VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Such a beautiful heart wrenching update Nisha ~~~~ the flashback part was soo adorable !!! i have a big smile on my face through it :DD totoal virmanish n sweet 😳 the way feelings of virat n manvi were portrayed =superb 👍🏼 Feel bad for manvi n virat !!! virat seeing manvi in this state gosh it must have been so difficult n manvi reaction on virat voice wow wow !!! the way u have described it awesome 👏👏 i really loved the update ❤️ now eagerly waiting for next update !!! as i m really looking forward :D

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

wow update dear after a long gap..
nice cute update viraaats flaskback scene was cute...and also his emotions was very well wriiten even though it was small but it was strong one.👏...nice update dear do continue soon...waiting fr ur update...😊👏

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

awesome update

love the flashback part very much

feel bad for virman...hope virat bring her back

you have written their so well

continue soon

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

nice update he was shocked when he see her
fb part was nice where if she not feeling well
then also she not sitting one place and
when he call her she feel her present near her
update soon

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archiekini

@archiekini

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

OMG!!!! The flashback brought tears in my eyes...

Please make virat bring back maanvi... I sooo cannot see here this broken... .

Loved this update...:):)

Do PM me the next part...:):) thanks in advance..:)

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kalu-devi

@kalu-devi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

thnx fr da update update was very nice the emotions u showed was very nicely u showed it bt it was a small update bt i vl wait fr ur next update bt phewwss update it soon

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Maridda

@Maridda

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hey Nisha
The update was as amazing as it always is. I'm loving the fact that virat is back and manvi is going to be alright.The flashback was so cute. Everything was so cute from virat's anger to him making manvi laugh.
Please pm me when you update.
Love
Marissa

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shreeya121

@shreeya121

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

hey...

wel i jus started readng dis os of ur... n read ol d parts in one go...

wow u r amazing...

i really wonder frm where do u get these ideas to write these stories...

n dis story of urs vry wel dipict manvi's trust on virat dat he can never leave her...

hr love for virat dat brought him back...

truely amazing story... n a grt update...

can u plz pm me as wel... plz...

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

nisha the update was soo beautiful and emotional

u described their state so well

the flashback was tooo adorable

clearly defined his nervousness which was obvious

looking forward to the next update

update soon

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shimer55

@shimer55

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

OMG I really love this!! You are a superb writer! :) I appreciate that you updated because I was waiting for it!! Thanks again! Can't wait for the next update! I want to see how Manvi will react!!! Fingers crossed!

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