VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Aashika_virman

@Aashika_virman

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

omg..virat is dead!!..i am almost crying...i have to keep reminding myself that this is a just a story...first i thought virat will come back but when i read the last line i am crying and my sis is laughing at me..stupid sis...

i made a serious note to myself that i will read your note first and then read the update...with in a second i am laughing myself and my sister is rolling on the bed..embarrassing moment..

manvi's unconditional love for virat...just loving it..i just cant get over this os..

thank you for pm..

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Superb update Nisha...👏👏👏...it was so so good...i was like so so immersed in the update...fab fab fab⭐️...really really amazing ... 👍🏼...poor manvi...😭😭...it was really emotional n heart touching...the way she was suffering...i could feel it...u have portrayed it fabulously Nisha...👏👏..omg virat died...😭😭...n the flashback part was superb duper nice and awesome...😊...it was sweet😳...beautiful n nice...😃...the way u described everything was really really brilliant...⭐️...beautifully written...⭐️...n the song...perfect ...👍🏼...really looking forward for next part...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm...😊...happy ending...😃...thank u so much for tat...😊
All the best for ur exams...👍🏼...n happy belated weed day...😊

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sapphhire

@sapphhire

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

loved it. want virat to come back.

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Aaahhh waoo dear how did u managed to write this much beautifull despite of ur hectic schedule... Seriously *Bow Down* to u...👏👏

Now update waoo seriously yet an amazing one... the desperate situation of maanvi 4 meeting him is out of the world... Every body believed that he left her but still she believes that he will cum back c0z he promised.. Thats what we called true love...

The flashback scenes once again extremely wonderfull... The scene in flashbacks when he was going n she stopped her to wait 4 virika's engagement.. That was the bestest part...

waooo her father-in-law loves her so much like his own daughter... so lucky han.. The email part aahhh so emotional n painy part it was... seriously was crying... the wedding scene in flashback was also superb..

Hawww what a shocking news virat is dead??? mene tou socha that he left her 4 reason..😲😲.. Ending scene.. yet once again fabulous n fantastic yr seriously...

Waoo happy ending hogi.. means virat wapas aaega?? n virman ek honge.. Plz jaldi jaldi ek karna unhe plz...

Plz dear continue sooner n sooner.. m waiting desperately.. N do pm me.. mjhe kabhi pm karna mat bhulna han...😆😆

N yes thanxx 4 adding me in ur pm list...😊😊

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imsid

@imsid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

wow dat was great ya
a bit sad update.. Bt m sure virat is alive
he promised her.. And virat vadhera nvr breaks promises
u are a awsum writer yah.. Love ur writing skills muaaah :* :*

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

its great os

amazing update

loved manvi trust on virat

continue soon

plz add me to ur pm list

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zaira

@zaira_virman

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Just read both the parts dear...it's an awesome OS and is very beautifully written...
It's just amazing and Maanvi loves virat so much that everything around her reminds her of him...I really want to read abt what happens between virat and maanvi and I hope virat isn't dead...
And yeah plz dear pm me...

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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

I read both u'r update,it was outstanding.The away u describe manvi pain it was fantastic.First i think that virat left manvi but after reading part 2 i was shock virat died but u told it was going to be happy ending.pm me in u'r next update.

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

wonderfull update nisha!!!!!

frm strt 2 end everythng was fantastic!!!!!

amazing story yarr!!!!

da way u expressed manvi's hurt feeling...

awesome👏👏

all da flashback parts were so cute nd sweet...

virat was such a caring guy...

nd da marriage part... aww lovely😳

omg omg omg virat's dead😲 no...

so he's an air force pilot...

oh thnk god ur note saved me..

i want a happy ending...

cont soon nd thnx fr da pm..

nd all da best fr ur xamz..

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garimaksgian

@garimaksgian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Its so emotional os. I just luv the way u descibe manvis feeling n the way u write past n present together. Its just great. I m already ur writting fan... as u hav written there will be happy ending so hoping for virat soon. Do pm me whn u cont. N thnks for writtng great os...

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