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Posted: 12 years ago
A very warm Welcome to you...


The Past...hurtful and sad but a light somewhere in the tunnel...made her smile...and gave her happiness...even though it was short livid...


The Present...seeming like changing now and showing a beautiful rainbow...I hope to see Khushi smile again...


And the future...giving her all the happiness she deserves...and may the butterfly fly to new heights...

Thx for this amazing FF...so happy that you are back..Racheal😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
To be honest I've not finished the chapter as I'm all emotional after reading the FB part.
What a sad picture. Reading this FF I realize how immature I am !

I was so focussed on Arnav and his family, that I forgot that Khushi did also have a family. Her Family seemed so perfect and yet !

Suicide ...
That's a very sensitive topic. But I'm very upset with Khushi's parents. How could they come down to KILL their daughter ?? And committing suicide is never a solution to your problems !
I don't know if they can see her from where they are, but I'm sure now they regret their step seeing what their much loved child is bearing.

That little Khushi who was dolled up was left without anyone except Buaji. Khushi has gone through so many difficulties, yet she's so strong minded ! And I understand why she cares so much for that orphanage children. She wants to give them the love which she missed.
I really admire her.

Now I understand why she LIVES for Arnav, because he's the one who gave her the attention she needed, the care, the love she longed for.
He was the one wo called her Kuku she wished to hear it from her parents.

He was the light at the end of the tunnel.


Molten you're great.
I'm glad to be your reader.
I will comment on the rest of your chapter later.

edit : I corrected all my english fault as I was very sleepy yesterday writting it


Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back.. Wonderful chapter.

Heart goes to khushi...she deserves happiness...waiting for next chapter from now on
jenshad thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
It Was So Saddening :( Khushi Lost Her Parents & She Survived ; O No Relatives Wanted To Accept Her :( SO MEAN!! Thank God Bua Jee Took Care Of Her . The Whole Coconut Tree Scene Was Super Cuteee . Ohh, So Her Parents Used To Call Her Kukku & When Arnav Called Her The Name She Remembered The Reflection Of Her Parents . That's Touching ā¤ļø

They Can't Get Enough Of Each Other . You Wrote It SO BEAUTIFULLY!! It's So Cute To Read That Arnav Wants Her To Call Him With His Name 😳 The Last Bit Was Sad :( How Everyone Were There For Arnav, Nut None For Her Like Always, From Her Childhood; So Broken & Lonely In Her World 🄺 When Will He Give Her The Gift? It's Her Birthday, So I Was Hoping That He Will Give It!!

Good To Have You Back; Update Soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
More than you, I missed this ff which was very close to my heart...keep updating as soon as possible. I'm starving for your updates... I would love to see the romantic version of arnav in winning khushi's heart... she deserves happiness with her Annyav...pls pls pls update soon... I haven't read this update yet. will comment more after reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
man this was splendid and am glad the chapter was nothin like i expected which makes it all the more exciting ur a storyteller n u make that experience beautiful everytime
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Posted: 12 years ago
I reserved but forgot about it and hit the post reply button again. I am such a dud when it comes to IF 😭. Sorry for taking two spots.
Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have missed this FF too much...khushi was from such a family..but just due to cruelty of fate she is at this position ..an orphan...i cant stop myself from feeling for her ..and really disappointed with so called people who fail to see the another human beings behind the status quote..but thats sad realty...but its tough to see khushi like this and really worried what Arnav will do? will he be able to cross so many hurdle?or just cause Khushi another crashed dream...
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Posted: 12 years ago
you're back you're back!!!

finally something about her sar, and how painful. But he calls her kukku unknown to how close she holds it, that was beautiful. You, so beautifully, explained what arnav means to khushi, his Importance in her life.

love
Sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back... and thanks for updating...khushi's past is painfull didnot expect this at alll.. and im dreaded to know why arnav has a gulit and what happened in their childhood ...and yes He has mile to go before im still not sure how will he cover and what does this journey hold...

u pen down words beautifully ...please continue

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