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Posted: 12 years ago
And I love Angst. I missed this FF and I'm glad I'm back to writing it.


We missed you and this story too. Welcome back. This update about Khushi was so sad and her lonely life that she learned to live just breaks my heart.

I hope Arnav finds out everything about her, understands his importance in her life and fulfills his responsibility that he has until now abdicated. This was probably the best birthday she remembers ever having.

The image of her walking to her cottage in rain while he is being fussed over is so shaming and yet such a reality of life.

Dadi though is a guardian angel for Khushi and I hope she also becomes a fairy godmother.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back! Hope you had a great vacation.

You sure didn't waste any time in evoking such emotions. Reading about Khushi's past just about broke my heart. Reading just how much she NEEDED Arnav was simply heart wrenching. I loved it. Your ending was equally sad with Khushi able to run away but I liked how Arnav realized just how alone she was and is. I'm still uncertain how this could work with SO many obstacles between the two, but of course being the hopeless optimistic I'm confident you'll find a way..I hope!
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Posted: 12 years ago
While reading Khushi's past,my heart wrenched in pain.How did a little girl handle such pains?!😭
Felt very bad for her.
Hats off to Madhumati Ji.Being poor herself,she didn't show her back to Khushi.
Loved how unknowingly Arnav became a solace to Khushi.
Worried for their present.Hope Arnav will realize his feelings soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lvd d kiss 😃
Amazing update
cntnue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
God.. I missed this ff soo much.. Thank God you decided to continue with it..
What an amazing update... It was everything I had hoped and imaginef and much mores..kudos to your wonderful writng. Hoping to read the next update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
MOL Harmony, how was the harmony in mars. Did marcian treat you well.

Good lord you like angst, angst one holds will always provide courage and strength, the past of kushi that was unpredictable, I was expecting they meet an accident but taking thier life is real shock. Hell the life would have been in that age, first to process what is death and topmost neither parent was there at least if you have sibling, can expect the sharing. But her position musn't happen to any one let it be in fiction alone.

Arnav, combing her, tieing pony tree, naming her kukku and the emotion stir of kushi can't be explained better, you wrote with right dash of emotion.

The share of latent willingness started to surface let not hope somebody stone in the calm pond. I can hope only, you angst lover sure must be planning to throw differt size of stones to make different sizes of waves. Bring it on I am also the angst loving reader.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I missed this story and glad you are back.

Poor Khushi so sad what happened in the past with her and her mum and dad...from fairly rich background to almost poverty is a big jump and suddenly a person belongs to a different class. Sorry state of affair.

Khushi got a real and proper kiss as a present from Arnav on her birthday and he did't have enough nerve to give her the earrings.
Loved the whole scene of kiss in the rain.

The way he saw the vast difference between Khushi's situation and circumstances to his and the realisation was written so naturally and well, and he is also right to think that he needs to cover a mile.

By the way when is Lavanya coming to India. That will cause more complication but then that situation might just help them to realise the true extend of their feelings for each other.

I am glad dadi was there asking about Khushi, at least she genuinly cares for her.

Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
U made me cry though
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's past is so sad and heartwrenching. She finally got to have a happy time on her birthday with the one person she has loved for so long! The last line sounds very promising - about happier times for Khushi?
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Posted: 12 years ago
When ???!!!

Welcome back ... hope you had a great time where ever you were ... 😆
i don't need to say that TTB was greatly missed by ALL your readers ...

Khushi's past was so so sad ... but when people are in the throes of total
despair they resort to what they think is the only solution ... Suicide ...
not realising that it is just an easy way out ...
In just a matter of hours poor K's life changed ...
Thank God for Madhumati taking her in ...

Right from childhood Arnav has only seem Khushi as ...
"My own personal doll, a living talking doll!" ...
let's see now how he manages to bridge the gap that is present
between them both ...

Thanks ML ... 🤗

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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