IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance]

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Omg that was awesome! You have written is so beautifully. The emotions was describe so well. I felt like this was continuing from the serial. Right from the beginning where Arnav is arguing with nani and then khushi came and supported him but also dealt with the situation so well.

Really liked the trio Arnav, NK and akash. Loved them in the serial when they got together. You bought it all back! NK as usual was hilarious. Making Arnav Jealous without even realising it!

It was so nice to see them both so in love with eachother. Arnav is the perfect husband and father to be. The way he was caring for her was so sweet and romantic. And khushi is having such a positive effect on him. The way she asked him to go to nani and apologise shows how much in synch they are with echother. She knew that he knows that was the right thing to do. Just needs that small push.

Their love making was so passionate and romantic. And her comment about the magician was jut so typical of Khushi.

Love reading your work!

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Maleina34

@Maleina34

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This story is awesome as all your stories are. I love the way you make the emotions between Kushi and Aarnav palpitable. It not about sex but love between those two. It is truly a masterpiece.

By the way can you make the child a boy. I have a penchant for boys and almost in all the stories in IF that I have read their first child is a girl. Let it be a boy please. Anyway thanks for writtting another masterpiece.

Maleina

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awww that was just sooo beautiful... arnav is so caring n protective... Khushi too is so supportive of her husband ... loved it!!!

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

what a lovely story!

It feels like IPK is continuing from where it ended.. and you make it even more graceful!

loved everything.. the pure family bondage,Anjali and khushi's bond, adorable nani, NK's funny hindi and arnav's possessiveness.. and of course, your trademark romance!

all in all, absolutely stunning!

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nice story… They both care so much for each other. I liked so many things about this story. Khushi supporting Arnav's opinion about inviting only close family and friends for Baby shower… Arnav helping her wear the sari… Khushi telling him the story and reassuring him that he is going to be an awesome father… Arnav's laughter when Khushi asks him is he a magician :-)…. And their love making in the end… You write beautifully and create nice stories. Please write next one soon.

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falcon.star

@falcon.star

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I... I Dont knw How u did this, but you actually read my mind. I always wanted to request you to write where ARSHI are doing a slow dance and to my surprise u wrote the very same.

As I always say Ur writing has always created this SOul stiring pull that I just cant resist and have tears in my eyes. The scene was a the Flashback khushi tells Arnav and then a kiss followed by her small request to him to apologize to Nani jee, was so beautifully written that I was moved...

SO Lovely, Full of PUre True Love and Passion that one cant stop ut imagine all of it and feel it through and through.

ThankYou so much for always giving me something to cherish, IPK ended But U have kept it alive thoroughly.

Love u

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Okay...you got me, this one was really emotional for me.I mean these two were just so unique to me, this makes me miss the show so much and to think the second anniversary is coming up. I love how these two had their own way of going about things. They did what everyone did but they did it Arhi style. I mean it made no sense to marry these two off in a simple manner, we needed that Arhi touch to it.

So many cute moments, the sari scene! Why the heck was that not in the show. I had fantasy of mine where Arnav would dress Khushi in a sari on her first day as a Raizada Daughter in law

The scene where she asks him if he's a magician...aahhahahahahahahahahhaah, that is so Khushi! I imagine Arnav always has to make love to her while she's just having a complete convo with herself hahahahah

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

You are rewriting the serial with your stories, this was so lovable and something we all wished to see in the show, Arnav and Khushi about to become parents and Arnav oh so perfect and overprotective...