neither she...she doesn't even luvs me n even if she did she wud hv held me back
from doing anything such


dat's it for 2day
anything gd/bad comment,bricks/soft toys.all accepted😆😃
but do like n comment
compulsory😉


Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
suicide...shocked super twist loved it do continue soon dear...what wud happen nxt ...damn excited to knw...lovedit
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Unexpected twist..shocking update
I was expecting something else but it was nice
Hope manvi will be fine soon & accept virat's proposal
Try to update soon and if possible make it long
Take care

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
awesome update
loved virman pov
felt sad for maanvi
virat really loves her so much,he cant see her like that
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
pink1 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
nice update she commited sucide
but he came at time and save her
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
minblowingg updatee...nycc one yrr...
loved it... manvi committed suicide.. :0 omg..!!
it was damn unexpected..!!
outstanding update..plzz cntnue soon..waiting for nxt...
n thnks for pmm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
shocking twist
maanvi commited sucide
virat saved her
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm

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