VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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keerthana

@keerthu27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

awww poor mannu.she is hurt soo much.

y virat is doing tis to manvi.

now manvi is alone sh do have her love and she missed her child.

plz tell why virat is doing tis to manvi.

who is the person watching manvi.

plz continue soon😭

Edited by keertu - 12 years ago

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afreen

@afreenkansal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

awesome update
please don't put your stories in fb because i don't have a account and i won't be able to read it
continue soon
pm me

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Awesome...
Loved it...
Thanks for update dear...
It's my exam time bt still i cannot stop myself for coming here nd read wonderful stories... Nd ur is one of them...
Continu soon...
Nd
add me ur PM list if u can...
Thanks..

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kgoyal

@kgoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Loved it dear
Do pm me
Earlier i thought virat would have died but too much of suspense plz update soon n pm me

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

oh tell me they didn't snd her their 😭
It was again an heart wrenching update
She keep reading hs email 😭 and keep writting new 😭
wen he vl b bck he will feel bad for her condition omg it sounds like maanvi 🤣
Wrng point to end girl
I guess he is coming
Evry tme maanvi ask is he bck it is an heart wrenching moment
Plz cnt sn

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Again wonderful update.I'm cring while reading the part.Manvi love virat like crazy,she can't accept that virat was die nor i'm.Hope virat come back soon.I want to see virat reaction after see manvi condition.Mail part was heart wrenching.plz pm me in u'r next part.

Edited by sumaia99 - 12 years ago

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jazzy.malhotra

@jazzy.malhotra

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

This is superb. You write beautifully. Please pm me too.

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@krystel21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

So I happened to come online and check on Chapter 2 today (finals round the corner, sorry!) and I see Chapter 3 too! Yay me!

Wonderful updates again! I love how you've shown Maanvi completely losing it over Virat's disappearance. Their love and passion for each other is that consuming that they'll land up losing everything if one isn't there, and I love how subtly you've shown it!

I haven't checked out your index yet cause of exams, but I will do so once exams are done! An engineer in the making, I'm sure you understand how taxing it is!

All the best, and here's hoping to hear more from you!

-BP

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ananya

@asr.virman

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

what do they have in there for Mr Varun Vadhera... god that part freaked me out!!

She looked outside, "It is nice outside today, isn't it?"

They looked at each other hopefully; in seven months this was the first time she'd said a sentence without mentioning him. Her next sentence however shattered their new found hope.

"He would have enjoyed this weather. When is he coming back?" She asked again.

Manvi gave them a nice Jhatka!! And did they really send her to mental hospital! its them who need to join there...

hoping it must be Virat's phone call to 'Mr. Vadhera'