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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

wowww this was an amazing update ...written really good 👏👏
the 6 months leap and soo many changes yet the wall is not broken but manvi feels better now she feels happy she feels comfartable specially around virat and she is even confident about him that he will alwayz be there besides her aww thats really sweet 😃
and ayush letting her know abt the guys he is protective abt her or abt those guyz am alittle confused 😆😆😆
and both have the mutual feeling about maya 😆😆
and virat has fallen for manvi already he knows that he loves her now manvi's turn to fall for him 😃
and also virat kinda knows her problem but didnt question her...he is really soo understanding 😃
update the next part soon and thanx alot for the pm 😃


Y wud ayush need to protect a Karate Champ, obviously he is protecting d guys😆
N thanks for ur lovely comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Hey as usual a superb update.This particular update portrays the emotions😭,the eagerness😛,the happiness😆,the joyfulness 😃that manvi had gone through the 6 months of their friendship.Loved the way how ayush has been protective towards manvi.Loved how the whole gang enjoyed 😳spending time with manvi.I am very much elighted when you mentioned in this update that virat has fallen 😉 for manvi. You have clearly mentioned how virat had understood manvi's pain 😭 behind her smile 😊,how he liked her genuiness. Atlast he somewhat found out that she has bulit a wall around herself 😡 and he wanted her to break that wall and to live her life happily.😊I hope he will succeed in his mission soon .Thank you so much for awesome update 👏.continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: saathana

Hey as usual a superb update.This particular update portrays the emotions😭,the eagerness😛,the happiness😆,the joyfulness 😃that manvi had gone through the 6 months of their friendship.Loved the way how ayush has been protective towards manvi.Loved how the whole gang enjoyed 😳spending time with manvi.I am very much elighted when you mentioned in this update that virat has fallen 😉 for manvi. You have clearly mentioned how virat had understood manvi's pain 😭 behind her smile 😊,how he liked her genuiness. Atlast he somewhat found out that she has bulit a wall around herself 😡 and he wanted her to break that wall and to live her life happily.😊I hope he will succeed in his mission soon .Thank you so much for awesome update 👏.continue soon.


THANK U SAATHANA FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS N M GONNA SOON UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

Superb update

Loved it
Plz cont soon
Thanks for pm me

THANK U DEAR N KEEP ON BEARING WID MY STORY.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update he know he have feeling for her
and there 6 month also getting completed so what decision
they will take and what decision she will take
update soon

GUESS D DECISION. I M SURE U GONNA GET IT.
THANK U
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hey ishita just read ur story all the parts are really fantastic. I enjoyed the every bit of it the way u write each n everything was superb. Love the way u show virman character nd all the gang members. Nw eagerly waiting fr next part plz cont soon nd do pm me take card

THANKS A LOT FOR READING IT.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
sorry for commenting late was just caught up with assignmentsawesome updates yes virat has fallen for her- waiting for manvi to feel the same nw hope he finds out the reality behind everything n becomes her strong support pillar- eagerly waiting for that day continue soon😉
Edited by Huma0301 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Hey isshi... awsm story dear...Loved it...So virat has fallen for manvi...Hope he makes her life beautiful and help her sort out the problemswith her parents and live life the way she wants...cont soon and thnks for th pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
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MANVI'S POV
6 months went off so soon n today dey mite kick me out or v will stay as a happy grp,...watever it may b i m prepared for everytihing watever gonna happen. Till now my frends left me but may b 2day dey wil kick me out...I m scared coz i don wanna leave dem but everything doesn't happen as per my wish n dont wish to happen as well.
So d whole grp is in d canteen now n d everyone is sitting n concentrating on der coffe. No 1 spoke a word...they hv sealed der lips wid fevikwik or wat...i hate dem. m alreday nervous n dey r making me even tensed...y...y...y...C dey r not even looking at me now...also avoiding my gaze...i wanna shout at dem rite now...Y...R...U...DOING.SO????????????...but no i cant since I m sitting in d court of frendship where dey r gonna make d judgement"mar diya jaye ya chor diya jaye"...R dey planning to giv d judgement...i mean if dey wanna dey must open der mouths n speak it...but here dey r opening der mouths gulping coffe n hving sandwich...dat's it...Y r dey testing my patience... God knows y...may b...
Now wat's dis y r dey glancing at d door of canteen...r dey planning of fledding or wat...I'll kill dem if dey go widout telling me anything...n y r dey hving a tensed look...wat's cooking up...OH GOD!!!...it surely mst b bad news...i m out...but den dey mst spk up wat r dey waiting for...c v hv finished 2 ronds of cofe n sandwich...r dey planning upon finishing d stock or wat.
Daisy is occasionally holding my dress...i know she is tensed...actually she is tensed for last 2-3 days...no...no...not for me but for herself...she is scared if i m not der will dey keep her she is dying to b wid dem..GAWWD...anyway...Thank God at least Virat has lifted his eyes n now he's looking at me...he has worry lines on his face but still it has such calmness...his eyes r gving me an assuring look...saying everything's fine...Is it really so???? I m staring at him coz looking at him is calming me...d storm in me is calming...Wow is he a magician...how does he do it??? calm me wen i m stuck in d storm in me??...console n comfort me wen i m sad n gloomy??? Dis has happened numerous times in d last 6 months. Jst 1 look at me does wonders to me...

VIRAT"S POV
Wher d hell is she???? for how long v hv to stay so...v r not even able to look at her...her eyes r full of questions...n v hv been sweared to zip our mouth...wat to do??? But occasionally i m staring at her to take in her expressions which were changing often...it is as if once a sad song has been played, nxt moment someone stabbed her,then some1 insulted her,den told a joke,n den a love stry...LOVE...i wish dat some1 wud hv been me n i wud hv told her d stry of my love to her... but wat if she slapped me...but she has a lovely dreamy eyes now which means she mite hv not slapped me
I wish i cud erase all her worries from her life...AH ther she is my stupid li'l sissy cudn't she hv come a little decent for Manvi's sake got it she was putting dat make up pie on her face...ya she is gonna break d news...

MANVI"S POV
OH Maya...due to tension i dnt notice her absence...was der less tension dat she is making her grand-entry n pacing towards us. . sat btween me n daisy...wat if she is gonna break d news...oh
Ma-hey Manvi! [plastered a fake smile]
M-yeah..hi! [faking smile]
Ma- so i m gonna tell it...
[M-y is she rising my nervousness][she concentrated on her coffe n closed her eyes]
Ma-so...Manvi...according to d oder grp members...u...r...in...n according to me...as well
[Manvi opened her eyes wid a quick shot n literally choked on coffe...maya n yes for her...is she dat same maya...is she fine...]
M [nervously n stammered]-r u sure...i mean..u hv not been forced,rite?????
Ma-not at all. it's my own decision...in d last 2-3 months i realised u r a nice gil..dat's y
{listening to dis manvi's eyes popped out and her jaw fell to d floor she was hell shocked]


At 1st even d grp members wer shocked coz dey dint know dis...it was like a bomb dropped der suddenly...btw Maya was no less dan a make-uop bomb. watever now dat Manvi was officialy der frend dey all gathered to hug her shocking d already shocked Manvi to death. N guess wat Virat was d 1st to hug so dis was like a cherry on cake...1stly his sis agreed widout any pestering n 2ndly he was so near to her.
dey needed to hv a treat so dey had double treats.1 by Manvi for an official entry n 2nd by Virat who was beaming wid hapines whos jst 1 reason dey knew his sissy had found her missing screws.



so dat's it guys hope u liked,..silent readers..plz..plz...plz...plz...like or comment coz dey mean a lot to me.
n dos who liked n commented on oder posts thanks a lot😃😃😃
n mst probably i'll update again if i m alive coz my school's reopening 2morow n i hv not done finished my hw.😔
so if u do not c an update nxt monday pray to God for my soul's peace😔

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey iishita i tried to like ur post bt error.so consider ths as my like.any stryline anyways...i saw it 2day and i luv it...

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