VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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sn2012

@sn2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Loved to see Virat's perspective of Manvi's past and the way Manvi sensed his presence was beautiful, I really hop eVirat is able to reach through to her and that their relationship goes back to as it was before (although I'm guessing that'll never be exactly the same as it seems both of them have been through so much.) I can't wait to read how Manvi reacts to finding out Virat is actually back. Update soon please!! xx

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Tuba KHAn

@Tuba_KSG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

waaaoohh !!! 😲
What should i say to ur UPDATE .. 🤓
This Story Is heart wrenching !! 😭😭
Soo much Emotions . 😔 👏
its always a TREAT to read ur Updates Or Stories 😊👏.. u r a great writer .. 👍🏼 with great attributes .. 😊
last update Was Awesome .. held So much Emotions n care ... 😭
From the Beginning yr , Beginning se hi Story bht emotional ti , N vo PAST lines were AAAHHH , ..
U MADE me Cry 😭
but now i can think about some healthy scenes .. 😉
Plz dO PM me when ever u Update !! 😊

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kinz

@kinz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

hey finaly your 20 days are over thank you for update

it was very emotional hope viraat will bring back his manvi again to her self again😊

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richa002

@richa002

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Finally u ve updated this story...
Loved itt
Flashback was total virmanish...
Vitman r going to meet... Awsome...
Update soon...
Pm me next tym

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CHANDANA

@chandana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Nice update!!

The flashback scene was sweet...

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nahaananya

@nahaananya

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

wow dat is call an update
u bring out the emotions so perfectly and exact...
i was just waiting for d update for a looong tym...
fabulous writer u r ...
i ve read the first four chapters numerous tymes and everytym the updates managed to make me cry out..😭.. just fab...
plzzz update and pm me ...

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kittu_11

@kittu_11

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Awesome update 😊

flashback was superb loved it

now waiting for virat and meeting meeting

continue soon thnks for the pm 😊

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Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

oh!!!the goddess of cruelty has atlast decided to show some mercy on the poor virman.
thank u so much!!!!loved the way u blend the past with the present.loved the effect of virat on manvi.i love how u write.will love u more when u'll let me read part 6.😉

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Cintila

@Cintila

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Thank u thank u thank u for updating ! Loved the update. It was just sooo emotional. Poor virat would have been so shocked to see manvi in this comdition. The flashback part was great too ! Loved it ! Simply awesome. Please do pm me 😊

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

wow nisha that was a wonderful update i was waiting fr this frm a long time nd finally u updated thank u so much fr that. Nw coming to the update it was superb as always the fb part was mind blowing luved it to the core plz do update next part soon nd pm me plz

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