VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Hey... u updted in if too... awsm.. its easy to read here and comment... this updt is as usual superb... u are a really star writer and all your stories are so luring... I loved this updt, it was so emotional... showed their love and insecrities and pain fantastically... And at the end I had a smile to read manvis confession and I am feeling so happy that they are together now ...:) Thanks for giving such a beautiful updt... cont soon, will be waiting eagerly fr t next part... take care..

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ekta_ice

@ekta_ice

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

glad that manvi is back to being her original self. both viart and manvi's emotional turmoil have been portrayed by you brilliantly. now i m just waiting for both of them to start their beautiful journey with happiness and u please take a bow as a writer

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

owww just two fabulous part, with lots of emotions...

amazing wor
im happy to see that manvi will fight for her love...

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

awesome story
loved it
superb
the way you portrayed manvi's pain
and virat 's pain, their love to each other
its awesome
continue soon

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esme

@maclean

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

OHHH MY GODD, HW I MISSED TO READ THIS,,,,, FINDED IT AND READ, CLAPS FOR THIS STORYY ****** LOVED IT ITS SOO EMOTIONAL, AND LOVABLE,,, THE ENDING WAS SUPER SUPER,,,,,, WOWO STORY :))))))))) continueee soon,,,,,

Edited by maclean - 11 years ago