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SIMI

@dieforasr

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

awesome...It may take time to cross the miles...but he will...

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Nikki

@Chocolate...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

i hate angst! 😔

but i love ur story.

tuff love...

god i hate it when arnav and khushi can't be together, it's just aweful.

the part was gr8 and i'm glad u r back, i hope u had a good trip!

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Welcome back dear...amazing update,khushi had heart wrenching past and to top of it arnav left her for 15 years...arnav khushi getting intimate and its really sad that she had only him and he had everyone to care about...pony tails as coconuts :p buddy me and do pm me next pleaseee

Edited by Barun__pardeep - 12 years ago

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Welcome back I missed ur story..

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

i actually had tears in my eyes reading d update...i hope arnav crosses d miles before its too late like last time!! plz update soon!!!!

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

hope arnav will come to Khushi this this time.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

So u r back after the break with an amazing update.

I didn't expect Khushi's past was so phenomenal. If she was born as poor and lead a life of poor then it is more easy to adjust with that life. But if u born as rich and later on forced to lead a life of poor it is hard to adjust. I really admire Khushi cause despite of all ill experience she still possess a positive belief. As Arnav realised he have to cross lots of hurdles to reach Khushi.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Heartcrunching update.I feel for Khushi even more.Par Bhagwan ek haath se cheen tha hai,toh phir Dusri haath se deta bi hai.Her parents must have gone,bt she was blessed by arnav,who she equally considered him to be her world..and hers revolving around him.

I like how you played her memories of parents,and Arnav in past and converged it into present where both were in rain,floating in their bubble.The kiss was pure,love ,and sweet.
The desire evident in touch ,gaze,hug they shared.

The loved the small exchange in Car.And once again the difference in their world,where al his family waiting for him,whereas she was left alone ,walking to her home.