Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 44

Originally posted by: diya7000

Hey shirl dear...gr8 parts... 👏 . Post soon...btw how was ur exam?

hey..diya..finally..kahan thi tum? i know..you must have been busy..like me...my xam was ok..but...august...i will get ma results...but...they're going well..thought i'll update 2day..havent done it in a long time..and dat's not fair on you guys...😳😃

Episode 66

(episode continues from where renuka is found with her wrists cut)

pooja(coming in and shocked): OMG...i'll..i'll...call..the ambulance..
daniel: no..that will take too long..we got to take her there...pooja..you're coming wid me..
pooja: right..but i'll get the others too..ok?
daniel: ok..

(picks up renuka and carries her to the car and drives her to the hospital)

mihir: plz...will..will she be ok?
doctor: Mr Virani..we are trying our best..please...be with us..just keep calm..ok?
tulsi: mihir...renuka is going to be ok? right?

(mihir is silent)

tulsi: why are you quiet? say something...
mihir: yeah...(mute tone): of course..

kavya: i dont understand why did renuka do this?
daniel: i have no idea..
ansh: i know..
daniel: ansh..please..no time for this..
ansh: renuka loves daniel..
karan(shocked): what?

hey shirley nice part!! but thoda small part hai 👏 but chalega anyways we all were waiting for u to update!! 😊 😊 so this is also good one for us!! hey why is mihir so tensed about renuka! she is anyways dancing to ansh's tunes! whatever he says she would do as she wants daniel!

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey shirley nice part!! but thoda small part hai 👏 but chalega anyways we all were waiting for u to update!! 😊 😊 so this is also good one for us!! hey why is mihir so tensed about renuka! she is anyways dancing to ansh's tunes! whatever he says she would do as she wants daniel!

thanx sia...long time no talk...😃😛...sorry for not updating for a long time..my exams are taking place now..and the hard ones are over..so...i thought...why not update just once...also...you lot must be thinking "whats wrong wid shirls"😆😆

well..find out in da next episode..😉

(episode continues)

ansh: that's right...and renuka tried to commit suicide because you don't love her
daniel(turns away): that..is...i cant do anything about that..
kavya: but..daniel..she nearly..
daniel: well..it's..it's not my fault..ok?

(in the room...the doctor finishes bandging renuka's wrists)

doctor: there..we go..the wounds were not that bad...and..(sejal comes in)
sejal: is she ok..doctor?
doctor: yep..just fine..just keep an eye on her..just in case..
sejal: ok..
doctor: right..then..i will leave you two to it..(doctor leaves)
renuka: sejal aunty..?
sejal(evil grin): hmm?
renuka: two weeks later...daniel and rose will be getting married...i want the wedding cards details changed...the bride's name..(smiles evilly)
sejal: dont worry..i got it all under control..
renuka: and...next week...get this rose sinha out of my way...make sure..daniel hates her so much...like his brother hates rose's sister...
sejal: huh?
renuka: erm...nothing...do that for me now...

(sejal comes out...with fake tears in her eyes 😡)

tulsi: what happened? sejal?

(sejal pretends to cry and sits next to baa)

baa: beta.,.batao..kya hua? usse kuch hua?
sejal: baa...renuka ko buhut baari mushkil se bachaya hai...she nearly died..

(the boys are shocked)

sejal: isse liye..kyunki..kyunki..daniel aur renuka ek doosri se buhut pyaar karti hai..

(daniel is shocked)

daniel: what??!!
sejal: aur...yeh jaan buj kaar..rose se shaadi kar raha hai..
daniel: dad..she's lying...
ansh: daniel..i didn't expect this from you..forget about renuka..you are playing around with rose...yur own best friend..

(just then the sinha family comes in to see renuka)

mihir: erm..anurag..
anurag: yeah?
mihir: i need a word with you..

(both go somewhere private)

anurag: is renuka ok?
mihir: with great difficulty..yeah..but...daniel can't get married to rose...
anurag(shocked): why not?
mihir: why? why not?
anurag: does tulsi bhabhi know about this..?
mihir: erm..

(anurag in anger goes in front of the two families...)

anurag: didyou see..prerna? they rejected our daughter..
prerna(shocked): what? why? why?!!
tulsi: prerna..try to understand...
prerna: why..should i understand..(tears coming out of her eyes): i only tried to understand my daughter's future..and you..why are you rejecting her??!!
savita: because she is a theif!!
baa: svaita..plz..
savita: when she was a kid..yur daughters stole fruits from our gardens..

(rose just puts her arms around herself as if to brace herself)

daniel(shouts): THAT'S ENOUGH!! you..you dont have to say all this to them..and..
savita: then tell them...tell rose..you can't marry her..

(rose looks up at daniel with a shock)

rose: am i hearing the right thing?
daniel: rose? listen to me...let me explain..
rose: yes or no? answer me..
daniel: yes..
rose: right...ok...
sejal: renuka is the lucky girl to become the third daughter-in-law..

(rose quickly runs out of the hospital)

kashish: dad..mum..lets go..home..plz...we already are insulted badly..
anurag; thats it..mihir...you destroyed my daughter's life..and...our friendship..

(the sinha family turn around to go..but mihir stops them)

mihir: rose will be our daughter-in-law...

(daniel and sejal are shocked)

mihir: we will get her married to ansh..

ansh(thinking): finally!

prerna: i think thats ok..anu...it will save us from all the disgrace...
tulsi: thats right..next week..ansh and rose can get married..and next week...daniel and renuka..(looks at daniel): ok beta?
daniel(eyes filling up): o-ok..
(leaves the hospital)

(rose is walking along the street..the song "chalo ek bhar phir se" comes on..as she remembers the past moments between her and daniel..daniel sees her and ctaches up with her)

daniel(running to her): rose! rose!

(rose stops and turns around)

rose: what/
daniel: i'm sorry...
rose: sorry for what? if you didn't love me...then why all the pretending...why pretend all that?
daniel: i do...
rose: but..why reject me?
daniel: its because renuka tried to commit suicide..because she's in love with me..and i'm not..because i'm in love with you..and both of our families don't know that...
rose: then..(crying):then..what do you suggest?
daniel: i suggest...for the sake of someone else's life..and for both of our futures...i will have to marry renuka...2 weeks later..
rose: and me?
daniel: yur family have decided to get you married to ansh..

(rose is badly upset and shocked)

rose: so..you will be my brother-in-law?

(daniel sadly nods his head)

rose: and...i thought..of such great dreams of us two..(cries louder and louder)
daniel: don't cry...plz..dont..
(rose cries even louder)

daniel: no..don't do that...really dont..
(rose smiles through her teras as she remembers when both were at school..and rose was using an acid with another chemical..and daniel tells not to do that...
rose: why not?
(puts even more acid into the container..
daniel: no dont do that...really dont

rose: i thought..of us two getting married...having children..and...but..we cant have that now..
daniel: but..we're back to where we were...friends..
rose: hmm..
daniel: rose..this will be the last time we meet..next time..we meet..it will be as friends...
rose: yeah...
daniel: gud luck with yur married life...
rose: and you too..

(the song "do pal" comes on - both shake hands..and rose turns to the right back to her life..and daniel turns to the left to his own life..rose turns around and sees daniel walking away..and turns back to walking..daniel does the same..but sees rose walking away...but both stop and turn around..and run back to each other...and give each other one last hug...and go back to their families)

howz that..ppl?

Precap: Torchwood gets more confused and curious about the matter surrounding "The Doctor", meanwhile the preparations for the two weddings are in full swing and Sujal feels different towards Amina.

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Plz do read it! 😊
If u arent impressed or happy wid it..like for example...lack of romance or suspense...then do tell me..dont hesitate! 😉

Episode 53

(on their honeymoon, sujal isn't feeling well..amina stays to look after him)

sujal: seriously..really..i meant it..
amina; what?
sujal: you dont have to stay...i can take care of myself..
amina: sujal..i'm yur wife...i feel pain and joy as you do..
(sujal tries to sit up..but cant..amina...places her arms around her and helps him sit up...she holds tightly onto him..sujal feels awkward)

amina: there we go..see? you cant manage without me..
(she gets a small piece of towel and wets it with water and presses it against sujal's forehead)

sujal(holding his head): erm...i think i'm...
amina: do you need water?
(gives him water..but sujal doesn't drink it)
amina: is anything wrong?
(sits close to him..holding his hand)
sujal: i..i...feel different..
amina: different? in what way?
sujal: all of a sudden...i'm not finding comfort...i...feel uncomfortable..
amina: erm...is it...tell me..exactly..sujal..how?
(she runs her hand through his hand..sujal places his hand on amina's cheek..and pulls her towards himself..and hugs her tightly..amina..who found this shocking..thinks to herself)

sujal(hugs her even more tightly): please don't leave me..plz..plz..don't...i need you..
amina(smiles): i'm not going anywhere...ok? i'll stay here with you..
(goes to get some food for sujal..)

sujal(thinking): why did i do that? i hate her..i cant love her...so...how can i hug her like that? no..sujal...you cant be misled...you got to...avenge shravan's death...

(in the kitchen..amina thinks to herself)

amina(thinking): sujal's back! the one that i know..he's back...some stuff he's upset about..but..he still loves me...(smiles)

(back in London..Torchwood building)

tosh: pooja..we have to ask Gauri today about this doctor..
pooja: look..maybe we should give it some time...

(gauri comes)

gauri: give who or what some time?
pooja: erm...
jack: gauri...do you know anything or anyone called the doctor?

(Gauri is shocked)

gauri: the Doctor?
tosh: yes..The Doctor..no last name or no first name..but always the Doctor..who is he?
gauri: why are you asking me this?
owen: because...tosh and pooja saw him the other day..
gauri: if that is so..how does he look like?
tosh: light brown coat..brown pinstripe suit..white shirt..brown tie...converse trainers...brown hair...and always is next to a blue big box
gauri(thinking): The TARDIS!
pooja: what are you thinking?
gauri: nothing...
jack: and the other day before..you were screaming in yur sleep...like if you were falling off somewhere..
gauri: oh..i fell off by the beach..and those monstrous sharks nearly had me..and it was the Doctor..that..
(she notices everyone is looking at her..)
gauri: what?
jack(quoting her): "and it was the Doctor...that..."..well?
gauri: erm...ok...right...fine! I do know this Doctor...ok?

(leaves)

owen: Joy to the world..she finally admitted it!
jack: owen?
owen: don't "owen" me...Captain Jack Harkness..
jack: sshh...look...for some reason..Gauri is upset about this Doctor...we need to support her now..
pooja: i agree..
tosh: but we need this doctor..again

(back at sinha house...tulsi and prerna are preparing renuka's and rose's wedding dresses)

prerna: look..at that...rose's dress..isnt it pretty?
tulsi: very pretty..in that..rose will look..even more prettier...
prerna: erm..tulsi..i thought..that why not get daniel and renuka married on the same day next week..on..friday..?
tulsi: hmm...did you know..mihir was saying the same thing to me..yesterday?
prerna: really? so..that's done...

(daniel is checking messages through his phone..is passing by with kavya)

kavya: and so..i said..yeah?
daniel: yeah?
kavya: do that...yoirself..
daniel: gud job...you show him..
kavya: i so going to...

(both have a laugh..but stop when tulsi calls them)

daniel: yes mum?
tulsi: erm...me and prerna have decided to pre-pone yur wedding...
daniel: i'm sorry?
prerna: you and rose are getting married on the same day..
daniel: oh...right...(a bit upset): thats fine...doesnt make any difference...
tulsi: are you happy?
daniel: erm...is everyone else happy?
tulsi: hmm..(nods)
daniel: is rose happy?
prerna: course she is..
daniel: then so am i...(smiles a bit..and goes away..while kavya notices something different in dnaiel)

(kashish on the phone)

kashish: no...i want the hall to be decorated with red and white ribbons and balloons...and flowers in the couples' bedrooms...and...erm..
(sees kavya coming)
kashish: yeah..you do that..and i'll call you back.(hungs up): anything wrong..kavya?
kavya: yeah...something is...erm...when rose came home last night...was she a bit different than usual?
kashish: erm..normally..she sits down with us to watch Kahaani Ghar Ghar Ki..but..yesterday..she erm...just went upstairs..saying she was tired...why?
kavya: daniel..is a bit different..ever since what happened to Renuka..and then this marriage...
kashish: but...maybe...because she was in dnager..
kavya: no..thats not it...its like...rose is upset too...and ansh didnt cut his wrists or anything..she could be upset because she cant married to dan now..
kashish: they could...OMG...they're in lvoe with each other..
kavya: makes sense now...
kashish: but why did ren do that yesterday anyway?
kavya: i dont know..but you do something about rose..and i'll sort dan out..ok?
kashish: ok...right..on it..now..(smiles)

Howz dat, ppl?

Precap: A new person arrives in Karan~Diya's life, meanwhile Ansh~Renuka try to distance Daniel~Rose even more while Kavya~Kashish get closer while putting things back to where they were.

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hey shirley both the parts were very very nicely written 👏 well renuka and asnh shouldnt be succeding in whatever they are doing na!

well dear i forgot something" wishing u a belated happy birthday" sorry for that 😊 !!