IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance]

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blayde

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow what a start

i read your few back and enjoyed them

also commented

i know the rest part will also be good

thanks for link

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Woww, that was something!! Arnav was sooo caring! Loved that about him! An awesome OS it was. 👍🏼😃

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was awesome. you are a brilliant writer. Hats off to you.

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful os..

loved the sweet and always caring arnav..

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Armela

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Posted: 12 years ago

A magical story weaved like always. Loved it.

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow that was such a beautifully written OS.

I just loved the way Khushi held Arnav's hand when defending him to his family, without the family seeing.

Loved the sensual way Arnav tied her sari on for her.

Loved the magician comment in the midst of their passion.

You are really spoiling us with the most romantic, caring, passionate Arnav!

Hope you will continue to bless us with these amazing stories of yours!!

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was just awesome

beautifullly written

loved arshi

humesa

and godhbhari there bond was so good

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melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi,

Beautiful update. You are such a wonderful writer. Their married life looks so beautiful when you write it :) I loved the Godh bharai rasam and in the show if we had the fortune to witness it then surely Arnav would have made sure to attend the function ;) Why do you need loads of people, close family and friends are more than enough.

Loved how Khushi stood up for her husband, loved the way Arnav supervised the function, loved their talk in the bedroom and finally LOVED the passion and love they both share.

Waiting for the next installment :) Pls cont soon...