I read your entire story in one go...
i must say its a beautiful love story.
there so much of innocence in they way you have portrayed Annyav and Kukku's childhood.
And difference in status and the damn society...
Their love has blossomed over this few weeks, and im glad that they have realised it.
and im sooo happy that the Khushi in your story is not holding back her feelings just because of society pressures. though initially she tried, but thats bcoz Arnav was pretending that he doesnt remember her.
Girls are always expected to give up on things.
But im so happy with this Khushi...
i loved the part on the handicapped kids, they definitely need love more than money and facilities.
i also loved thier date where Khushi takes Arnav out.
the list is long on all that i love about this story.
Now they are surely writing their own love story...
Coming to the suspense of this story waiting for it to unfold.
but it looks like the person responsible for this is someone from the family.
which is why the little Arnav was in a state of shock, and cudnt raise his voice aganst him, he cudnt garner the courage to save HIS Khushi...
looking forward to read more...
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