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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update finally she accepted there friendship
and join there gang update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think that's a nice n unique title for ur SSloved the update- virat omg he has gon flat yaar the way he writes the details of her in his diary is cho chweet thank god manvi is friends with them nw eagerly waiting for next part- continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

thanx alott for the double updaes both were just fab and the story is getting really interesting and also yu write very well clear and apt 👏 👏
firstly manvi's thought abd views on life or any other thing is just fab she is nt one of those galz who keep on dreaming or imagining stuffs she is practical real fighter plus who knows how to adjust as per the needs of the situation nt alwayz into makeups and gossips like any girl...this strong and bold yet the hidden emotional and longing for love manvi has attracted the one and only virat vadhera towards her or clearly saying towards her eyes he reads them admires her thoughts and views he is already falling for her hard 😃 😃
soo manvi finally in the group and maya is ok wuth tht kinda scary 😆 😆
virat dreamily giving her the rose and then covering up his silly act how cute 😉
and also a diary for manvi woww dude yu are sooo much into teenage love 😛
update next part sooon 😃


I M UPTO STH WID MAYA. READ ON I 'LL UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HELLO EVERY1. I M BACK WID UPDATE.I CAN'T TELL ABT OTHER CHP BUT DIS CHAPTER I M GONNA WRITE IN POVs. COZ I AM NOT ABL TO WRITE IT IN NARRATION HOPE U DON'T MIND.

CHAPTER 6

real friend by your side


[pov for those 6 months. I can't describe everyhing]
MANVI"S POV
Finally I m frends wid dem. Dey r really nice and i wish dey won't leave me.Des 6 months hv meant a lot to me des were my happiest moments in d last 8 yrs. I hv done sth else, some fun, hung out wid my freinds.
I don't know weather dey wud still bear wid me coz i hv shown varios traits of mine in des months. I hv never given my notes to anyone, may jst 1 or 2,(lucky guys), also i hv been rude to som. it is jst dat i helping d stupids, ummm i mean wen mam/sir wer teaching who asked dem to sleep, Dumbos.Anyway let's not talk abt dem.
In des 6 months v hv got on damn well.Dey took me around Delhi I knew som places coz i had bn her 2ice but den all confused I felt dey r gd at heart and not lik typical hi-classes who r always partying.dey go for dinner once a week on normal and less work load days, dey concentrate on der studies and didn't go for dinner or clubbing during d month. Dey even helped me and Daisy wid our studies. i think even if v r not frends hereafter dey will help me even if not every1 at least Virat.
Virat, maya's bro, doesn't seem lik coz she is so snobbish and typical hi-class bhavior and her bro total opposite. He doesn't keep dat bar of hi/lo class. He is nyc. he is always helping me, inquiring if i had any doubts in todays part of chemistry chp, he askes me if i need to go anywhere or need sth,he is around wen i m worried or sad.But i don't know is it co-incidence or he s stalking.
I really feel sthis wrong wid Maya, I mean neither she argued wid d grp members nor threatened Viru(dat's wat i call him n bst part he doesn't mind. he says he luv's it) nordid i punch her.i mean if i wud hv punched her i wud hv understood dat it loosened her screws but no.
How di she accept me.God help me mite b she is upto sth. Her sweet and caring bhavior towards me scares me after wat i saw d first day. watever i m ready, i think, to face her.
& Ayush, after 1 punch he's always keeping boys away from me. He tels me wat type of guy is one or wether i shud talk to him or not. I think he doesn't want his classmtes or any oder guy to get a punch on der handsome faces.
Speaking of my frends I forgot to tell abt my exams which r der after every 4 month. So my 1st exams were awesome. I scored 86 on 90 in maths, and 81 on 90 in chemistry and 79 on 90 in physics higher dan my expectations and lower dan dad's. Dere is no way6 i can say anything i donno why m i folowing his commands but i jst don wanna go against him even if i terribly hate physics,my career.Y can't he understand dat career can't b made jst by studing hard & passing wid flying marks, it's abt d zeal & passion dat can help u fulfil ur dream. even i cudn't speak anything b4 him, i dint hv d heart to brk his desires, God knows y. 1
1 day Virat had almost got hold of my woes.somhow i managed. i went to a stationary shop n met him. v went to park wen dad called and said wud lik to talk to him and he almost puked out everything and in frustration i screamed on him. I think he mst hv brushed it off his head thinking dad-daughter worries coz he dint qs me.thank God
Now let me worry abt wat will happen 2morrow as 6 months end n dey wil tell wat dey wish.*finger cross *

VIRAT'S POV
I know i hv fallen for her.each action of hers weather she is angry or is quareling makes me fall for her. Actually she doesn'get angry or quarel for wrong reason.It's lik wen some1 asks for notes even wen he/she was present in class so don't feel anything is wrong in it nor my grp members fell anything wrong in it and d mst amazing part is even Maya agrees. der s sth fishy coz i know she wud never agreeto anything related to Manvi after wat hapend on 1st day. i know my sis too well, weirdo snob.I actually feel so and i wud hv never felt bad if Manvi wud hv slaped her dat day. She was actually nice not to slap her after watever she spoke.
During des 6 months i saw her actual smile which reached her eyes. Shehas such a sweet amazing, mesmerizing smile. Her laugh which was like a sweet music to me made me fall for her hard. n number of times i hv seen her smiling 1 moment n d next moment she is gloomy.y is she so? y does she hide her smile n lagh? wat keeps her from laghing and enjoying freely?May b she s hiding sth. I m detrmind to find it soon.N I think i hv a hint. dat day wen v were in d park n her dad called, her dad said it's his wish she mst qualify well and asked me to help her in physics, take her classes, make her do practically, and den she snatched d fon n went away. Der is surely sth bhind it, may b d reason she is so lost. I dnt qs her coz I dint want to take me to b an intruder, i'll wait till she want to share her problem. I wanna let her feel comfortabl not awkward, n it's my promise to myself i'll break d wall around her which she has built.
During d exams she literally worked hard. No outing, no dinners, no shopping n even no small masti.She was into her studies from a month b4. V went for dinners widout telling her coz she had already told she wont come so v said v too dont go so dat she doesn't feel rejected sort.She is so studious. She manages everything well. During other days she studies and also goes for dinners or shopping n spends time wid us.Btw she s not lik d gils who wait for weekends to go shoping N wenever she goes she doesn't take d whole day.I m impressed.
She has a strong character. She doesn't allow any1 to feel her problems.I didn't lik 1 thing abt her she s too bad at lying tho i hv never let her know dat i m not convinced.She wud rather bear scolding from tchers n her parents dan lying or b taunted by classmates rather dan lying abt sth. btw she handles her taunter wid taunts nycly. is she crazy or wat
















Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wow superb update👏 dear do continue soon...
hats off!!😛😊
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hey ishita just read ur story all the parts are really fantastic. I enjoyed the every bit of it the way u write each n everything was superb. Love the way u show virman character nd all the gang members. Nw eagerly waiting fr next part plz cont soon nd do pm me take card
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
wow IISHITA
Awesome update
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon dear ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
wowww this was an amazing update ...written really good 👏👏
the 6 months leap and soo many changes yet the wall is not broken but manvi feels better now she feels happy she feels comfartable specially around virat and she is even confident about him that he will alwayz be there besides her aww thats really sweet 😃
and ayush letting her know abt the guys he is protective abt her or abt those guyz am alittle confused 😆😆😆
and both have the mutual feeling about maya 😆😆
and virat has fallen for manvi already he knows that he loves her now manvi's turn to fall for him 😃
and also virat kinda knows her problem but didnt question her...he is really soo understanding 😃
update the next part soon and thanx alot for the pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nice update he know he have feeling for her
and there 6 month also getting completed so what decision
they will take and what decision she will take
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Superb update
Loved it
Plz cont soon
Thanks for pm me

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