IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance] - Page 4

that was amazing...

Hey Blayde ji.

Just finished reading 😉

It was beautiful! You make me all the more 'CRAAAZY' for these two ☺️

Loved the baby shower and the rituals which followed!

Pls make NK's godh larai very simple like he wants 🤣

Akash's punch dialogue was awesome.

Arnav being the possessive man of the decade doesn't like NK taking his wife's name hehehe.

Oh how can I forget the sexaay man who helped his pregnant wife with the sari draping task.

That was so sexaay!

Khushi was all green thinking about his gf's getting sari draping lessons from her Arnav ji 😆

She's such an adorable mess, when she blasts at him for that certain 'CHUDAIL' who doesn't even exist! 😛

I LOVE IT!
I PYAR IT!
I ISHQ IT!

And I totally enjoyed reading it!

And I have a question to blayde ji?

Are you a Magician?
You are the best writer of Love Making scenes!

Someone pls hire my blayde ji, for writing!


THANZOO FOR THE PM!

Muahs!

Love
~J

beautifully written commented onblog too.

i need the blog id yaar...

woah!!! another mind blowing OS!! great going!!!!

The way you have brought out Arnav and Khushi's love for each other is so romantic! Really missed the romance after they got married in the show and then it ended so abruptly.

wow its awesome.arnav is really caring

Aww... As usual amazing dear :)
Arnav is soo caring <3 ... The way he decided to have that baby shower as a small affair rather than making it big !! And khushi understanding him ... Can any couple be like this ?! **wondering** He helping her to wear the saree and khushi getting angry .. That moment was cute !!! Loved nk's part too.. Hehe .. the way arnav asking her whther he would make a good father and khushi's reply to that was Amazing :) the way she said about those times where he helped the kid to buy pigeons was juz faabbb !!! In short <3 <3<3 it ... Thank for the pm !!

Awesome.. They are to good when it came to get intimate...
I realy loved this os story of yours... Waiting for next..