VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

this is a spectacular story ... it is d first os wich made me cry ... m xo attachd wit it!!!! manvi's pain is beautifuly potrayd... d latest part was beautifuly writtn i literaly had goosebumps while readin it... m damn sure virat wil brng bck d old manvi.. plz pm me d nxt part

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

nisha this was so senti...

feeling very bad for virman...

manvi n her condition ... she only needed virat n now her virat is there for her...

flashback was soo cute... loved it...

cont soon

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

just read all the parts..
lovely concept ... blend of past n present
its so amazing the way uve expressed manvi's emotions..it was just perfect..
its the first time that ive cried while reading a virman os ..
finally virat is back.. but poor him he was brutally tortured..
coming to part five.. the flashback was so cute..
manvi changed a lot but one thing is still the same "she could still feel his presence and that still made her nervous...waiting for her reaction when she will see his virat ...
only virat can bring her back...
you are a superb writer ❤️

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

First of all, THANK YOU for the update!!!😃

Was waiting for it don't know for how long!!!
It was very beautifully written though short but very emotional!!!!!

when you see your loved ones in pain, your senses automatically goes numb & you can't think of anything else!!

Same is happening with Virat over here!!!!! He is in so much of pain after seeing lifeless Manvi in front of him!!!!!😭

I loved the whole update!!!! Its was just amazing!!!!
The best thing I like about is the flashbacks which you give in the update, it automatically makes your update stronger & helps the reader to connect with the story like anything!!!!!

And this connection is always there in your stories!!!!!! Your stories have some depth in it & your stories directly touches our heart!!!!!!!😊
Well done gal!!!!!👏👏👏

Update soon!😊

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Awh Nisha loved it.. d way u added flashback with present fab.. Virat feeling guilty nd scared bt Manvi will never leave him.. Can this gt ny better.. I mean aftr every update.. I want more updates from u.. Awh continue soon..!!! Awesome update!!

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X_Life

@X_Life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

thanks for updating
the five year old kid in maanvi is far better than this isolated girl
it really hurts to see d one u love the most going through this much
and fear of loosing them makes u weak and scared to face it
waiting for her lost charm to return in their life

update soon

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Awesome..!!!!Loved it..! Virat is the only person who can bring her back..the flash back was nice n showed the difference in the same person it has caused...cz of absence of 1,..Virat thinks if she would forgive wonder what will happen next...Eager for next nisha..This was short...ok no complains..:) will wait for the next...!!

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Hey nisha ... 😊 I was really waiting for the updt of this os... and you did...Feeling really sad to see manvis current condition...😭 😭But virat is here...😃... and he will bring manvi... the real old manvi back..The flashback was really cute and romantic...Loved it... ❤️ ❤️But you end it in a very wrong and exciting point...Now Im really eager to read the next part...So pls cont asap and dont forget to pm me...Take care... tada...

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Rashina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

awesome update. loved the flashback. pm me

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sakshi_aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

OMG!..beautifully written! 😊 please continue soon!! and write more stuff too!! ur too good!! 😊😊 u are one of those who have made me cry wid there writings..and mind u haan i don't get emotional that easily!! 😊😊 so plzzz continue as soon as u can!! 😊😊

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