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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice update now gang member want her in there gang
so there going to apologize her so she will excepted or not there apologize and she will became member of gang or not update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome update very well written too πŸ‘
so virat is really impressed with manvi haan tht sounds good 😊
maya and virat sibling thts the best news πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
i so feel tht its virat's chance to get hit by manvi god bless him πŸ˜†
update next part soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
superb part der
Manvi seen was hilarious
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
uh-oh the stardom gang hav no idea who they r messing withshe is manvi- n she will nt giv in sooo easily lolz lets see if they can save themselves nw great update continue soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
back wid update.

CHAPTER 4
Dey all apologised from d core of their heart.Manvi cud feel it but then she didn't hv d courage anymore to b betrayed by her frends whom she might take as her bst pals.Yes, she had been betrayed by her frends, her bst frends whom she thot were her company on d journey of life not once but thrice. Whose hand she held as a support to face challenges of life, dey brutally left her hand on mid-way and asked her to continue alone. She had merely been used for their selfishness, dey never took her as their frend but a road to reach their goals. They had used her courage, her boldness and also d fact dat she was every tcher's favrate. She cudn't trust anyone now not even herself in making choices.So she said lowering her eyes wid a strictness in her voice,"I'm sry. But I can't forget & forgive u neither can b in ur gang. Jst go away. I can't trust anyone."She felt mayb dey cud hv been gd frends to hangout wid but den she didn't want to b alone once again.
Maya was frustrated and said,"Bhai i told u drop ur plan of taking her in.So jst let's go. Anyhow she's not fit for our gang. Jst look at her dressing dat won't do wid us.She is middle class types." Manvi warned Maya to control her tongue but y d hell wud she listen so she continued."O plz u shut up.Bloody middle class thinking. Y do dey hv to make such a big issue of such a small thing. He had jst touched u he didn't r*** u. Wat's d big deal. u and ur family hv damn old thinkings, unlike us anyhow v r apologising for sth which was not at all wrong. Holding is jstified so..."B4 she cud speak, SMACK!! Manvi slapped her and said,"Maya i asked u to control ur tongue but u r a dumbo I c. there was no need to reach my family. d thing is not abt old or modern beliefs it's abt our culture. Till holding hands even widout knowing each other is still fine but holding a gil by her waist dat too close to d guy is sth ridiculous.And Ms. Maya wearing western clothes and putting make-up doesn't make u modern. Do u even know u look so ugly wid jst a bit of face over dat make-up pie and lev hot coz u can jst turn on d microwave may b not even dat."Saying dis she left from there and reached roof-top. She was offended by her words and had moist eyes.Daisy also left saying,"u've hurt Manvi. Maya jst think if som1 wud hv pulled ur family up in such a manner,. obviosly u wudn't hv been happy.Shame on u Maya." Virat till now was lost in Manvi's eyes.He felt sth weird abt Manvi. He felt Manvi is not wat she's trying to put up.Her eyes revealed gr8 mystry hidden in her but in 2 meetings he had understood her dis mch dat he can tell it's not easy to get to dat mystry. He cam to d present when Maya hit him.She said "when dat midle class b**** Manvi slapped ur sis &said she was Neither butiful nor hot why didn't u shut her mouth."Virat tho was lost in her eyes but had heard each & evry word clearly. Remembering wat she said abt her bing ugly & not sexy he burst out laughing while others giggled softly. 1 glare & dey left d room leaving br & sis 2gether. Virat said putting a break on his laugh," wat wrong did she say. How many times hv v said don't spoil ur natural buty by putting dos stuffs but u never listened &now u r facing d consequences.& abt d slap she did rite coz it's not jstified pulling some1's family in between ur arguments. U hv hurt her more dan she has hurt u.U hv hurt her emotionally while she has hurt u jst physically & she didn't even abuse u.Why d hell u do so?"Even he left from there leaving her alone.
He didn't know why but he felt sad for Manvi& angry on his sis. He wanted to her to apologise on behalf of Maya. He was walking past the hostel but then he suddely looked up & saw Manvi sitting on d roof boundry lost in her world, 1movement & she wud b dead.He freaked out cing her & rushed upstairs.He reached her and called her name but she was nowhere in dis world.He put his hand on her shoulder & at once she was startled and looked back to c d ghost who scared her.At once she asked him,"Y r u here?"He said,"I jst saw u sitting her lik dis & got scared so cam up to put u on safe side.BTW wat r u doing here in dis sunny weather. Com down or else u might suffer from dehydration & heat stroke." She was jst staring at him. He said "u might not wanna b frends wid us but I m keen on being ur frend and surely u'll b mine too, & dat too bst frend."Manvi sighed&said," may b or may b not. U know 1 thing i hv learned from life-It's not gd to hv high expectations either from ur life or some person coz if it is not fulfilled u'll b shattered. So if u want to take me as frend so b it but don't expect d same from me coz i don't want either to b hurt or hurt u.I m sry." saing dis she left.Virat cud sense pain and loneliness in her voice &wanted to free her from dat.

THANK U TO U ALL WHO HV READ DIS CRAP. BUT I CAN'T REFRAIN FROM WRITING I M SUCH ACRAZY VIRMANIAN .SORRY TO THOSE WHO DIDN'T LIKE.
AND SILENT READERS WHO HV LIKED ATLEAST PRESS LIKE BUTTON AND SPARE 2 min TO COMMENT
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice update they way she shouted maya was good
and all gang was laughing that great he want to friendship with her
he getting atract toward her update next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
mind blowing updatethank god manvi did that cuz maya needed that slap im sooo happy that virat can sense her pain - hope he gets to break through that n make her smile loved the update n plz do update quickly πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
wow very interesting story...
i love it...
plzzz plzzz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
super dear
πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
the update was just awesome really goood πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒ
manvi's thought on frendship and betrayal shows she is really hurt ...
and she no way acted fake to them and just said them tht she cant adore tht attitude of hers...
then the maya thing gosh tht was just soo hilarious cudnt stop laughing imagining maya rani ka million dollar expression then πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
she just gave maya the reality check needed without any personal attack tht was fab πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
then the best was virat's reaction to it bechari maya wanted support frm her bro but he was soo buzzi reading mamvi's syes and expressions plus he just supported manvi and said tht wat she said was rite his dialogue was hilarious πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
then the way clearly understood tht she was hurt and felt lonely so easily ge understood ger
plus ge even cared for her sounds like soon gonna get virman as best frends πŸ˜ƒ
update next part soon and do pm me 😊

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