IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance]

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

A big big sorry for reading this late blayde ji 😔 🤔

As you know, I was busy since few days 🤔

Just loved this OS! <3 You write so damn well you know that right? 😳 I always wanted a scene where Arnav helps Khushi wear a saree, and you fulfilled my wish in this OS! ❤️

Lol Akash's reply to NK's wish of having a small 'Godh Ladai' was way too hillarious! 🤣 🤣 NK you better call Khushi as Bhabhi! 😉 😆

And what to say about rest of the OS! ☺️ Beautifully written Blayde Ji ☺️☺️

Keep writing! 🤗 <3

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Beautifully written.👏

Love Anjali and arnav deep brother sister bond who don't need words to express their feelings. They are one of my favourite sibling jodi.⭐️

Caring suits arnav a lot.

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Chaiya_Chaiya

@Chaiya_Chaiya

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

So, I did it again! I read Rekindling before this one. Sigh...

Anyways, me likes. I really like this Arnav. Yes, he has become loving and attentive to his wife, but still he isn't that lovey dovey Arnav. It's like he's still ASR, but now he respects Khushi a lot like he respects his sister and mother. And this was clearly shown in both Rekindling and this OS when he thinks that he belongs to Khushi and will do whatever she wants; especially now since she has given him their child after going through a tough pregnancy (as you mentioned in Rekindling). I also like Khushi during her pregnancy phase. Demanding and a bit wanton like a normal pregnant woman and reassuring Arnav that he will be a great Dad. And recently, I have been a sucker for just simple romantic gestures. So I just loved that slow dance bit. Actually when I read the last line of that paragraph, I felt another song that you could have added was Jeene laga

hoon.

Also, it's always refreshing to read about the 3 brothers (a calm, a goofy, and a possessive).

Edited by nine2 - 12 years ago