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amazing cs dear...
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Rockstar

Taani nervously looked around, hoping that her plan would work. She takes a deep breath and says "Me and Rey can't be couple because I'm already in a relationship with someone."

Everyone was shocked. But not more than Rey. That tingling, protective feeling he has when it comes to Taani... Well it was on full power at that very moment. "What the hell?! How can Taani be in a relationship with someone? What if... No! Taani cannot be in a relationship with Shivam Dutta of all people" he thinks.

"Then tell us who is" someone in the crowd says. "Yeah" says someone else, "We want to know whether or not he actually exists." "Who are you to question me about my personal life?" demands Taani, shutting them up. Or so she thought.

"We just want to know what type of guy our GS is interested in" one of the guys in the crowd says, winking. The gang struggles to keep their anger in check, as to not ruin whatever Taani's doing. Swayam and Rey were making it especially hard for them.

"Why? Give me one good reason why I should tell you people about my personal life. All you want is something to gossip about right? The go look through magazines for the latest on celebrities. Which celebrity just got surgery, who's dating who... I'm sure that's much more interesting than my dating life" says Taani.

"Chill girl! We only asked for a name" says another student. Other students murmur in agreement and also start asking for a name. Taani start to panic and looks around the room for help.

As Sharon was about to get on stage and go into Siren-mode and help out her friend, an unfamiliar voice walks up behind the crowd and says "Yeah Taani, tell us. Okay fine, if you don't want to tell everyone, then I will. I'm Taani's boyfriend, and if anyone has a problem with that, please don't hesitate to keep your mouths SHUT!"

Everyone's shocked by this guy's attitude. An attitude only Reyansh Singhania could match. The crowd disperses, with guys dragging ogling girls away from the scene.

The D3 gang is shocked by this boy's appearance. But Swayam and Vishaka are the most shocked due to the fact that they actually know the stranger.

They're all broken out of their trains of thoughts when Taani walks over to the guy. Rey's hoping for a kick, a punch, a slap... Even a lecture will suffice. But what Taani does next shocks him.

Taani smiles at the boy, and gives him a tight hug. Once she pulls away from the hug, she asks "Hey Rockstar! Did you miss me?"

Edited by foreverlazy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read the CS and the first part, seems really interesting, n omg soo many characters, I'm guessing ill get used to them as I cont reading, waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rockstar (continued)

"Of course I missed you you idiot!" exclaims Varun. Taani's mouth goes wide as she starts hitting Varun with her bag "Did you just call me an idiot?" she demands. "Well, I can't exactly respond unless you stop hitting me" says Varun.

"No, keep hitting him!" shouts Swayam. Taani and Varun turn to Swayam in shock. "Bhai?" asks Taani. "Swayam, tu kaisa dost hai yaar?" Varun says dramatically. "Main kaisa dost hoon?" he demands, taking Taani's bag from her as he starts to Varun with it, "Saale kamine, tu kaisa dost hai? Why didn't you tell me that you guys were dating?" Taani and Varun look at each other, and then burst out laughing. Swayam looks at them, confused. Noticing her brother's expression, Taani stops laughing and asks "Bhai, do you seriously think that I'd ever date this idiot?"

Rey feels a strange wave of relief pass over him.

"What do you mean?" asks Swayam. "What she means is, we're not really dating" explains Varun.

"What?!" everyone except Varun and Taani demands.

"Calm down guys" says Taani, "Let me explain."

An hour or so ago

"Shit, shit, shit!" Taani mutters to herself, pacing back and forth in the Fire Escape kum Lover's Point, "What am I going to do?" She stops pacing, and sits down on the steps. As she goes into deep thought, Bubble Taani appears and says "Soch kya rahi hai Taani? Call Varun!" As Bubble Taani disappears, Taani asks herself "Varun? Why would I call him?"

Once again, she goes into deep thought, until she finally gets an idea. She calls Varun. When Varun picks up, she says "Varun, I need your help." "Well hello to you to Miss Ambolkar" says Varun, "It's so nice to hear from you. Me? I'm doing just fine." "Shut up!" yells Taani, "Okay, so, I'm in the middle of a big problem right now, and it's causing a lot of drama." "So, what do you want me to do?" asks Varun. "I want you to pretend to be my fake boyfriend" says Taani. "Excuse me?" asks Varun, "Are you high or something?" "Varun, just get here quickly, please! I really need you to do this for me" begs Taani. "Fine, I'll be there" says Varun.

Present Time

"Oh, so that's what happened" says Sharon. "You could've told us" says Rey. "Sorry" says Taani, "It kind of slipped my mind." "Having a fake boyfriend slipped your mind?" yells Rinni. "A little louder Rinni" mutters Vishaka, "I don't think Canada heard you!"

"Ah Vishaka" mutters Varun, "Charming as always I see." Taani elbows him in the ribs, and glares at him.

"Well, whatever" says Vicky, "All out problems have officially been solved." "I know" says Nil, "I kind of want to party." Simmi rolls her eyes and says "You always want to party."

Before anyone else can say anything, the peon walks towards. "VP sir has called the GS, AGS, CS, and ACS, to his office" he says, walking away.

Taani, Rey, Swayam and Sharon look at each other in confusion. They walk to VP sir's office.

VP sir's office

"Finally all this drama is over" says Vp sir, "And Taani I must say, you handled the situation very professionally." "Thank you sir" says Taani, smiling.

"Sir, why did you call us here?" asks Rey. "Because the college is going to be closed for the next two days due to some small renovations" explains VP sir. The four teens nod and leave.

Corridor

As the four members of student council walk out, the gang and Varun pretend that they weren't listening in on the conversation. Taani rolls her eyes and says "Guys, we know you heard everything." Sharon, Rey and Swayam burst out laughing at this.

"Okay, fine" says Simmi, "Since you guys already know that we know, let's talk about what everyone's going to do for the next four days.

"I'll tell you what I'm doing" says Swayam, "I'm going to be spending some much needed quality time with my best-friend, and my baby sister." With that, he drags said best-friend, and said baby sister away.

"Okay, so what ale we doing?" asks Amar. "We're all going to my farmhouse, so start packing! We'll all meet at my house tomorrow morning" commands Sharon.

Shekhawat House

"So what's the plan bhai?" asks Taani. "Well, planning is kind of usually your job" says Swayam. Taani throws a pillow at her brother. Varun starts to laugh, but stops when he sees Swayam glare at him.

"Since you guys are kind of useless, I'll tell you what we're doing" says Taani, "We're going to the family farmhouse. We'll invite Aliya because I know for sure that she's free. Bhai and di are both busy, and so are Anya and Arjun." "Okay" says Swayam, "Then we'll just have to check with Karan and Saara." "Ew, why?" groans Varun.

Taani and Swayam look at each other, and push him off the couch, causing him to fall. "I hate you guys" he mutters getting up.

Edited by foreverlazy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its nice dear.,lovd it...updte soon
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loved it..
plzz continue soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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intersting cs
do cont. soon

Edited by dh19 - 9 years ago
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Vacation Time

"Ugh, why can't you girls ever pack light?" complains Nil, putting one of the bags in the trunk of Sharon's car. "Because you boys just throw random things in your bags, while we pack the necessities" says Simmi. "Yeah, like the first aid kit" says Neha. "No one's going to hurt" protests Vicky. "Knowing you morons, you'll probably start a fight the minute someone speaks to you" says Vishaka.

"Okay guys!" says Rey, coming in between them, "Let's not start this trip off with a girls vs boys fight." "Rey's right" says Sharon, "That's why, the girls are coming with me, and you boys are going with Rey." "Smart move Shar" whispers Rey.

Shekhawat House

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"Tans, why do all you girls find it so necessary to bring four years worth of things into a four day trip?" asks Varun. "Because we know how to pack smart, unlike you brainless buffoons" retorts Taani. "Brainless buffoons?" asks Varun. "Oops, sorry. I meant boys!" snaps Taani.

"Guys, stop fighting!" exclaims Swayam, "Varun, start the car. Princess, get in the backseat."

Sharon's Car

Sharon hears her phone ringing, and asks "Can someone please answer my phone for me?" Simmi answers the phone, and says "Oh hey Anya! We're just headed to your farmhouse right now."

What Anya says next makes Simmi's eyes go wide. "What do you mean it's being renovated?!" she demands. Everyone's eyes go wide at this. Simmi turns the phone off, and Vishaka demands "Didn't you know about this?" "No, I didn't" says Sharon, "Call the boys."

D3 Gang

"Sharon, how could you be so irresponsible yaar?!" demands Rey. "I'm sorry na" says Sharon. "Rey, stop yelling at her" says Bharat. "Yeah, it's not going to make anything better" says Vicky, nodding his head in agreement. "Sorry" mumbles Rey. "What are we going to do?" whines Rinni. The gang thinks about what they're going to do, when they hear some familiar voices coming their way.

"Varun, you're such an idiot!" yells Taani. "You really want to call the guy who's carrying your bags an idiot?" asks Varun raising his eyebrows. Swayam looks like he's about to kill them both.

"Hi guys" Amar says awkwardly. "Save me!" yells Swayam, dropping his bags and jumping into Amar's arms as Varun and Taani's eyes throw daggers at him. "So, what's your unfortunate story?" asks Vishaka. "SOMEONE forgot to fill up their tank properly" says Taani, gritting her teeth. "Ah" says Vishaka, ever so familiar with Varun and his gas tank issues.

"Anyways, where are you guys headed?" asks Varun. "Well, we thought we were going to Sharon's farmhouse, but apparently it's being renovated" explains Rey, grinding his teeth together. "Oh, well, we're going to Taani and Swayam's farmhouse" says Varun, "You guys are welcome to join us." "Are you sure?" asks Sharon. "Of course" says Taani, "Besides, we're all just helping each other out! You guys have cars, and we have a farmhouse."

"Well, now that that's decided, we only have two seats left in Rey's car" explains Vicky. "Make Taani squeeze in with the girls!" yells Swayam, "Or put her in the trunk! I really don't care. Just don't put her in the same car as Varun. Especially if I'm in it." "Bhai!" yells Taani. "I love you, but you're a nightmare" says Swayam, getting in Rey's car.

Shekhawat Family Farmhouse

"Oh look, Aliya's already here" says Taani, noticing her best-friend's car. "Who's Aliya?" asks Rinni. "My sister" replies Varun. "And I think she brought Saara and Karan with her" says Swayam. "Who?" asks Simmi. "Our friends" explains Varun.

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The minute they step inside the house, they hear a girl scream "Bhai!" at the top of her lungs. The girl jumps into Varun's arms as he spins her around. "I missed you Angel" he says, putting her down. "So, Neha guessing that that is Aliya" says Neha. "Neha guessing right" says Swayam, as goes over to hug his best-friend. "Hey Angel" he says, giving her a tight hug.

And if it gets any tighter, Sharon would throw something.

"Hey Romeo" says Aliya, pulling away from the hug.

"Okay, why am I always the last person to get a hug?" whines Taani, crossing her arms over her chest. "Aw"' says Aliya, chuckling as she gives her best-friend a hug, "I missed you the most!" "Liar" says Taani, "You missed bhai the most." Aliya turns slightly pink at the statement, which only Taani and Sharon notice.

"Hey, remember us?" says Vishaka. "Oh right, we completely forgot!" exclaims Swayam, "Guys, this is Aliya." "And Aliya, these are our friends Rey, Sharon, Simmi, Rinni, Neha, Vicky, Bharat, Nilesh, Amar and Vishaka" says Taani, gesturing to each person as she says their names out loud. "Nice to meet you all" says Aliya, her eyes not meeting Vishaka's.

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"Yo, what are we, chopped liver?" asks a girl, walking towards them with a boy beside her. "Saara and Karan?" asks Simmi. "Yup"replies Swayam. "Ugh, does this mean that I have to re-introduce everyone to you guys?" groans Taani. Karan chuckles and says "No you lazyass. We heard when you were introducing Aliya." "Thank god!" exclaims Taani.

"So, what are we doing tonight?" asks Rinni. "Guys, any ideas?" asks Sharon. The girls look at the boys who look at them with blank faces.

"Karan, isn't your brother's nightclub around here?" asks Aliya. "Oh yeah! We can totally go there" says Karan, "Go get ready girls." "Girls?" asks Saara, "What about you guys?" "We don't take five hours to get ready like you girls" says Varun. "What?!" demands Taani, "We don't take five hours to get ready."

"Yeah" says Sharon, nodding her head in agreement, "Maybe Simmi and Rinni, and even Neha can take ages to get ready. But that doesn't mean that all girls take a long time to get ready." "Yeah" says Vishaka, "Sharon only takes half an hour, and I take fifteen minutes." "Same with me and Taani" says Saara. "Yeah" says Taani, "Only Aliya takes two hours to pick out an outfit. And then an hour for jewelry. And then another hour for shoes and a purse. Then another three hours for hair and makeup... But it only takes her 45 minutes to get ready."

"Only 45 minutes?" asks Rey, feigning surprise. "Shut up" mumbles Taani. "Whatever guys" says Swayam, "We're going to leave in an hour or so, so hurry up and get ready."

Guest Room (unofficially Aliya, Anya and Saara's shared room)

"Well, this is a colorful room" says Rinni, as she, Simmi, Aliya, Vishaka, and Saara walk into the room. "Well, it might be a guest room, but it's unofficially my shared room with Anya and Saara" explains Aliya. "Anya? Why does that name sound so familiar?" asks Simmi.

"Anya Gujral" says Aliya, a sense of pride in her voice "She's pretty famous. You've probably heard of her." "Well, yeah that" says Simmi, "And she's Sharon's cousin." "You're kidding" says Aliya. Vishaka, remembering Aliya's dislike towards Sharon, and Simmi's protective nature of her, quickly butts in and says "Come one guys, let's get ready, or else the boys are going to taunt us forever saying that they're right."

Aliya and Simmi look at each other strangely, but decide to just gets dressed instead. "Nice save" Saara whispers to Vishaka. "Thanks" she whispers back.

Half an hour later

"You guys still aren't dressed?" demands Rinni. "We don't exactly have something to wear to a nightclub" says Saara. "Yeah, neither of us brought a dress" says Vishaka. "Really?" asks Simmi. "Go to Taani's room you guys" says Aliya.

Taani & T's Room

"Aw, Neha. You didn't bring a dress?" says Taani. "The thought didn't cross my mind" says Neha, "But you look great Taani. And so do you Sharon! Kind of like a modern day Greek goddess come to life." "Thanks Neha" says Sharon, "Here, let me see if I have anything for you."

"Na baba na! Maine tumhare kapre dekhe Sharon, aur voh mujhe nehi suit karenge" protests Neha. "Well, then I might have something for you" says Taani, "Come on!"

Half an hour later

"Neha, you look amazing!" exclaims Sharon, "Great job Taani." "Thanks" she says, "Vicky is going to die!" Neha started to panic and shouts "My babu's going to die?! Nehi!" "It's an expression Neha" says Taani, calming down her friend. "Yeah, a figure of speech" adds Sharon. "Oh" says Neha.

"Okay, Aliya told us to come here because we have nothing to wear" says Vishaka, coming in to Taani and T's room. "Let me guess, you guys didn't bring a dress either?" asks Neha. "Do we look like we wear dresses?" asks Saara. "Point taken" says Neha.

"Alright girls" says Taani, taking some clothes out of her cupboard, "Go get dressed."

15 minutes later

"You know, I think I might actually be okay with this" says Vishaka, looking at herself in the mirror. "Duh! Because you look hot" exclaims Sharon. "Thanks Shar" says Vishaka, slightly blushing as she fixes her hair. "Now about your shoes" begins Sharon, but Vishaka immediately glares at her and says "I don't wear heels."

Sharon groans and says "Well you need shoes! Go borrow Rinni's." Vishaka thinks about this for a moment, then shrugs her shoulders and says "At least she has sensible heels."

"No way Taani! I look awful" shouts Saara. Taani rolls her eyes and says "Come on Saara, you look great!" Saara comes out of the bathroom, and says "No, I look repulsive." "You look cute" says Neha. "And I repeat, repulsive" says Saara, grabbing a pair of Taani's sneakers.

"Oh no you don't!" exclaims Sharon, taking the sneakers away from her, "We're all wearing heels. Go back to the other room and borrow Rinni's shoes."

Guest Room

"This is what you call sensible?!" demands Saara, as she puts on the shoes. "Trust me, it's as sensible as heels get" says Vishaka. "Hey, at least you're wearing heeled boots instead of actual heels" says Simmi. "I am so going to have blisters" complains Saara. "Welcome to girl world honey" says Aliya, as the girls walk out of the room.

Downstairs

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When the girls arrive downstairs, they see that only Varun, Bharat and Amar are ready. "Oh, so those idiots complain about us girls taking forever, when they're not even ready yet!" exclaims Simmi. "I know right!" shouts Vishaka, "Such hypocrites." Varun, Bharat and Amar slap their foreheads and remind themselves to kill the other guys.

Suddenly, Varun sees Saara and says "What the hell happened to you?" "Laugh and I'll destroy you" warns Saara, but Varun doesn't seem to be fazed by this. "Why do you actually look like a girl?" he asks. Saara glares at him as do the other girls. "What?" asks Varun, ever so innocently, "The girl's wearing heels! Saara Dutta is wearing heels!"

"We get it" snaps Saara, "How am I supposed dance in these?" "Like this" says Varun, grabbing her hand, swiftly moving his feet as Saara tries to follow with her heels. "Alright alright, I get the point" says Saara, laughing as Varun spins her. "Good" says Varun, letting go of her.

Due to being spun around for so long, Saara gets slightly dizzy and stumbles, but a strong pair of arms prevent of her from falling. And who is the owner of these strong arms? Why Saara's best-friend Karan of course!

"You okay?" he asks her. Saara smiles and says "I'm fine." Karan looks at her strangely, then glares at Varun and says "Let's go guys."

Edited by foreverlazy - 9 years ago
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Superb part di
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Update soon n PM me
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awesome start please continue soon and pm me

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