D3 SS: What if? *Re-writing* - Page 6

Originally posted by: princess_tara

read all part
just love this story
eager to read more

hey diya

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

hey diya

i didn't knew you updated after part 1

ok res

i'll read everthing and comment

i just went on the page one and saw the index

so res

Originally posted by: White_Flower

Okay.

Happy reading!

I'm excited to see your comment.

And check out the CS because I made some changes there.

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

ok Diya

i'll check and comment on everything

thanks a ton for updating this

if possible even do continue "mera mann kehne laga pyaar ho gaya" if i am not wrong with the title

god its been so long since i read it

and have no plans untill you plan to continue

though i was kind a confused with the cs out there but still it fascinated me

Originally posted by: White_Flower

Okay!

Omigosh, I've sent all the mods PMs, more than 3 times, to re-open the topic, but non of them have replied or re-opened the topic.

Aw,,, Thank you!

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

put a request in the general querries complaint thread that might work its in fanfiction forum your thread is in fan fiction forum so that would help try and see

Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

ok unres

so lets start with the cs

i love T's character even Taani seems interesting

disown i didn't expect it after change but that would be interesting to read

Varun Dhawan and Aliya Bhat my ever favourite

i practically love Varun after ABCD 2

Sana Saheed not bad

as Anya she would probably more appealing than the girl who played Anya in buddy project

you know Anya is a strong character and the person playing it should be strong herself

i don't know about that girl but Sana ya she is

i loved Mohena and Karan in Jhalakh so that would be a treat to have them together

you changed Taani's character but i like the change

ya one more thing i remember it was ritwik before Vishal and it was Jeh playing before Arjun so there are places where you have forgot to edit Jeh with Arjun so correct that

other things are really captivating

read it all In one go...
phewww...

it was nyc...

CS Was a bit too long...seriously...I think u should just cut off more than half of CS Coz it usually discloses most of the story...

BT ya it ws nyc :)

all the chapters were well written :)

just waiting fr next :D