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Posted: 18 years ago
After reading d update my one n only reaction is 😳.

But what curse mohini was abt. to give me? 😕

anywayz...niceeeeeeeee update 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part shirley !! Good that daniels and rose's marriage talks have materialised but renuka is there no to do somethings wrong! plus swayam and his futile efforts to make kashish feel wrong for kavya well good he did not suceed!!

Mohini what curse did she give!! 😕 😡 then diya is like this now 😳 well good that mohini lies came out!! she should be taught a lesson for that!! 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Ur updates r really good..no need to thank me..thank urself for ur skill😊

All d best 4 ur exam....yeah I am waiting(holding my breath)4 the other one 2 finish...

Only 1 month..no prob...I'll wait...

aww...😳😳..thanx 4 that..diya....so sweet of you...but i have to thank you all too..for taking the time out to read these updates😃😛😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

After reading d update my one n only reaction is 😳.

But what curse mohini was abt. to give me? 😕

anywayz...niceeeeeeeee update 👏

aww...i knew that this will be yur reaction..i so knew it...😃😛😆...but don't worry...i wont do anything that will get you to faint or give you a nervous breakdown...😊..everything will be ok..sooner or later...😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

nice part shirley !! Good that daniels and rose's marriage talks have materialised but renuka is there no to do somethings wrong! plus swayam and his futile efforts to make kashish feel wrong for kavya well good he did not suceed!!

Mohini what curse did she give!! 😕 😡 then diya is like this now 😳 well good that mohini lies came out!! she should be taught a lesson for that!! 😡

thanx sia....i'm happy that you enjoyed it...hopefully..the future parts will entertain you more...😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
As usual brilliant update shirely! 😃 👏 👏

And oh u must be excited abt graduating from High School! 😛
LOL i am still a freshman! 😆 I was so afraid of going to high school but it turned out tht its not that scary as i thought it was but still high school is hard!Too much work!
Anyways good luck to you with everything and studies!
Love you!! 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

As usual brilliant update shirely! 😃 👏 👏

And oh u must be excited abt graduating from High School! 😛
LOL i am still a freshman! 😆 I was so afraid of going to high school but it turned out tht its not that scary as i thought it was but still high school is hard!Too much work!
Anyways good luck to you with everything and studies!
Love you!! 🤗 🤗

hehe...very excited...cant wait to say bye to skool..but i spent so many years there as well...about 7 years😉..and its gonna be difficult saying bye..😭..but anyways..there is uni...3 months till uni starts...😆

anyways....thanx 4 yur comments...i wrote some episodes on my PC..but i couldnt post them bcoz my broadband is a bit messed up..but hopefully..today should be ok...rite now..i'm at skool..writing this...😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Hello when u r gonna update 😡

soon...rite now..sorry..for a long time..my wireless was a bit...you know...but now..its ok..so..updates are all written up..and i will post them😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
but sorry for any inconvenience 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 50

(The Wedding Day)

Amina: Am I looking ok?
Rose: You're looking fine
Gauri: Nah, you're looking like that Wicked Witch of the West from Wizard of Oz
Amina(startled): What?
Kashish: I'm sure Gauri is joking…aren't you Gauri?
Gauri: hmm
Kashish: exactly…and now…(curling her hair with the curling tongs): we need to curl your hair
Sia: Don't ruin it…do it nicely
Kashish: Of course, I'm going to do it nicely
Diya(in a rush): Oh God, I can't find my shoes – where did I put my shoes?
Rose: I think you put them by the bed (points): over there…
Gauri(doing her hair in a quiff): How is my hair looking?
Amina(turning around): Perfect! (smiles)

(Kashish gets Amina's hair curled up and is wearing herself a white silk lengha with silver jewellery and long curly hair)

Kashish: Ok, we need to get a move on (glances in the mirror and smiles)
Rose: Ok, mum and dad are going to explode if Gauri won't fuss about which lipstick she should wear!
Gauri: You can't rush a genius or an expert

(All girls get ready and get in the car to go to the hall)

(At the Virani house…Sujal is buttoning up his shirt)

Sujal: Shravan…you know today will be the start of something new – the start of her destruction and my revenge…the revenge for your death…

(he turns around to see his portrait on the wall)

Sujal: I promise that I will punish your murderer and that she will be suffering for all eternity and then you can rest in peace for all eternity

(Daniel comes in)

Daniel: sujal?
Sujal(clearing throat): yeah?
Daniel: you ready?
Sujal: erm..yeah..i am..
Daniel: good…shall we go?

(Kavya, Karan and Vikram step in)

Vikram: hey..lucky man…you are not nervous..are you?
Sujal(shooking his head): no..not nervous..(thinking): just impatient..to punish her
Karan: so..what are we waiting for..lets go?

(all boys go to the hall…sujal stands in the groom's place..the other boys stand behind him)

(Anurag comes up..and takes his arm with Amina's arm and walks her down to the hall)

Gauri(smiling): so memorable…
Tosh: Your sister is looking really beautiful – both make a gorgeous couple
Pooja: hmm..they do

(both Amina and Sujal stand opposite each other)

priest: Ok…we are gathered here in the holy reunion of this man and woman..first..is there anyone who objects to this wedding?

(no one replies)

priest: ok..the rings

(sujal and amina get their rings)

priest: ok..do you Sujal Virani take this woman to be your lawful wedded wife?
(sujal pauses)

kavya: sujal?
sujal: I do

priest: and you..Amina Sinha..take this man to be your lawful wedded husband?
Amina(smiling): I do..

Priest: ok..if you place your ring on her
(sujal places the ring on her finger0

sujal: I promise to give you peace and to protect and to love and respect you – and to take care of you in sickness and health until one of us part

(amina puts the ring on sujal's finger)

amina: I promise as well to give you peace and to protect and to love and respect you – and to take care of you in sickness and health until one of us part

priest: you are now husband and wife…you may kiss the bride..
sujal(a bit shocked): pardon?
Priest: you may kiss the bride..

(sujal pauses but then kisses Amina on the cheek..everyone applauses)

Prerna: amina?
Amina: yes mum?
Prerna: throw your bouquet..
Amina: oh yeah..

(now there is a saying guys that whever catches the bunch of flowers of the bride's -gets married next)

amina: here it goes…(throws the bouquet..and it falls into the hands of Rose)

rose(surprised): woah!
Gauri: You gonna get married next!
Rose: Gauri..stop it!

(Renuka looks in jealousy as Rose and Daniel exchange looks)

renuka: you know..ansh..you ought to control her
ansh: control her? Hmph! You control him (points to Daniel) Rose is my problem..
renuka: Look, Diya is already married and now Amina is married and then the elders are trying to get Rose married now..to Dan..
ansh: the evil mastermind needs time to work out his move..the way you are acting..you will lose the game too quickly!
Renuka: I have the control of my game perfectly well and I don't need your commentery or suggestion or direction for it
Ansh: now that's what I like – but work on it

(Amina is walking along with Sujal)

sujal: so, erm, you are happy now, aren't you?
Amina(smiling): of course I am, aren't you?
Sujal(thinking): not now – but soon I will be
Amina: are you thinking of something?
Sujal: yeah, I was
Amina: what?
Sujal: you and me (smiles)
Amina: sujal, just stop

(both reach the outside of the building)

sujal: right, the both of us got a honeymoon
amina: honeymoon? Now?
Sujal: yeah
Amina: where to?
Sujal: To Spain
Amina: Spain? That's lovely

(car comes)

sujal: ok, car's here – take care you lot
kavya: we will but you have a fabulous time
Daniel: but amina keep an eye on him – very wild he is
Amina: I will ok bye
Everyone: bye!

(both get in the car and the car drives off -amina holds sujal's hand and rests her head on his shoulder)

amina: I'm really happy, today? Aren't you?
Sujal: erm, yeah, happy
Amina: If only Shravan was here today
Sujal(thinking): how can he be? You murdered him after all
Amina: so, what will we do when we get there?
Sujal: it's a surprise but a life-changing surprise

((everyone goes to Virani house for a while – Ansh walks voer to Rose0

ansh: so, rose, did you enjoy the ceremony?
Rose: yeah, I did, both of them got each other and are happy and hopefully will be happy
Ansh: but you catched the bouquet – hopefully you will be married next
Rose: yeah, but I was hoping you won't rub it in
Ansh: but, I heard you are going to get married to Daniel
Rose: yeah, why? Isn't that good?
Ansh: I'm just feeling sorry for you
Rose(concerned): why is that?

(ansh is silent)

rose: why is that, Ansh?
Ansh: because I don't think he really does love you, because look…
(points to Daniel who is talking to Renuka)

renuka: so you are getting married, aren't you?
Daniel: yeah I am..why is that? Something wrong?
Renuka: no, if it was another girl then that's ok – but rose? Oh god..
Daniel(a bit annoyed): what's wrong with rose? Is she..i don't know..foolish, not clever or what?
Renuka: but look you are a Air Force Pilot – from a upper class family, rich, handsome and look at her – a ordinary journalist from a
Daniel(interrupting): upper-class family too, and besides even if she wasn't then it wouldn't bother me as much as your words are
Renuka: oh, don't misunderstand me, but there she is talking to Ansh instead of talking to you..

(over there..rose and Ansh0

rose: what, they're just talking, there's nothing wrong with that
ansh: but that's not all they have in between themselves
rose: what do you mean?
Ansh: you wait and see (pauses): tonight
Rose(thinking): tonight?

(back at renuka and Daniel)

Daniel: look they were just talking – rose can talk to whoever she wants and I don't think that there's anything wrong with that
Renuka: but just wait and see what they do when they are all alone (leaves)
Daniel: what?

How was that guys?

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