D3 SS: What if? *Re-writing* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Yeh myatery man kaun hai ????

Confusing promo as you have rightly stated :) :)
Ab jaldi jaldi update karo :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)


Abbe yaar, tum log CS kyun nehi padh te ho?!
Update karti hoon... I mean karoongi! Shant rakh meri maa. Shanti, shanti. 😆
No problem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

I'll try my best.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
i read all ur stories today
but seriously in confusion
fab yaar first time sum1 made me confused
continue soon for god's sake
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: my_angel...

i read all ur stories today

but seriously in confusion

That's my specialty.

fab yaar first time sum1 made me confused

😲 Wow yaar, I'm honored.

continue soon for god's sake

Arre I will yaar! Shaanti, shaanti. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Drunken Confessions

Shekhawat Farmhouse

As everyone walks over to the living room, Rey says "I'll take Taani to her room." As Rey carries Taani upstairs, Varun asks "Does he even know where Taani's room is?" "He'll find it" says the D3 gang.

Varun just shrugs his shoulders and takes his sister upstairs. Vishaka goes over and helps him, making his eyes go wide. "What are you doing?" he whispers. "Helping you" she whispers back, "Now shut up and go along with it."

"Okay, I'm going to go take Swayam to his room" says Sharon. "You need some help Shar?" asks Rinni. "No, I'm good" responds Sharon, somehow getting Swayam up to his room.

"Okay, how many rooms are left?" asks Vicky. "Let's see, there's Taani and Swayam's grandparents' room" says Karan. "Me and Neha can take that room" says Rinni. "Alright, then we have Swayam's parents' room" explains Karan. "Me and Amar can take that room" says Bharat.

As the four teens head to their respective rooms, Karan says "We also have Taani's mom's room." "I think I'll take Simmi there" says Nilesh. "Okay, so then we just have the spare guest room left which Varun and Aliya's sister usually uses" explains Karan. "How about you and me take that room?" asks Vicky. "Sure" says Karan, "Saara, you're stuck with the living room couch."

Before Saara can even protest, Karan and Vicky run away, clearly out of earshot. Saara groans, and makes herself comfortable on the couch.

*not done yet*

Edited by White_Flower - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice story
love part1
hehe would.love to c jealous rey
plz update nxt part soon n plz do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Loved it
Updated soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Ab update kar bhi do
Pata nahi kitne mahino se next chapter aane ka wait kar rahi hun
I am so glad you are rewritting it
Its really a captivating concept
I like the change in cs sounds interesting
Update soon
Dying to read it
Pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: taarey17

Ab update kar bhi do
Pata nahi kitne mahino se next chapter aane ka wait kar rahi hun
I am so glad you are rewritting it
Its really a captivating concept
I like the change in cs sounds interesting
Update soon
Dying to read it
Pm me if possible


Arre, kitne mahino se nehi, kitne saalo se bol! 😆
Yeah, my writing style is different aka better, so I wanted to kind of change the story.
Of course I'm going to PM you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Don't worry, I will.

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