IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance] - Page 5

U r an amazing writer !! I mean it.. Plzz write SS/FF s ... Plzzz.. I juz love reading your OS 's .. I can't say how much I love your writing .. plzz...

Wow hw sweet 😳 .he cares so much abt 😳 .he cant live witout her 😳 .n btw i love jealous arnav 🤣 nice dear.

loved the heart-warming update and the myriad love-filled moments between the couple... what I liked about the godh bharai is that it was an intimate affair involving family and friends... that is much more meaningful than calling a bunch of nosy neighbours interested only in gossiping [remember the horrendous muh dhikhai?]... of course, arnav snapping at nani was wrong but his attempt at apology and his nani's silent acknowledgement were sweet... he watching over the ceremony like a guardian angel was endearing, too. the slow dance followed by his concern for his wife on realising that her back was aching and her feet were swollen were touching... beautiful song choice... khushi's recollection of arnav buying those pigeons to fulfil a kid's wish was moving as was her reassuring arnav that he would make an amazing father... of course, with them so finely attuned to each other's bodies, it's not surprising of them to give their own twist to the godh bharai ceremony by giving in to their ever-present desire in the privacy of their room... their lovemaking is as usual sensual as well as something that touches one deeply... arnav's possessiveness is hilarious when he bites nk's head off, warning him not to call his wife by name but to address her as bhabhi! a wonderful update that brought a smile to my face!

that was beautiful blayde !!! 👏

An Amazing OS which is beautifully written.. 😊

The depth of emotions that u portray in your stories is just awesome... Sensuality at its best... The way u weave the story with so much finesse is just fabulous and one could actually feel the love of the couple for each other not only through their intimacy but through the little sacrifices they make for each other and how they always feel contentment by making each other happy and satisfied be it physically or emotionally.

That was awesome!

Really really cute nd romantic.

Loved caring arnav and understanding and desperate khushi.

Thanks for the pm.

I absolutely adore the Arnav from all your os's ..but pray tell me you are so brilliant why dont you write an SS or FF ???

Awesome and very beautiful !!! love the way arnav always take care of his khushi always fulfilling all her demands even sensual ones... love ARSHI... 😃

tat was an incredibly love
filled passionate update 👏 👏 👏